求批改两句英语论文中的话,The Island location influences the U.K.in every
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求批改两句英语论文中的话,
The Island location influences the U.K.in every respect along the river of history.The U.K.,as an island nation,still presents lots of features not existing in other European countries today.
求帮忙看一下这两句有没有什么不恰当的地方,包括用词、语法、搭配、句子含义等等,写出来以后总感觉有些怪,
第二句开头是 as an island nation 位置正好断了~
The Island location influences the U.K.in every respect along the river of history.The U.K.,as an island nation,still presents lots of features not existing in other European countries today.
求帮忙看一下这两句有没有什么不恰当的地方,包括用词、语法、搭配、句子含义等等,写出来以后总感觉有些怪,
第二句开头是 as an island nation 位置正好断了~
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xdscking 共回答了18个问题
|采纳率83.3%- The Island location influences the U.K.in every respect along the river of history.The U.K.,,still presents lots of features not existing in other European countries today.修改:The Island location affacts the U.K.in every aspect in the long process of history.
As an island country,the UK presents(是想说展现啊还是保留啊?) lots of features which can not be found in other European countries today. - 1年前
jiguangwang 共回答了9个问题
|采纳率- 第一句吧有点问题吧,你这段主要讲的是UK吧,那第一句的主语是The island location,如果不看后面的句子,会让人误以为你接下来要讲The Island location。
- 1年前
BlaMn 共回答了595个问题
|采纳率- 语法方面基本正确,问题处在用词上。
第一句中的 along the river of history 想表达“在历史长河中”,不过是中式的英语,最好变通翻译为in the long course of history。
第二句
island nation 不常见,是否改为 island country
present lots of features 的含义是“将许多特点拿出来让人接受或拒绝”,改为 shows lots of features of itself 或 takes on lots of features
- 1年前
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|采纳率94.1%看了一下你的文章,你的语法句法都挺好的,而且单词拼写也没有错误. 你的第一段也给出了观点,但是给的例证不够充分,不够说服力.的确有钱会引人眼红,但是很多有钱人过得很好,你一定要给出具体的人或事来说明,或者report...1年前查看全部
- 王老师要批改98篇作文,批改了5天后,还剩下8篇,王老师平均每天批改多少篇?
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gg江湖 共回答了23个问题
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- 如何批改作文如何下点评
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asdkghkjaergg 共回答了23个问题
|采纳率73.9%本文内容丰富语言优美感情真挚1年前查看全部
- 求各位批改,评论一下这篇文章,别人眼中的我户口簿眼中的我:任跃跃,女,1998年11月19日出生,浙江省上虞市丁宅乡新任
求各位批改,评论一下这篇文章,
别人眼中的我
户口簿眼中的我:任跃跃,女,1998年11月19日出生,浙江省上虞市丁宅乡新任溪村.但别人眼中的我并非这么的直白.
“丫头,帮我扫一下地,我去休息一会儿.”“不要!你以为我很空吗?我需要休息,而且,读书很累很累的,要不你我换换.”妈妈被我说得哑口无言.从此,我的名言就是:不要跟我比懒,我懒的跟你比.我在妈妈眼中就变成了一个不折不扣的懒丫头.
冬天太冷了,我转移阵地来到了楼上,钻进被窝看起了书,被窝太暖和了,我不由得开始呼呼大睡,醒来后,我便下了楼,爸爸问我:“你看书怎么睡着了呢?”我说:就是想睡.”后来,我在爸爸眼中就成了一个贪睡虫.
我不爱动脑筋,看见相似的题目就会想当然.这次的***考试,姐姐承诺只要这次考试考到90多分,她就会给我一份奖励.可惜,我前面的题目做的不仔细,后面漏写单位,少答一个问题,反正错误层出不穷,没能考到90多分.因此,在姐姐眼中,我变成了一个小马虎.
除了上述的种种缺点,我也是有优点的.“你们猜,我最喜欢的诗是什么?”表姐们七嘴八舌,但是没有一个答对.“当然是‘刘诗诗’喽,连这个也不知道.”这番话引得表姐们哈哈大笑,我在表姐们眼中可是一个开心果,是个幽默的小可爱.
