评论英语作文,英语作文修改.Dear Peter,I would like to tell you that our s
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评论英语作文,英语作文修改.
Dear Peter,
I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program.The new program is to make a beautiful school.And we should make a better place for us to study.I think should cropped flowers and trees.That will build a garden and botanical garden.And that should build some statues to power students and teachers.
Welcome to our school if you have any chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Peter,
I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program.The new program is to make a beautiful school.And we should make a better place for us to study.I think should cropped flowers and trees.That will build a garden and botanical garden.And that should build some statues to power students and teachers.
Welcome to our school if you have any chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Peter,
I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program.The new program is to make a beautiful school.We are to make a better place for us to study.I think we must regularly cropped flowers and trees.That will build a conducive botanical garden.We intend to build some statues to inspire the students and teachers.
We welcome you to our school..
Yours,
Li Hua
note:I try to keep the originality of your composition by not over correct it. - 1年前
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|采纳率 - program是“程序”的意思,应该用project;
"The new program is to make a beautiful school."可以完善为“The new program aims to make a beautiful school.”
“I think should cropped flowers and trees“这句话有两个不妥:
1、sh... - 1年前
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