he looks slimer than before.how did he make it?英文改错

As the saying goes,beauty is more than skin deep.It is certainly true that society prefers girls who are pale,tall,and slim.However,I prefer to evaluate beauty on a different scale,as innate value is far more important than physical beauty.Those popular physical assets do nothing to help one's character.Furthermore,there are many different ways one can be physically beautiful as well.Many people are aesthetically pleasing without one of the most mainstream qualities.In fact,that "flaw" may not be a flaw,but a distinguishing feature that makes a girl look more unique.In any case,natural beauty is always better than what is created by cosmetic surgery.

你目前很苗条哦