但在另外人眼中的我又有所不同.在老师眼中的我是胆小的,电脑眼中的我是一个游戏迷,在同学们眼中我是一个小胖妞……
原来,我是一个这么综合复杂的人.在别人眼中,我是一个懒丫头、贪睡虫、小马虎、开心果.也是一个爱开玩笑、胆小、爱玩游戏的一个人.
希望大家可以多发表此文章的意见,多说说哪里写的不好雨儿200001年前1
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yy159号 共回答了20个问题
|采纳率100%以下为个人观点,仅供参考.首先,选取事例不够典型且重复,作者详写的都是亲人眼中的“我”,题目既然是别人眼中,应该再从老师、同学等角度写一写,亲人部分删减,比如将爸爸妈妈并成父母,将姐姐表姐并成兄弟姐妹.再者,结尾不够精简突出,只是将上文又重复了一遍.可以改成“这就是别人眼中的我,也许不够完美,但是…”这样的话,力争画龙点睛.1年前查看全部
- 英语求批改,把正确答案写下来
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huijian520 共回答了29个问题
|采纳率86.2%1、"不能"应译成CAN'T,“在走廊上”应译成 on the passage.dining hall是餐厅的意思吧!
2 、他想加入英语俱乐部中的“想”应译成 would like to比较贴切!
3、how much time does he take to go to school by bike?how far是多远的意思
6、在..前面 用in front of ,bofore 根时间的多一点.
7、My mother is of medium height with long straight hair.
9、Last weekend,my parents and I went to countryside to pick up strawberry.
10 Saly's dream came true at last.
11Are these Jim's books?Yes,they are.
13He likes watching the football(or soccer) match on TV.
14.Mary's birthday is on 14th,Aug.
15His favourate subject is science.
19how do you think of the car?
如有不懂可继续追问!1年前查看全部
- 三(2)班共46名学生.白老师都要认真地批改,白老师一个月要批改多少作业本?(按一
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alunir 共回答了21个问题
|采纳率90.5%46*2*30=2760(本)
答:白老师一个月要批改2760本作业本1年前查看全部
- 英文句子批改,润色.看看有没有错误.
英文句子批改,润色.看看有没有错误.
Keeping pets may be have special significance to somebody,especially for senior citizen who live alone or kinds of people with psychological problemsheshaocun1年前3
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WangYvonne 共回答了17个问题
|采纳率88.2%Keeping pets may be significant to somebody,especially to senior citizens who live alone or to the people with psychological problems.1年前查看全部
- 英语句子求批改更正!看看下面这句话的写法对不对?In addition,this issue seems to be a
英语句子求批改更正!
看看下面这句话的写法对不对?
In addition,this issue seems to be a complex and increasingly widespread one,which has sparked much debate.送你心愿1年前4
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elviswang 共回答了13个问题
|采纳率84.6%In addition,this issue seems to be acomplex and increasingly widespread ,which has sparked much debate.
acomplex形容词“复杂的”前不加冠词a,which has sparked much debate.是非限制性定语从句.1年前查看全部
- 求高人指导批改英语作文.Difficulties in learning English \x05\x05\x05\x0
求高人指导批改英语作文.
Difficulties in learning English x05x05x05x05x05x05x05x05 x05x05
As we all know,English is more and more popular in our life,and most of us are learning English nowadays.But English is not easy while studying.
I have studied English for more than ten years,what's the biggest problem in my study is listening,just because I rarely have the opportunities to listen to the traditional English.In the past few years,we always write and write,so it resulted in my poor English listening.What's more,I have difficulty in speaking English,the reason is that we usually talk in English with our classmates and teachers who could understand us even though we couldn't speak fluently.However,foreigners may not understand the English we speak.But now,I think I have found some useful ways to solve these difficulties,and my teacher and classmates can help me with my English.
