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Last year,my family and I went to Okinawa.We stayed there for five days,but that was not enough.Our vacation too little.when it was over,I didn't want to leave.
I love Okinawa.Ithink that there is so beautiful and nice .We sat on the beach and played the water.Thewater is so clear.When you swim in the water,you can see anything.
Do you know my most favourite part of Okinawa?It was the seafood.I had fish every day.I almost ecploded!