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一、作文开头万能句1、Withthedevelopmentoftechnologyandscience,随着科学技术的发展(后面一定要接句子,不能单独使用)Withthegrowthprogressoftechnologyandscience=Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology.2、ConsideringtheworseningsituationinChina,attentionmustbepouredintoprotectingtheenvironment.(考虑到中国越来越坏的情况,环境保护需要引起更多的重视。)3、ThefirstfiveyearsofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingdevelopmentofChina.(本世纪的头五年见证了中国的快速发展。)Astheglobaleconomygrowsatafeverpitch,……4、Coincidentwiththefastgrowingnationaleconomy,thereexistsanunfavorableandprevalentphenomenoninChina.5、Therearegrowingconcernfor……6、Inrecentyears,itiscommontoseehearthat……7、Thereisageneraltendencythat……(有一种趋势)二、作文内容的陈述结构inthefirstplace/secondly/ontopofthat以下手段是增加句子复杂性的常见方法,也是得高分的“亮点”。1.改变句子的开头方式,不要一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首,或用分词做状语等。ue004〔原文〕Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogetherearlyinthemorning.ue004〔修正〕Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether.ue004〔原文〕Theyoungmancouldn"thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.ue004〔修正〕Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn"thelpcrying.ue0042.在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。①强调句〔原文〕Imethiminthestreetyesterday.ue004〔修正〕ItwasinthestreetthatImethimyesterday.ItwasyesterdaythatImethiminthestreet.②由with或without引导的短语。如:ue004Hesatinachairwithanewspaperinthehand.③分词短语。如:ue004Satisfiedwiththeresult,Hedecidedtogoonwithanewexperiment.ue004④倒装句。如:ue004Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.ue004NeverbeforehaveIseensuchawonderfulfilm.ue004Notonlyshouldwestudyinthecollege,butalsolearnhowtobeadecentperson.⑤省略句。如:ue004Ifso,victorywillbeours.Youcanmakesomechangeswherevernecessary.3.通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。ue004〔原文〕Hestoppedushalfanhourago.Hemadeuscatchthenextoffender.ue004〔修正〕Hestoppedushalfanhouragoandmadeuscatchthenextoffender.ue004〔原文〕Wehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.ue004Sometoldstories.Someplayedchess.ue004〔修正〕Afterashortrest,wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing,tellingjokesandplayingchess.注意使用不同长度的句子,要结合使用,不能只用短句或只用长句。4.学会使用过渡词。如:ue004①递进:then(然后),besides(还有),furthermore(而且),moreover(此外)等。ue004②转折:however(然而),but(但是),onthecontrary(相反),afterall(毕竟)等。ue004③总结:finally(最后),atlast(最后),inbrief(总之),inconclusion(最后)等。ue004④强调:indeed(确实),certainly(一定),surely(确定),aboveall(尤其)等。ue004⑤对比:inthesameway(同样地),justas(正如),ontheonehand…ontheotherhand(一方面……另一方面……)等。ue004相似的比较:similarly,inthesamemanner相反的比较:ontheotherhand,conversely,whereas,while,instead,nevertheless,incontrast,onthecontrary,comparedwith…,5.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。如:ue004〔原文〕Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.ue004〔修正〕Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.ue0046.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:ue004〔原文〕Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.ue004〔修正〕Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision.Ilikereadingwhilewatchingtelevisionappealstomybrother.三、结尾1、Allinall,whatreallymattersis,infact,that……(比如说到和谐社会Allinall,whatreallymattersis,infact,thatweshouldbuildoursocietyaharmonioussociety.)2、Therefore,it"snotdifficulttodrawaconclusionthat……3、Asaresult,weshouldtakeeffectivemeasurestodosth.(我们必须采取一些有效的措施来做些什么)4、Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayconcludethat……5、Obviously(此为过渡短语),wecandrawtheconclusionthatgoodmannersarisefrompolitenessandrespectforothers.四、一些用法1、陈述个人的观点Itisallegedthat(据说)Inmyview,bothsidesarepartlyright(两方面都部分的正确)AsfarasIamconcerned(就我而言)AsregardstomeMyownpointofviewisthat……Personally,Ibelievethat……Myexperiencetellsmethat……Theinventionofthehandset,Idaretosay,turnsouttobeatremendoushit.Theapplicationofwebsites,Idaretosay,turnsouttobeagreatlyhit.ItcomesasnosurprisethatChineseeconomybecomesincreasinglyhot.2、陈述别人的观点Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat……(错误的观点)sbisunderthefalsebeliefthat……3、图表作文Thetableshowsindicates evealsthat……(表明、暗示、揭示)Accordingtothestatisticsshowinginthatgraph,wecaneasliyseefound……(根据表中的数据,我们可以看见,发现)Asseenfromthechart/AsisportrayedinthepictureSaleswentintoaslightdecline=salesdeclinedslightly(小幅下降)Salesdeclineddramatically/sharply/greatly/hugely(大幅下降)Abriefglimpseatourcampus(thepicture/cartoon/caricature)vividlyshowsthatmobilephone,becomingmoreandmoreprevalent.