In a word,I hope I could overcome these difficulties in my four-year university life,and I could have great progress in other ways about English.孙先约1年前3
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06104050124 共回答了16个问题
|采纳率87.5%Difficulties in learning English As we all know,English is more and more 【popular】 in our life,and most of us are learning English nowadays.But English is not easy 【while studying】. I ha...1年前查看全部
- 关于英语作文的提高我是大学生.很想提高英语写作水平,但是不像在高中随时有老师指点,写好了作文无人批改.那我怎样可以提高写
关于英语作文的提高
我是大学生.很想提高英语写作水平,但是不像在高中随时有老师指点,写好了作文无人批改.那我怎样可以提高写作呢?写了的作文不知道写得好不好应该怎么办呢?
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yanyw1000 共回答了19个问题
|采纳率73.7%去论坛 互改1年前查看全部
- 求一篇英语作文,有关压力方面的作文评分方式是在批改网上由计算机自动评分的,Stress 面对压力 要求1.有的人害怕压力
求一篇英语作文,有关压力方面的
作文评分方式是在批改网上由计算机自动评分的,Stress 面对压力 要求1.有的人害怕压力.
2.有的人认为压力并不是一件坏事.
3.我的看法.
字数不少于150字,还有,这些积分是本人仅存的家当了,希望大哥大姐们能帮帮我···今天中午交作业,急···avalorren1年前1
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honggun2000 共回答了17个问题
|采纳率94.1%1.谈压力.
Often hear people say "pressure is too great, really can't stand it." Or speak "I this person is can't handle pressure."
Do know, every one of us never was born, already under pressure, and this pressure has been to death, cannot escape.
If we fill a cup of water, close in on cover a piece of paper, and then put the cup topsy-turvy. Will find, the cup of water and wrapped, can not pouring down. This is because the atmospheric pressure. If a hollow iron ball, cut in half, and then closed, and removed one of the air. Will find that the two halves of the iron ball, tightly together absorption, which USES 16 horse may pull away.
The famous "soft fort hemisphere experiment", and prove the atmospheric pressure. Who can think of our survival air, from the ground up 60 to three hundred km extension, it put its weight was put upon us.
But we are not live very easily?
That's because our body, relatively stressful. Two pressure offset, would have no feeling.
They don't like people? Some people is highly intelligent, capable, and even have a healthy body. But because can't handle pressure, and in the life of the battlefield shrink back down.
He is likely to be campaigning politician, can't bear the mental stress, and midway withdrew from the race.
He is likely to be spent years time, prepare to participate in the world of sports contest of national, but because of the too many people cannot afford to look told. Lest after failure, although to face our countrymen, and temporary disorders, the show.
He also may be the day the heart of hang in the entrance exam good students. When those lessons as his people, prepare a gamble, but he declared: "I hate test, in order to exam the protest, I want to be refused entrance exam boy."
He really may be eccentric figure, he says he does not think daring to challenge the ideal system, but, we whether can also think so: it was because he was too afraid of failure, can't handle pressure, and do not choose a response. Dare to face pressure, or are really intolerable pressure, it took a negative escape. Even to the pressure to close, yield. This is what a sad human nature!
Even young children will use and pretend to be sick, or hurt his, staged the adult of sympathy. Even adult will because dare not face pressure, and faking don't go to work. Will they not know, as we face the atmospheric pressure, best method, is the body produces relative by pressure, make it two phase offset, let us suddenly feel relaxed and clinking.
2. 谈压力.
For now, most middle school students, they are now the life than their elders though young when good many, many also happiness, but they enjoy the happy childhood much less, because their elders small of the time is in the field, the company of vegetation spent, and our childhood is the parents' expectations and pressure spent, so for each students is a heavy burden, then the burden from who? Some people can put this all belong to the teacher and school, but this is not the case, and our real pressure from modern the rapid development of the society, in order to adapt to the development of the country, so education degree is in constant ascension, because such students are learning pressure also of ascension in education with the rise.
The root cause of the pressure from social though, and the pressure of the transmission is students' parents, now most of the families have only one child, of course, parents will hope in him, and the infinite expectations for children to perhaps is a kind of infinite pressure. When children's performance is not ideal, the parents that blue eyes and mouth of talks, when children's performance are worse than others, the parents of the sighing sound, when the child places not beautiful, parents of reprimand angrily to sound, for every child who is a kind of invisible pressure. In fact, this comes from social pressure mainly from our nation's population, because our population is too much, so the employment also was more difficult, so this difficult into competition, and competition will become more deeply for each pressure.
