鼓足勇气,登上天都峰吧!在山顶,你会有杜甫（诗句）的感受

勇往直前
一鼓作气

请问你需要深情地说出这句话吗?要是太白话化就没感觉了.= =|||而且感觉LZ你语言说不通啊```
今日,我终于鼓足勇气咁同你讲我心入面最想同你讲啲嘢.我从一开始对你啲感激,变到渐渐中意你,变到宜家咁样深爱你.唔理将来系点样都好,我都爱你,我无乜其他冧法,净系想拖住你,同你去允真正啲海角天涯.
不知道你觉得如何,我尽可能理解你的意思然后尽可能的翻译得深情得来又是白话文的.
外加点个人意见,总觉得LZ你的说话不够情深,很飘很虚,感觉的不到你感情.

It takes me entire one week to get up the nerve to deny his request.

1、他鼓足尽头,飞也似的跑到终点
或：他鼓足尽头,迅速跑到终点
原因：形容词重复,累赘了
2、姐姐碰到一道难题,正在（绞尽脑汁）的思考怎样解答
括号中的词可自己换
原因：深思熟虑一般形容计谋和计划,一般指有了答案的事情,思考问题,而且是未解答的问题不能用深思熟虑,属于用词不当

It was said that a person needs to transfer thirty-one face muscles to give a heartfelt smile to another person.It consumes at least the energy of three apples to make one arouses his courage to say I love you to another person.While a man met a woman and the two made up their mind to live together till old and grey,it uses about twenty years to wait as well as sixty to seventy years to complete it.
It was also said that the salt of the sweat and the teardrops of one’s life long is enough for his friends to cook several delicious courses.The distance that walked by a man who has two healthy legs all life long may cover the equator more than seventy circles.In the huge world,the possibility of a person meet another is one of ten millionth,of becoming friends is one of two hundred millionth,while of being companion through life is only one of fifty hundred millionth.
We may take extra care of everything if we don’t take many common things for granted.
Cherish,the secret of happiness.
是我自己翻的.

1搭配不当,水平提高
改：在李老师的帮助下,我的作文水平提高了
2重复,飞也似与迅速
改：两鼓足劲头,飞也似的跑到终点

As the saying goes,difficulty is just like a spring.The weaker you are,the stronger it will be.When confronting difficulties,we must keep up courage,make up our minds and never retreat easily.

6次,
爬到4米后就会滑下1米
等于每次爬3米
3乘5=15米
第六次直接就上去了

感叹号 逗号 问号 句号

一鼓作气再而衰三而竭!讲典故啊,鼓是战鼓而不是股了一口气,现在很少有人犯这样的错误吧?我们都是九年义务教育的人啊,而且这篇课文和重点,相信写错只是顺手而已!

渲染
变幻无穷
五光十色

when i talked to you for the first time,in fact,i exerted all my courage~
西班牙实在不会

每天早晨在自己的房间里对着镜子开始演讲,看镜子里的你演讲时的姿态,直到你能自信地面对镜子里的你.
当然这是帮你树立自信的,还需要你把课文熟读,真真正正做到滚瓜烂熟.而且在你背诵的时候不要背得太快,这样就给了自己充足的时间去回想.还有最后一点,是特别送给你的：要是害怕看到讲台下的同学,背诵时就直视着后面的墙壁.不过其实你可以尝试一下面对同学,他们的眼神其实是鼓励你的.不要害怕哦,

8次,第7次爬是到16米向下滑2米所以是14米,第8次就18米到顶了,滑不下来了.