西柚不是西游-
1.must 去掉，将来时，和will冲突，两者取其一，will更合适些。
2 .is belonged to改成belongs to 这个地方不需要用被动语态
3.your 改成 yours 用名词性物主代词
4.the other 改成 another ：another指不定数目中的另一个
5.yours 改成you 属于于某人，用人称代词you就可以了
马老四-
1:must去掉
2：belonged改为belonging
3：your改为yours
4：the去掉
5：yours改为your
祝你好运
上面真是有好多很差的人啊！！！！！！！居然把第二体改为belongs，是不是太菜了，一个句子中怎么可能存在两个动词呢？一个is，一个belongs，应该改成分词，会不会英语啊！！！！！！！误人子弟啊
cloud123-
1，We must will stay at home tomorrow afternoon.
去掉will，must后要跟原型
2,This telephone is belonged to my father.
把is belonged改为belongs
3,These pans are your.
把your改为yours，应该用名词性物主代词
4,I will go to the cinema the other day.
把the other day改成another day,意为“该日”
5,Does this book belong to yours?
把yours改成you
S笔记-
1.will或者must去掉一个
2.is belonged 改成 belongs
3.your改成yours
4.will go 改成 went, 因为the other day是前几天的意思，必须用过去时。
5.yours改成you
tt白-
吁。。。
楼上也有错的地。。。
1 去掉will 或去掉Must
2 belonged 改成belong就成了
3 on the other day
3 is this book belong to you?
再也不做稀饭了-
1. "we must stay at home tomorrow afternoon" or "we will stay at home tomorrow afternoon". don"t need "must will" together. and we could do away with "at" also. "we must stay home tomorrow afternoon" is perfection fine.
2. could just say "this telephone belongs to my father"
3. these pains are yours.
4. i will go to the cinema some other day.
5. does this book belong to you?
nicehost-
1.will去掉
2.belonged 改成 belonging
3.your改成yours
4.will go 改成 went（不太确定~）
5.yours改成you
max笔记-
1.We will stay at home tomorrow afternoon
2.This telephone belongs to my father
3.These pants are yours.
4.I will go to the cinema another day.
5.Does this book belong to you ?
wpBeta-
We will must stay at home tomorrow afternoon.
This telephone belongs to my father.
These pans are yours.
I will go to the cinema other day.
Does this book belong to your?