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1.Scientific prediction of earthquakes【remains(A)】primitive and haphazard; however ,scientists 【can make(B)】general predictions after monitor【magnetic changes(C)】along【principal(D)】faults.
C要把monitor改成动名词形式monitoring，因为在介词after后面要接动名词、代词和名词。
翻译：虽然对地震的科学预测仍然是初级和随意的，然而科学家们在检测沿着主断层一带的磁性变化后能做出一般的预测。
2.People【who lose weight(A)】with the help of behavioral techniques like 【weighing themselves regularly(B)】 and keeping records of 【what do they eat(C)】seem to need the same techniques to keep 【the weight off(D)】.
C改为what they eat 注意名词性从句中要用陈述句语序。
翻译：那些借助诸如定期称体重和记录吃的食物这样的行为技术来减肥的人似乎也需要同样的技术来保持体重。
3.【According to a study(A)】of firstborn children , children【whose mothers expect them (B)】to learn very little as infants develop 【more slow than(C)】children whose mothers expect them to begin learning【immediately(D)】.
C 改为more slowly than 因为修饰前面的动词要用副词形式，注意用副词来修饰动词和形容词。
根据一项对第一个出生的孩子的研究，那些父母对其婴幼儿时期的学习期望很小的孩子要比那些父母期望立刻学习的孩子成长发育地要缓慢。
4.【In a report(A)】 issued by【United States Census Bureau(B)】, the chemical industry is investing 【more than any other(C)】United States manufacturing industry【in fighting pollution(D)】.
A。改为the United States Census Bureau美国人口统计局
因为由普通名词组成的专有名词要加定冠词。
翻译：在由美国人口普查局公布的报告中，化工行业比任何其他美国制造业在对抗污染方面投入都大。
5.Societies form the primitive to 【the highly civilized(A)】【have used(B)】food ,【their most essential resource(C)】,in social bonding celebrations【of all kind(D)】and in sacred rituals.
D。改为of all kinds 因为all 修饰可数名词时，名词用复数。又如：
There are flowers of all kinds in the garden.
对比：of a kind/of this kind
翻译：从原始社会到高度文明的社会都使用他们最重要的资源—食物来进行
各种社交庆祝活动和举行神圣仪式。
6.【Throughout the history(A)】,the mosquito has been not only a nuisance 【but a killer(B)】, 【carrying(C)】some of the deadliest diseases【known to man(D)】.
D。改为unknown 这道题要从意义上考虑，因为语法上所有选项都正确.
not only...but also 中的also可以省略。 carrying现在分词做状语表主动完全正确。
be known to sb为某人所熟知。
翻译：在历史上蚊子不仅是一种滋扰，而且是杀手，携带着一些不为人类所熟知的最致命的疾病。
7.The photograph revealed a group of mountain climbers who had 【strung(A)】a 【twenty-feet(B)】rope【between(C)】two【particularly(D)】dangerous peaks.
B 改为twenty-foot 因为这是合成词的构成方式：数词+单数名词 又如：a three-year-old boy
这张照片揭示了一群登山者在两个特别危险的山峰间串起一根二十英尺的绳索。
8.【During World War II(A】), many Eskimos served【in the Army or Navy(B)】;【another(C)】worked on airfields or supplied meat【to the armed forces(D)】.
C改为others 因为another意思是另一个，后跟单数名词。在这里我们要和前面的many呼应，应该用others表示另外一些人。
翻译：在二战期间，许多爱斯基摩人在陆军或者海军服役，还有一些在飞机场干活或者给军队提供肉食。
9.In spite of all the publicity【women pilots(A)】had received, 【no amount(B)】of evidence 【could convince(C)】the War Department【allow any of them(D)】into the Air Service.
D改为to allow any of them 注意搭配： convince sb of sth使某人信服某事
convince sb to do sth说服某人做某事
尽管女飞行员很受公众的关注，但是再多的证据也不足以说服美国的战争部 允许他们在空军服役。
10.【There is(A)】no doubt that the successful late eighteenth-century improvements in【spinning and weaving methods(B)】, resulting in increased production of fabrics ,【have a great effect(C)】on the inventors of 【the sewing machine(D)】.
