- 慧慧
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不知道你的口味,列几篇供你挑选。谢谢
(1)这篇比较短小,词汇量也不大
Hello!I"m Amy.I have a good friend.Her name is ZhangYun.Her English name is Betty. She is a Chinese girl. She is ten years old.She is in the No.5 Primary school. She is in Class 7,Grade 2. She is good at English.She likes Chinese ,too.She is kind and very friendly. She likes helping others. She likes singing and playing basketball.This is my good friend.Do you want to know more?
(2)这篇语句不错,有点长但是可以删减的很好
I have a friend. Her name is Candy. She is twelve year old. She has black and short hair. She has a little mouth, two big eyes. She is so cute. Her mom and dad love her. She has a happy family. Her friends like her too, So she"s happy every day.
She is a student of Yi Zong Fu Xiao. She is in Class Four Grade Six. She studies very hard. English is her favourite subject. She likes to speak English. She can speak English very well now. She always says “Learn by doing.” So she thinks speaking is very important in learning English.
We are very busy studying when we are in school. But on the weekend, we are free. We often do homework together on Saturdays. After that, we can watch TV at home. Sometimes, we play games. We have the same hobbies. She likes riding bikes and watching TV and so do I. Her favourite sport is swimming. She"s very good at it. She often teaches me how to swim in summer.
I like her very much. I am lucky to be her friend.
(3)这篇适中
I have a good friend. Her name is Wu Mi.She is thirteen years old,But she is short.She has big eyes,a small mouth,a small nose and a round face.It is very cute.She likes reading books and do manually.Her skillful hands,can make a pleasant surprise.I like her very much,because we are good friends.
总之,三篇里的句子拼拼接接也许会成就一篇精华的,加油!
BY 77
- 北境漫步
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John is the most diligent student in our class. He is one of my friends. As a matter of fact, he gets along with his classmates. He might spend just five to ten minutes talking to you once in a long while, but he talks with enthusiasm and energy, and he likes to share his thinking and ideas with you. He is honest; he does not like to waste his time and energy. He never appears sleepy and tired in the classroom. He always hands in homework on time and also does well in his examinations, yet he has time practicing playing football and his violin skill. I admire him. I hope I can be as diligent as he is; John is persistent, attentive, and energetic. John是我们班上最勤奋的学生。他也是我的一个朋友。实际上,他和班上的同学相处的都很融洽。也许过好长时间他才只是花5分钟或10分钟和你聊天,但是他的谈话充满了活力和热情,而且他喜欢和你分享他的思想和想法。他是诚实的,他不会无谓的浪费他的时间和精力。在教室里,他从没有显得困倦或是疲惫。他常常会按时交作业,考试中也会取得好成绩,然而他仍会有时间踢足球和练小提琴。我羡慕他,我希望自己能象他那样勤奋。John是个执着、专注、充满活力的人。
- clou
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Everyone has their own stories in life.Some are joyful,some are bitter even a little embarrassment across in. Every story in the movie seems to be so exciting,wondful and beautiful,but our real life likely to cantrary to the false stories. It is one of my stories between my friend with me,though the abscense of lots of the episodes that should happen in the false stories,i still hardly forget it and him.My old friend where are you?Whether you are waiting for me to scramble over the wall,or brag with each other again. At least,i always memorised what we both used to do ever, and the motto just for you and me. It was the first time,what a fucking school! We had to stay in "jail" eating rubbish food for lunch and gambled through all lunch time.Oh,come on,give me a break,God! Did you see that other high school students hold a girl in arm with a cigarette on the mouth walking in the street at lunch time. Why i saying this was totally not i wanna compare with those guys or something like as that i grudge them. Actually, a beef burger and a cup of milk that was enough for me. For sure one more pack of chips was better,whatever small pack or large one. Rather,a little computer game would make me fell that the world is so beautiful. "Hi,Hao Wen,how do you think about the school rule?" I asked "Whatever,i do it in my style",he said maturely "Oh? do something different! so can you tell me what"s your plan?" I asked curiously "It is just a very easy action but doesn"t sound easy. We school break,do you follow me?" he smiled at me "Wh...a...t? what you mean?" i was very confused to ask him "Have you watched the serials of prison break?" he asked Suddenly,i rapidly stayed in silent. Let me think about it. Five minutes later."yes,why not? it must be so exciting,but tell me how? how to school break? i asked "We see at the school yard after the fourth period,then you will get it." he didn"t answer me immediately "Now tell me how to get out of here" I asked "Come on ,the answer is in front of you." he replied"What? are you kidding me? it"s just a wall, or you mean that we need to scramble over it." I asked with a little anger "Yes, that "s it." he grined at me "it"s impossible, i"ve never done that ever." i said disoppointed "HI!Be confident.Can"t you see the brand of your T-shirts you wore? Wa ,a...oh! you are so rich, the brand of xtep is under the brand of metersbone, you are wearing in brand." he said so exciting "So what?" i asked "What you are scared of now? Nothing is impossible, i walk in my style as if the sense of flying." he encouraged me "What a nice saying,you are so literate,but that doesn"t make sense at all" i said "Don"t worry about it,believe in yourself. You try your best to do it and will done it perfectly. Give yourself a chance.OK! I lead the way." he said "Uh....wai...t,damn!" i murmured"Congratulations! You"ve done well." he said "I promise that"s my first time also is my last time." i said "A haha hah! It"s just a beginning. You are a talent and courageous warrior i"ve never seen before.By the way, beautiful girls are waiting for us." he grined A girl with a head of light black hairs that covered a watery almond eye wore in