Say to that seems like it is human to stress to like, no matter how since age chose you, let you come to this stressful times, so you also must be brave face pressure, facing pressure to bring you all the difficulties and inconvenience, a pessimist sees a calamity will say: "pressure will develop as The Times and growing", but they say the survival of the fittest, if you not to face pressure and how shall you surviving in this world? In this society based on how, has a place? Since you were born in this competitive times, then you must learn to accept all this pressure for life, accept all unhappy, with "with changeless should" involves the old to treat pressure.1年前查看全部
- 求批改托福作文,一战21分,这次改进写作方式,求大神给个分数,和评价!
求批改托福作文,一战21分,这次改进写作方式,求大神给个分数,和评价!
Independent Writing:Do you agree with the viewpoint that people are now easier to become educated than in the past?
In modern society,education,as a basic and a crucial mean to improve oneself,has become one essential part of people's life.Its significance is widely accepted by the public,a growing ratio of literate citizens indicates that to become a well educated person is not a dream for ordinary people anymore.Therefore,in my opinion,I definitely agree with the view that it is easier for people to become educated than in the past.
Admittedly,the standard of literate people in the ancient time is much lower than it is today.Taking ancient China for example,people who can recognize and write Chinese characters is thought to be an educated person.However,nowadays even if a person has ability to write wonderful articles and recognize enough Chinese characters,he may not be viewed as a well educated man,since the Information Age requires that human being should not only be master of language skills,but also be well in new technologies,especially for computer science.In this case,it is therefore unfair to conclude that modern people own dominant advantages to become educated than ancient people have.
However,education is only a privilege for the upper class in the ancient time,anyhow.On the contrast,people nowadays are with much more access of acquiring education.One important reason for this change is that emerging of internet; because it provides people an opportunity of getting well-educated in a shorter time and it is with fewer limitations.For instance,people in the past had to spend days in libraries when they were trying to search for some relative information about certain subject and valuable resources are even not open to the public.However,as a almost every family own a computer now,people could save much time on searching information with the help of information on the internet.
Furthermore,considering that people nowadays are under overwhelming pressure from increasing number of competitors resulting from the world population crisis,they will be more motivated in the process of knowledge.Using my brother's experience to demonstrate this view,my brother is a high school student who has a big college entrance examination waiting for him.In order to excel in the exam,he has been working hard for more than two years.In fact,ever since he entered high school,he has never taken part in any form of entertainment to ensure his study time.As a result,my brother was forced to absorb knowledge in many fields,which is impossible for ancient people.
In summary,I definitely to be in favor of the statement that people living in the modern society exceed in the ways they would gains knowledge.This improvement is attributed to stronger motivation of gaining knowledge and the easier access of acquiring knowledge through internet,thus,the Information Age makes education different.凤梨咖啡1年前1
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初初的流沙 共回答了21个问题
|采纳率90.5%1.建议你一段一个中心句,中心句放在段首,这样比较明了简洁易懂.
2.你最好还是三个论点都从正面的角度讲,你的第一个admittedly那一段真的可以去掉,改成另外一个正面的讨论段落.
3.最后一段这句In fact,ever since he entered high school,he has never taken part in any form of entertainment to ensure his study time.As a result,my brother was forced to absorb knowledge in many fields,which is impossible for ancient people.
这句话逻辑有点问题,他有没有参加娱乐活动其实和他能不能获取很多知识没有必然联系.有很多牛叉的人是自己又有知识,又有entertainment的.反之,有些屌丝木有entertainment也啥都不会.
个人觉得25左右吧.还是多写写吧,有空没空找点topic,分析几个围绕着topic的论点.
and good luck1年前查看全部
- 唐太宗至唐玄宗时期早朝和批改奏折的地方分别叫什么殿?
