- 北有云溪
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自2012年2月份起【如果你只是在该公司实习了一段时间,不应该用Since…“自…起”这个句型,它用于你现在仍在做的工作,此处应该用from…】,本人在XX公司进行了为期三个月的外贸实习。实习过程中,在公司陈经理和同事的直接帮助下,先后实习了单证员岗位【在这里只看到你列了一个岗位,这也是明显的错误】,完成了制单结汇租船订舱等一系列的工作。通过本次实习,本人锻炼了实际操作和【与】人交往的能力,巩固了商务英语和国际贸易实务等知识,并且深刻领会到经验积累、人际沟通的重要性。
I have worked at XX Company for a three-month internship in foreign trade from February 2012. During the internship, I worked as a vouching clerk and accomplished a series of tasks such as preparation of documents,settlement of exchanges,charter of ships and booking of shipping spaces, with the direct assistance and guidance of the manager Ms. Chen and other colleagues. Not only did I improve my abilities of actual business operation and sociability in this internship, I also consolidated the knowledge learned in Business English and International Trade Practice etc. Moreover, I deeply realized the importance of accumulation of experiences and communication with others.
- gitcloud
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I have interned at XXX Company in February 2012. During my three-month long internship, I worked as a vouching clerk, who was responsible for preparingdocuments for bank negotiation and booking shipping space. With the help from my supervisor Ms. Chen and other colleagues, I did not only consolidate the knowledge of Business English and enhence my professional skills in International Trade Practice, but also improve my personal abilities to socializewith people and apply knowledge to practice. Moreover, I also achieved a deeper understanding of the importance of experience accumulation and interpersonal communication skills, which would be helpful for my future career.
- 苏萦
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During
my internship, with the help of my manager Ms. Chen and colleagues ,I
worked as a vouching clerk finishing the works such as preparing
documents for bank negotiation and booking shipping space.这句,如果不是感谢信的话,建议把主语提前,突出收获,I WORK AS....WITH MY MANAGER.....后面的也一样
- 贝贝
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I have an internship with XXX company for three months. My supervisor was Ms Chen, under her supervision and the helps from the colleagues, I completed the attached with vourcher clearing department, the jobs included - preparation of document and the interaction with banks, booking of shipment and space. During this internship, I have an indepth knowledge about the jobs including the International Trade Practice, the mastery of business English as well as the interaction with all works of life.
- 苏州马小云
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1. Ms. Chen and [my] colleagues
2. vouching clerk [and completed tasks] such as...
3. such as preparing [for] documents [needed at] bank [negotiations] and...
4. and booking shipping [spaces]
5. but also [consolidated] the...
6. the knowledge of Business English[, International Trade Practice, and etc.].
7. and [the communication among people]