五、好的替代themachine hedevice代替computerhandset代替cellphone*TheMiddleKingdom代替Chinaintenselycruciallyimportant代替veryimportant(itiscruciallyimportantthatthebenefitsofcollectivebeonourpriority.)approaches代替wayscurrent(currently)代替nowgrowingindividuals代替moreandmorepeopleindividuals/characters/folks代替people,personspositive,favorable,rosy(美好的),promising(有希望的),perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,代替goodunfavorable,poor,adverse,ill代替badanarmyof,anoceanof,amultitudeof代替many,alotoftaketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat代替thinkaffair,business,matter代替thingformypart,frommyownperspective代替inmyopinionbeneficial,rewarding代替helpfulexceedingly,extremely,intensely代替verypourattentioninto代替payattentiontobearinmindthat代替rememberenjoy,possess代替havetonameonlyafew/asanexample代替forexample/instance六、常用短语老年人theoldelderlyagedelderlypopulationseniorcitizens年轻人youthyoungsteryoungadultsadolescent中年人middleadults网吧cybercafé网虫mousepotato电视迷couchpotato优秀的学生outstanding/superior/rare/topstudents坏的影响illeffects农村rural郊区suburban城里urban在当代社会incontemporarysociety双赢awin-winsituation双输alose-losesituation建设有中国特色的社会主义buildsocialismwithChinesecharacteristics,formaeconomicsystemwithChinesecharacteristics七、写信中IwouldappreciateitverymuchIfyou……Iamthrilledtoreceiveyourmail.Lookingforwardtoapromptresponse.八、好的短语1、havegrowingrespectfor越来越重视Coincidentwiththefastgrowingeconomy,Chinahasgrowingrespectforprotectingtheenvironmentandcontrollingpopulation.随着经济的迅速发展,中国也越来越重视环境保护和控制人口了。2、enablesbtodosth(使某人可以做某事)Itenableustobuildaharmonioussociety.3、另外Inaddition/Additionally/ontopofthatAdditionally,thereisanotherreasonfortheappearanceofthisphenomenon.(现象)九、好的句子Therealpowerresidesinthepeople.(真正的权力属于人民)Wemustfightagainstthebureaucracyinordertoimprovegovernmentalwork.(为了提高政府部门的工作效率,我们必须与官僚作风作斗争。)Litterbylittle,ourknowledgewillbeenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.(慢慢的,我们的知识会充实,我们的视野会开阔。)Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.(常言道,任何事物都有两面的。)也可以用everyswordhastwoedges.Everythinghasbothdarksidesandbrightsides.TaiwanisanintegralpartofChina.(台湾是中国不可分割的一部分。)十、最简单的格式Coincidentwiththefastgrowingnationaleconomy,thereexistsanunfavorable坏的现象(favorable好的现象)andprevalentphenomenoninChina.Itisestimatedthat(相关数据,例如:eightoutoftenindividualspossessahandset十个人中有八个有手机了).Whyhavetherebeensomany(某种现象)Maybethereasonscanbelistedasfollows.Firstly/inthefirstplace(原因一).Besides,/secondly(原因二).Ontopofthat/additionally(原因三).themaincauseof(某种现象)isdueto(最主要原因).Itishightimethatsomethingweredoneuponit.Foronething,(解决办法一).Ontheotherhand,(解决办法二).Allthesemeasureswillcertainlyreducethenumberof(某种现象).Allinall,whatreallymattersis,infact,that……(比如说到和谐社会Allinall,whatreallymattersis,infact,thatweshouldbuildoursocietyaharmonioussociety.)Manyseniormiddleschoolstudentsdevotealargesliceoftheirleisuretimetoplayingwebgames./toplantedthemselvesinfrontofthecomputer.Thosedayswhenthecellphone,initiallyabrickshapeitem,wasthesourceoftheprideoftherich,aresomethingofthepast.Thosedayswhenthecar,initiallyatoolonlyforauthorities,arelonggone.Therehasbeenanunshakabletruthformostpeoplethatacademicdegreeandone"sabilityiscomplementaryeachother.Onesadfactabouthumannatureisthatwedon"tseemtoappreciatewhatwehavetillit"sgone.Computercanfunctionindisserveofhumanbeings,inaway,especiallyviolence,AV-films,pornpictures.Privatecarsalsofunctioninthedisserveofhumanbeings,especiallypollution,consumptionofenergyandtraffic.Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.Computerdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople"slives,despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet/aspect.阅读理解中subjective(主观)subjective(客观)should后面是观点,重点把握完形填空选不出来就填转折,关注第一句话,定语从句,which后面的信息很重要,用副词开头,后面是专家或作者的观点(情态动词也一样)