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私奔忘带猪 共回答了20个问题
|采纳率80%太极宫,大明宫,这两座宫殿是皇帝和后妃所居住的主要宫殿,也是皇帝处理政事的地方
甘露殿是皇帝在内宫之中会见大臣,读书,处理政事的地方1年前查看全部
- 请老师批改You have just spent a weekend staying as the St.Rogers
请老师批改
You have just spent a weekend staying as the St.Rogers Hotel in Beijing.When you get home you find that you have left a bag at the hotel.Write to the manager of the hotel to
1)x05enquire whether the bag has been found,
2)x05give any relevant information about the bag and its contents,and
3)x05ask the manager to contact you immediately if the bag is found and tell him/her how the bag can be sent to you.L诺诺L1年前1
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am-xue 共回答了26个问题
|采纳率88.5%To the St. Rogers Hotel in Beijing
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am sorry that I have to ask a favour of you, with the hope that you will be good enough to help me.
I was careless and have lost my bag in Room 111 I lived in when I staying in your hotel last weekend. The bag is a black one, made of leather with an AAA brand in the middle of the front. And inside are my credit card, wallet and a book named The Art of the War. It is essential that my ID card is also in the wallet which proves my identity
Could you please get in touch with me at your earliest convenience dialing …, my mobile phone, if you have found it. And it will be highly appreciated if you could send it to my workplace at… (通讯地址) via EMS.
Thanks to your help and I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming1年前查看全部
- 数学老师下班前批改两组同学的作业,如果每分钟批改5道题,则晚下班4分钟才能批改完蛋;如果每分钟批改
数学老师下班前批改两组同学的作业,如果每分钟批改5道题,则晚下班4分钟才能批改完蛋;如果每分钟批改
则下班前5分钟就能批改完.这两组同学的作业共有多少道?sandyfxy1年前1
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qipilang 共回答了17个问题
|采纳率88.2%设作业为x道:
(x除以5)减4=(x除以8)加5
x除以5=(x除以8)加9
8x=5x加360
3x=360
x=120
好多作业·····不太会打你凑合看1年前查看全部
- 雅思作文批改,这样的小作文能得几分?我第一次写
雅思作文批改,这样的小作文能得几分?我第一次写
剑5,test1 writing task 1
The line graph shows that how many people who are at their 65 in Japan,Sweden and USA from 1940 to 2040.It is clear that in three countries,the size of the elder aged 65 will reach his peak in 2040.
According to the table,the proportion of people who are 65 year-old has a slightly decrease in USA since 1940 to 1960,while other two countries both have a gentle increase.The number of the old has no change in America between 1960 and 1980,on the contrary,in Japan an in Sweden,there happened a slowly rise in each country.The American elder are countinually become more and more since 21 century and they will be the most in 2040 among 3 countries.
However,the proportion of the population aged 65 in Sweden finally surpass that of Japan from approximately 1998 until now and will be continued to 2040 by fluctuating in his own pattern.The size of the population in Japan leveled off and is smaller than that of Sweden,but it will still climb in the future.
Overall,the number of the American aged is the least one at the beginning of 1940 and will be the most one in 2040.自有呼应1年前5
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54664 共回答了19个问题
|采纳率89.5%The line graph shows that how many people (前边改成The line graph shows the numbers of people) who are at their (their去掉) 65 in Japan,Sweden and USA from 1940 to 2040.It is clear that in three count...1年前查看全部
- 托福作文求批改独立写作:do you agree or disagree with the following stat
托福作文求批改
独立写作:do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
Parents should allow children to make mistakes and let them learn from them.
我的作文:
Parents’ education has always been
an important part I children’s growth.It is understandable that parents want
their children to enrich their knowledge.Accordingly,some people hold the
view that parents should allow their children to make mistakes and let them to
learn from the experience.From my point of view,I disagree.
Admittedly,mistakes enables
children to discern what's correct and what's wrong,thus they can know how to
address the same problem next time.It is no hard job to imagine that a child
who touched the boiling water will no longer do the same thing again.The undesirable
results can impress children a lot,so they get impressive experience from
mistakes.However,it is not the case in reality.
For one thing,some mistakes could
be too serious to make up.Consider taking drugs.A child may be curious about them
and take them for fun.It is too late to correct the mistake once it happens.What
we only get is regret,and drawing experience from this will make no sense.Consider
suicide.A child who feels confused about his future may choose committing
suicide to put himself to an end.Consider theft.A child steals without
prevention from parents will eventually be caught and confront sanction.Tragedy
happens from time to time if parents allow their children to make mistakes no
matter what they are.
