Mydreammyhobby作文

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cqurm 共回答了19个问题 | 采纳率100%: I have a dream that I am always young. Then I will have enough energy to do everything whenever I want. Moreover， I don't have to worry about the old age during which I even can't take care of myself. I know that my dream will not come true. However， I think it is lucky that I am young now. So I will treasure my time， enjoy my life and try my best to do everything well.; 1年前

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I have a dream that I am always young. Then I will have enough energy to do everything whenever I want. Moreover， I don't have to worry about the old age during which I even can't take care of myself. I know that my dream will not come true. However， I think it is lucky that I am young now. So I will treasure my time， enjoy my life and try my best to do everything well.

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帮忙改一下初二英语作文my dreamMy name is Lin Tao.I have a dream.I want 帮忙改一下初二英语作文 my dream My name is Lin Tao.I have a dream.I want to have a robot named superman.He can do many things and he can play with me .He can move many heavy things .He can play basketball very well.He can play computer games too.He can da housework,like washing clothes and cooking.He can buy something for me . I believe mu dream will come true one day. mostlikelove1年前1: duncanlab 共回答了16个问题 | 采纳率87.5%

He can do many things and he can play with me he can可以省略
He can move many heavy things move移动的意思多一点吧用carry吧 many你用得太多了像a lot of/ lots of 或者其他同义词尽管用
还有你的文章同一句式用得太多了,都是He can .
比如it's easy for him to carry some heavy things
He is goood at playing basketball,also he play computer very well
He can do some housework,like washing clothes and cooking
Sometimes he buys gifts for me,so i like him very much.
I believe my dream will come true one day.这一句还好
你不要怪姐姐说了那么多,其实你的文章没什么错误,这点很好了.只是句式单一,以后你可以尝试从不同角度翻译句子继续努力啊

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