英语翻译Draw a circle on the ground,and let you sit down in it.M

Draw a circle on the ground and let you sit down in it.Maybe you don't understand what I'm doing.
That's normal if you don't understand it because most of the people has never done this.
Draw a circle on the ground and let somebody sit down in it.No matter what had happend outside the circle,one can't go out.
The circle is in the middle of the mountain.It's mostly dark outside the circle.You can see the sunset clearly outside the circle.It's so beautiful that you want to go out and see it.You really wanna go out.But that's impossible,you have to stay in the circle and obey your promise.You can't go out though the sunset is amazing.
Perhaps you thought this is unbelieveable that I prevent you from going out to see the beauty of the sunset.I won't dispute with you.If you could stay in the circle,that's enough.
Then,as you saw the moon linger over the land and before it was sent into the invisible,your mind was filled with songs.You might found yourself humming softly,not to the music,but to something else,someplace else,a place remembered,a place untouched,a field of grass where no one seem to have been except the deer.That is fantasitic.But you still can't go out.You can say that I'm so excessive.Well,we've got no idea,you need to stay in the circle.
Now,listen.You can hear the melody of the violin.But where does the melody come from?It must be a girl pouring out her feelings.You wanna go and see.But the truth is,the circle is too small.You even can't see her.You hate me,even want to bit me but you can't touch me.I'm outside the circle.You can go out,of course you can,but you have to violate your promise.
Well,all right.I'd better tell you the truth.It's not the first time for you to come to this mountain.You have visited here,but you haven't seen all the scenery you saw today.And the reason why you noticed that today is that you were in the circle and you can't move your body.As for the melody,did you remember the small hotel we went together?The little girl,you said she didn't play the violin well at that time.
Time's up,now you can go out.But,even though you can escape from the reality,can you also face all the problems in your heart?
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太长.