英语翻译A child learning to talk does not learn by being correct

A child (主语) learning to talk (定语,用来修饰主语child) does not learn (谓语) by being corrected all the time (状语,用来修饰learn) :
if corrected too much ,he will stop talking.
一个正在学习说话的孩子并不是靠被人不断的纠正错误来学习的.
如果矫枉过正,他就会不再说话.

一个学说话的孩子不是在总是被纠正中学会的，如果纠正太多，他就会（停止）不说话了。
A child learning to talk does not learn by being corrected all the time:if corrected too much ,he will stop talking.
实际上是两个句子。
A child learning to ...

哈哈，大部分都对了，最后一句没有准确的。
A child learning to talk does not learn by being corrected all the time :if corrected too much ,he will stop talking.
一个学习说话的孩子不需要每时每刻都纠正：如果纠正得太多，他会不再说话。
分析句子结构：

A child learning to talk (主语)

A child learning to talk does not learn by being corrected all the time :if corrected too much ,he will stop talking.
一个学习说话的孩子不需要每时每刻都纠正：如果纠正得太多，他会不再说话的。
分析句子结构：
A child（主语）learning to ta...

A child learning to talk does not learn by being corrected all the time
A child 主语
learning to talk -ing分词作定语
does not learn 谓语
by being corrected all the time 方式状语
整体来讲是个主谓结构。

孩子之所以能够学会说话并不是因为他说话时会时刻得到纠正：如果被纠正的过多，他就不会再说话了。
learning to talk修饰A child
does not learn by being corrected all the time此处意为“并非通过时刻的纠正来学习……”
if corrected too much ,he will stop talking.这句不用...