For another thing,there are
better ways for parents to help their children draw experience.They can take
themselves as examples.Telling their mistakes when they were youngsters to their
children not only gives the children a chance of learning and avoiding making
the same mistake again,but also promotes the relationship between parents and
children.Besides,children can watch educational and informative TV programs.By
watching Laws Online,children will get to know the consequence of criminals
and try to obey laws.By watching Tactics in Work,children will have a closer
look at how to study efficiently and get useful information as much as possible.
By watching Lives of Celebrities,children will be better informed about how to
lead a meaningful life and make contribution to the society.
All in all,taking the vast
disadvantage into account,by no means should parents allow their children to
make mistakes to learn.After all,there are always better approaches for
success.liu19851231年前2
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jinju_zhai 共回答了22个问题
|采纳率95.5%模板化太严重,解释说明不够具体,感觉只有一个框架在支撑.所以你需要做的是,丰富文章内容,让文章活起来.如果觉得我的建议可能能帮到你,邮件交流.yuxdong@indiana.edu1年前查看全部
- 怎样在电子文档里对文章进行批改,像老师改作文一样?
怎样在电子文档里对文章进行批改,像老师改作文一样?
怎样使用”批注“选项?Echo6051年前1
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醋酸呜呜 共回答了22个问题
|采纳率95.5%用不同颜色的字和符号.1年前查看全部
- 帮我批改一下英语完形填空!阅读下面短文,从短文后所给各题的A-,B、C三个选项中,选出可以填人空白处的正确选项,并在答题
帮我批改一下英语完形填空!
阅读下面短文,从短文后所给各题的A-,B、C三个选项中,选出可以填人空白处的正确选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑.
China will be the host 36 the 2008 Olympics,so many Chinese people want 37 their English in different ways.For example,twenty-four young singers from across China entered a contest by 38 popular English songs.Nearly all the singers sang very 39 and looked comfortable on stage.Some of these singers 40 able to sing English songs just as well as native speakers.
The singers really came from all age groups and from all over China.The winner of the men' s com¬petition was a 40-year-old man from Xi' an,and the winner of the women' s competition was a 19-year-old girl from Dalian.Both winners were very modest and said that they 41 they were better than the other singers.Jiang Mei,the winner of the women' s competition,said 42 English helped her win the prize.Six months earlier,she felt her English was not 43 ,so she had to study hard.She also said that singing English songs made her more 44 in learning English.
This kind of contest encourages people in China to speak English." Chinese people should try to speak English more.We should try to make progress before the Olympics." said a spokesperson from the Olympic Committee.He agrees that it is a good idea to have fun 45 English.
B 36.A.to B.for C.with
C 37.A.improve B.improving C.to improve
A 38.A.singing B.sing C.sings
B 39.A.clear B.clearly C.clearlier
C 40.A.was B.are C.were
B 41.A.don't think B.didn't think C.won't think
C 42.A.study B.studied C.studying
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clement23 共回答了19个问题
|采纳率94.7%BCABCBCACB 帮你查了一遍,以我高二的水平告诉你没错误了.1年前查看全部
- 帮忙批改雅思作文Topic:Some people believe that teenagers should lear
帮忙批改雅思作文
Topic:Some people believe that teenagers should learn all school subjects,while others claim that students should focus on the subjects that they are best at or that they are interested in.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In many places of the world,it is common these days for students to learn all the subjects at school.While,some people think it is not essential for them to do that,they can choose the part of subjects which they are interested in or good at.
These people believe that let students select what courses they want to learn by themselves is very beneficial.Students will becoming more positive in learning and give full play to their energy because of it.In addition,it is also the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives in the future,which is not likely to those students who do not know what they to do after blindly study all the courses.What's more,it provide a chance for these students who are not excellent enough in all courses yet have a good command of one,to show their striking talent.
However,they are probably wrong.Teenagers should learn every subject in their school.Many of these teenager's though are not very mature,they select it because they like it at that time,while after a few months late,they begin to feel the subject is not as interesting as their thought,then they will soon get tried of studying,which is the last thing people would want.Furthermore,if teenagers do not learn all subjects,how do they make out what subjects they are best at or care about?If they choose major in science,how do they express it clearly with lack of language training?