C 改为had a great effect on 因为前面的late eighteenth-century 要求用一般过去时。
毫无疑问，18世纪末成功的改善纺纱和织布方法，造成了生产面料的增加，对缝纫机的发明有很大的影响。
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你还是问你老师吧！这种题在网上弄容易会误导你，（就算写了，你也听不懂所表达的意思）找一个专家比较好，我们都不是专业的。
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又是很诡异的改错题。
前两天也是你发的吧，不知有没有选出满意的答复啊？
其实我也很想知道标准答案，看看自己答得如何，什么时候能贴一下呀？
这次就给个参考答案吧，写那么多字太麻烦，免得费了好大的劲又得不到分，感觉不好。
何况其实很多题一看答案就知道原因了。
祝你学习进步！
1.Scientific prediction of earthquakes【remains(A)】primitive and haphazard; however ,scientists 【can make(B)】general predictions after monitor【magnetic changes(C)】along【principal(D)】faults.
这一句应该是将monitor改为monitoring，题目本身有误吧。
2. C
3. C
4. B
5. D
6. B
7. B
8. C
9. D
10.C
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1.Scientific prediction of earthquakes【remains(A)】primitive and haphazard; however ,scientists 【can make(B)】general predictions after monitor【magnetic changes(C)】along【principal(D)】faults.
把D改成along with 固定搭配 monitor改为monitoring
用科学方法预测地震尚处于初始杂乱无序的阶段，但是，科学家们能通过监测磁力变化还通过检查主要断层做出大体的预测
2.People【who lose weight(A)】with the help of behavioral techniques like 【weighing themselves regularly(B)】 and keeping records of 【what do they eat(C)】seem to need the same techniques to keep 【the weight off(D)】.
C去掉do
用行为技巧诸如定期称重和记录饭量减肥的人们看起来需要同样的技巧去瘦身
3.【According to a study(A)】of firstborn children , children【whose mothers expect them (B)】to learn very little as infants develop 【more slow than(C)】children whose mothers expect them to begin learning【immediately(D)】.
C slower
根据一项对第一胎出生的孩子的研究，那些在婴儿期不被妈妈要求学习很多东西的孩子比那些被妈妈期望很快消化所学东西的孩子要发育慢得多
4.【In a report(A)】 issued by【United States Census Bureau(B)】, the chemical industry is investing 【more than any other(C)】United States manufacturing industry【in fighting pollution(D)】.
D fighting for
美国人口调查局发布的一个报告中，在防治污染方面，化工产业要比美国任何制造工业所做的投资要多
5.Societies form the primitive to 【the highly civilized(A)】【have used(B)】food ,【their most essential resource(C)】,in social bonding celebrations【of all kind(D)】and in sacred rituals.
B USING C resources D kinds
社会从落后走向高度文明，要在各种社交庆典和神圣仪式中利用食物以及他们最重要的资源。
6.【Throughout the history(A)】,the mosquito has been not only a nuisance 【but a killer(B)】, 【carrying(C)】some of the deadliest diseases【known to man(D)】.
D unknown
整个历史中，蚊子不仅令人们讨厌，它们还是杀手，把那些不为人所知的致命疾病传染给人们
7.The photograph revealed a group of mountain climbers who had 【strung(A)】a 【twenty-feet(B)】rope【between(C)】two【particularly(D)】dangerous peaks.
C twenty-foot
这张照片向我们展示了一组登山队员在两座特别危险的顶峰之间捆绑了一条20英尺长的绳子
8.【During World War II(A】), many Eskimos served【in the Army or Navy(B)】;【another(C)】worked on airfields or supplied meat【to the armed forces(D)】.
C others
二战期间，很多爱斯基摩人在陆军或海军服兵役； 其他一些在飞机场工作或者为陆军军队提供肉
9.In spite of all the publicity【women pilots(A)】had received, 【no amount(B)】of evidence 【could convince(C)】the War Department【allow any of them(D)】into the Air Service.