pink. Her lips seemed to be so sweet,and that looked so irresistable. HI,hi...Hao Wen look this one. This sexy,beautiful and luscious girl who is exactly the kind of girls i fascinated in. Oh,my god! The kind of cure girls are here,too. Jesus forgive me,please! But why didn"t you tell me they were just living the small square boxes." i asked "You are a colour wolf,aren"t you?" he replied "Bulshit,you are a fucker." i refuted "Oh, come on! Don"t deny. All right. Tomorrow i will introduce to you a girl who is like that you just told me." as usual, he smiled at me "Really?" i asked him happily"No,i am kidding you." he laughed Then we both laughed from face to face. It was somhow like if the western jokes that are very easy but funny and interesting. We both enjoyed it much at the age of 15 years old. Running,running,be quick,or we will be late. I don"t want to stand outside of the class though the whole period. Come on,come to catch up me. The last one will get the "nice" title of turtle king. Of course, the champion will be the running elite. I am sure that i will be the first one the destination. Yes,o,ye! He was always very confident about anything, he never thought he will get lost. That was one of his traits i was really envious of him. The things that in the reality are not always go straight like as the things in the movie. I got cramp and callapsed. "Are you ok?" he asked "You"d better to go now,it takes much time to recover from cramp." i said "That"s ok,i wait for you." he replied "What a stupid idiot you are, you are getting late. Come on, just leave me alone and go please." i said desperately Now listen to me,we had defeated the enemies who are ten times as more us, and escaped from many plights. Although these things all happend in computer games,one thing will not be changed forever,you are my best comrade. Before it was,now it is, future it will be. So i can"t leave you here.Now give me your hands. Thereafter,he took me to the calss on his back in time. Four years later, when my back from the hell to home,i was trying to contact to him,but my other friends told me "he had gone". They said that one day, he didn"t come to school then they never saw him again. They had tried to connect to him before,but he changed his telephone number and moved. I was shocked by the news. I was going to retaste the feeling of scrambling with him,even i didn"t mind if thos who see us scrambling what they look us as. After all,without you without my part of childhood memories.
- 蓓蓓
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My Good Friend
My good friend is Mei. She"s a girl. She is my classmate.
Mei is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and long hair. She likes listening to music and reading books. Sometimes we listen to music together. She likes summer. Because she can swim in the summer holiday. She likes pink and white. She is in Class Four, Grade Six with me. She usually goes to school by motor cycle. Sometimes she goes to school on foot. We often go shopping together on the weekend.
We will be good friends forever.
My Good Friend
I have a good friend.She is my classmate,her name is Tracy.She is a pretty girl.
She studies in Tiandong No.2 Middle school,she is in Class 1,Grade 1.She studies hard all day.And she can speaks Japanese English and Chinese very well.So she often help my English and Japanese.I thank you for her help. And I help her math, too.Because my math is very good. We learn from each other and help each other.
Tracy often in a white T-shirt and a black skirt.We are all think shi is a lovely girl.And Tracy likes sports very much. She likes playing basketball,bassball,ping-pongball and badminton very much. So we are often play them.
Tracy has a big famili,there are nine people in her family.They are her mother,her father,her brother sister,her uncle,her aunt,her grandparents ang her.She loves her family very much.
My good friend
My name is Michelle. In my class, there is a girl. She has a round face, a small nose, two big eyes, a small mouth and two big ears. Her eyes look like grapes. Her hair is short and black. She is tall and beautiful. She looks like a middle school student. Do you know who is she? Yes, she is Fanny, one of my good friends.
Fanny is a good girl at school. In class, she listens to her teachers carefully. She studies English very well. She often helps us to solve problems. She is very quiet, sometimes she is very active. When class is over, she goes out of the classroom to play games with her classmates. She is very friendly to them. She is a good girl at home, too. After supper, she always helps her mother clean the room. Then she watches TV for a short time if mother permits.
She seems to have a special interest in music. Any time she hears the music, she will dance. Though she dances badly, she still loses herself in the music. I think she will be a dancer in the future. But she wants to be a writer.
This is my good friend. We feel happy when we are together. What about your good friend? Can you tell me something about your good friend?
- 康康map
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My friend is a very good girl,her name is lihua.she always helps me with my course,for example math.Through her help, my math"s grade improved much and I can solve many difficult math problem.We like each other very much.we will be good friend forever.
- 可可
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I have many friends. One of them is my classmate Ma Hua.He is a League member and one of the best students in my class.He is fond of English and good at it. He often practises reading aloud. So he has a good pronunciation.
He is always ready to help others. With his help I have made great progress. I have made up my mind to catch up with him and to join the League in the near future.
- 再也不做稀饭了
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- 西柚不是西游
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