So overall,my view is that teenagers may try to learn all school subjects in their study career instead of selecting to learn.It will enable them to broaden their horizons,and find a real suitable position for themselves.
要到6分怎么改?语法怎么改?程雁离1年前1
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总被dd 共回答了17个问题
|采纳率94.1%雅思作文不是只看语法的,你的结构往往比语法更加重要.你的作文存在一下几个问题:
第一,在首段未表明观点.只是说some people think...却没有说 I think
第二,文章结构不太对.他要求你discuss both views and give your opinion.
那么文章的结构应该是“第一段:背景阐述/表明观点(一句即可,在后面详述)--第二段:讨论第一种观点--第三段:讨论第二种观点--第四段--论述你的观点--第五段:总结”..
你可以自己比对一下.你可以不按照这样分段,但文章中一定要有这些环节.
第三,不善于打句号.总是一逗到底,让人很难明白你到底一句中想要说些什么.建议你一句话只说一件事,不要用太多的长句子.因为这会使你的语言显得非常生涩.
总之,这篇文章应该是3分到4分左右.没有走题,但是也没有你自己的观点的详细论述.
PS:从你的文章中看出,你的基础应该还不错,像普通的高中生.也许有些还写不出这样的 ...可能你是还没有找到写这种英语标准化考试应试作文的精髓.建议你多看点别人写的,或者是买几本书看看.你们考雅思的应该还是有基本参考书的吧,多看看那上面的文章.体会他们的结构.相信你一定可以达到6分的.1年前查看全部
- 雅思作文 求批改!求评分!It is generally believed that some people are b
雅思作文 求批改!求评分!
It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents,for instance for sport or music,and others are not.However,it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Whether people who are born with certain talents can be success or any one can be,which raises considerable concerns among many people.Views regarding this phenomenon vary greatly from person to person.In my opinion,the people born with certain talents triumph over people are not.
Admittedly ,the opinion that any one through education can do things more professional in one area ,which can hold water to some extent .Advocates point out that if the society gives them sufficient education and time during their studying age ,they will got high scores in the future .Education plays a pivotal role in everyone’s life and future education could bring more opportunities when people finding jobs.For example,the table tennis golden owner ,Li Xiaoxia,in this Olympic Games,won in the end,though she have not had talents when she was a child .Only if she has enough education to study and enough time to practice .She might be a good sport player.
Another army of people hold the different opinion that some people are born with certain talents,such as the gift for sport or music.They can do better than others .First and foremost,the point is that they got the gift since they were infants,so they would show the talents not more than one thing.If parents found their children had gifts on music,how were they do in the next stage?Probably,the will provide more teaching methods to their children.And then children can absorb abundant knowledge from their courses.In addition,talent person could find courses easier than the others.Thus,they will have time to study deeply and broadly.When a person’s primary education is easy to get and then he can choose elementary knowledge.
In my opinion,talented person can gain more achievements than the others.They can use their gifts,pulsing the efforts they take and sufficient practices in their lives.herryhh1年前2
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跳着奔跑 共回答了23个问题
|采纳率78.3%1Admittedly , the opinion (that any one through education can do things more professional in one area , which can hold water to some extent )这句话不完整,没有谓语,括号部分为从句.
2Advocates point out that if the society gives them sufficient education and time during their studying age , they will got high scores in the future . 这句话可以改的更紧凑一些,Advocators claim that if certain level of education was made available, students would achieve higher score. 这句话强调的重点是如果学生能够接受一定程度的教育,他们的成绩会更好,the society, in future,这些不是句子强调的重点,为了避免文章的冗余,我把它省略了,我在if这里还用了一个虚拟语气,表假设
3 Education plays a pivotal role in everyone’s life and future education could bring more opportunities when people finding jobs.这句话2个问题,1是句子的冗余,2是没有把句子中的逻辑关系表达出来.我改成 Education plays a pivotal role in everyone's life as it contribute to significantly to job hunting. 我在这里用一个as表示因果关系,英语和中文不同,中文句子之间的逻辑连接很多时候是一种自然衔接,而英文则需要用各种连接词来体现句子或者词组之间的逻辑关系.