D to allow
尽管女飞行员可以参加空军一事广为人知，但是仍没有大量证据说服美国陆军部批准她们中的任何人加入空军
10.【There is(A)】no doubt that the successful late eighteenth-century improvements in【spinning and weaving methods(B)】, resulting in increased production of fabrics ,【have a great effect(C)】on the inventors of 【the sewing machine(D)】.
D 去掉the
毫无疑问，十八世纪末纺织技术的成功改善大大促进了纺织品的生产，对缝纫机的发明者产生了巨大影响
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1.Scientific prediction of earthquakes【remains(A)】primitive and haphazard; however ,scientists 【can make(B)】general predictions after monitor【magnetic changes(C)】along【principal(D)】faults.
1、科学预测地震仍然落后和随意 ，不过科学家们可以通过监测主要断裂磁场的变化做出一般的预测。
答案：A 去掉”s”
2.People【who lose weight(A)】with the help of behavioral techniques like 【weighing themselves regularly(B)】 and keeping records of 【what do they eat(C)】seem to need the same techniques to keep 【the weight off(D)】.
人们减肥借助于行为技术比如定期秤体重和做饮食记录似乎需要相同的技术去减轻体重。答案：C 去掉”do”
3.【According to a study(A)】of firstborn children , children【whose mothers expect them (B)】to learn very little as infants develop 【more slow than(C)】children whose mothers expect them to begin learning【immediately(D)】.
【据一项研究（一）长子孩子】，【儿童的母亲希望他们（乙）】了解很少像婴儿发展【超过（c）其母亲希望他们能立即开始学习【】儿童慢（丁）】这句话真让人崩溃
4.【In a report(A)】 issued by【United States Census Bureau(B)】, the chemical industry is investing 【more than any other(C)】United States manufacturing industry【in fighting pollution(D)】.
答案：B
一份由美国人口普查局起草的报告显示，人们对抗化学工业污染的投资远远超过美国其他制造业。
5.Societies form the primitive to 【the highly civilized(A)】【have used(B)】food ,【their most essential resource(C)】,in social bonding celebrations【of all kind(D)】and in sacred rituals.
6.【Throughout the history(A)】,the mosquito has been not only a nuisance 【but a killer(B)】, 【carrying(C)】some of the deadliest diseases【known to man(D)】.
答案：B but后面加一个also
纵观历史，蚊子不仅仅是一个公害，而且它还是一个杀手，因为它们的身上可能携带了人类所知道的致命疾病。
7.The photograph revealed a group of mountain climbers who had 【strung(A)】a 【twenty-feet(B)】rope【between(C)】two【particularly(D)】dangerous peaks.
这张照片让我们发现，一个登山爱好者团队已经在两座危险的山峰间串起了一条20英尺的绳子。
答案：B 中间不需要用“-”隔开
8.【During World War II(A】), many Eskimos served【in the Army or Navy(B)】;【another(C)】worked on airfields or supplied meat【to the armed forces(D)】.
在第二次世界大战期间，大部分爱斯基摩人为陆军或海军服务，另一些为机场工作或为武装部队提供肉类食物。
答案：D FORCES去掉”s”
9.In spite of all the publicity【women pilots(A)】had received, 【no amount(B)】of evidence 【could convince(C)】the War Department【allow any of them(D)】into the Air Service.
尽管所有的宣传女飞行员已经收到，没有统计的证据能说服陆军部批准她们中的任何人进入民用航空领域。
参考答案：D anyone
10.【There is(A)】no doubt that the successful late eighteenth-century improvements in【spinning and weaving methods(B)】, resulting in increased production of fabrics ,【have a great effect(C)】on the inventors of 【the sewing machine(D)】.
毫无疑问，18世纪末的织布方法的改进，对面料生产量的增加和缝纫机的发明都产生了很大的影响。
参考答案：C 加一个”s”