初一英语纠错We often say that the earth is our homeland and human

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We often say that the earth is our homeland and human society comes from nature.Therefore,I think our society is a part of nature.People should live harmoniously with nature.All the materials we need to live with come from nature,but we should also repay the nature,rather than blindly solicit.For example,we should plant more trees and take actions to protect the environment.In addition,we have to control population.Due to excessive population growth,human beings require much more natural resources than before,which 【leads】 to excessive pressure on nature.In order to 【have a】 long-term development,the population growth must be controlled.We all come from nature which is our homeland,so we must try 【 our】best to protect it.


【修改原因】：
1、 which 引导非限制性定语从句,指代 human beings require much more natural resources than before 这一件事情,用单数leads.
2、 没有In order to sth的表达,只有 in order to do sth 的表达.
3、 try one's best to do 尽一切努力做...


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把for examle改成such as

倒数第三句“lead”加“s",最后一句“try”后面加“our"
语法错误不多，但是有一种中国式英语的感觉，还有改进余地

earth改成Earth

这是初一的水平!!!真心败了。。。。
最后两句Due to excessive population growth, human beings require much more natural resources than before, which lead（s） to excessive pressure on nature.
（In order to...