4Only if she has enough education to study and enough time to practice . She might be a good sport player (only 引导的条件句是要倒装的,格式是only by doing can sb/sth do...)所以我改成 Only by maintaining enough study and practice activities can she become an excellent athlete.
5Another army of people hold the different opinion that some people are born with certain talents, such as the gift for sport or music. They can do better than others紧凑其间,这2句可以合并成一句,Others may challenge that natural tallent in sport and music may contriute to outstanding achievement in these areas.
6First and foremost, the point is that they got the gift since they were infants, so they would show the talents not more than one thing. If parents found their children had gifts on music, how were they do in the next stage? 议论文强调客观,所以尽量不要用疑问句,还有first and foremost, the point ist that 这段东西还是省略了吧,这只是一个承上启下的连接词啊,我改成First, their natural gift can be perceived when they are very young attracting the investment of more training resources which contribute to their future success.1年前查看全部
- 班上有个同学叫刘马虎,他求13个自然数之和的平均数,结果是12.43.侍作业批改后,老师在刘马虎这道题的旁边批注:“百分
班上有个同学叫刘马虎,他求13个自然数之和的平均数,结果是12.43.侍作业批改后,老师在刘马虎这道题的旁边批注:“百分位上的有效数字计算错了!”请同学们算算,正确的结果是多少?
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egu000 共回答了20个问题
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- 帮忙批改一篇英语作文,Ⅱ说明:从部门经理(Rush Crawford)的名义给公司全体员工发一份内部通知.时间:2007
帮忙批改一篇英语作文,Ⅱ
说明:从部门经理(Rush Crawford)的名义给公司全体员工发一份内部通知.
时间:2007年6月24日
事由:有关更换电话系统事宜
内容:
1.由于业务需要,公司拟更心目前使用的电话系统;
2.现由3个通讯公司提交的更新方案,内容见附件;
3.请员工仔细阅读并提交自己的建议;
4.提交建议的时间:本月底前;
5.公司将与下月初订货.
words for reference:事由 Re 更新 update 附件 attachment
订货 place an order 通讯公司 communications company
Memo
To:All staff Employees
From:__________
Re:_____________
Date:___________
___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
Memo
To:All staff Empolyees
From:Rush crawford
Re:About update the telephone system
Date:June,24,2007
Because of the need in business,company plan to update the telephone system.Now there is a communications company hand in a update plan.The detail please see attachment.Please the workers reading carefully and give sugestions.And the time by the end of this month.The company will place an order at next month early.oacqq1年前1
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fwefwefwe 共回答了22个问题
|采纳率90.9%Memo
To:All staff Empolyees
From:Rush crawford
Re:Update the telephone system
Date:June,24,2007
As need of business,company plan to update the telephone system.We have three update plans from communications companys in the attachement.Please read carefully and give sugestions.
Please hand in suggestions in the end of this mounth,as we will purchase the new telephone system in the early of next month!1年前查看全部
- 老师从上午8:30开始批改作文,中午休息2时,每时可以批改8篇老师要批改完48篇作文需要工作到什么时
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sandy789_2000 共回答了16个问题
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- 求高手批改英语作文帮忙找出错误及原因,写出修改后的结果.Should We Help StrangersWhen i w
求高手批改英语作文
帮忙找出错误及原因,写出修改后的结果.
Should We Help Strangers
When i was a child ,my parent told me that helping strangers is our traditional virtue.
In this new era,things seems to be more complicated than before.Many people became not believing that faith any more .One day,i was so astonished when i heared that a boy was sued by and old laddy's daughter for his kindhearted.The boy helped the old ladddy when he saw a dog was attacting she.This kind of things happened every day on the world.The good guy helping strangers been asked to take the responsbility if the victim can't find the real wrecker.
In my opinion,we need to think about how to protect ourselves when we intend to help strangers.c940701年前3
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sherrylan 共回答了22个问题
|采纳率81.8%things seems to be .seems ---seem
people became not .people do not believe in.
heared.heard
when he saw a dog was attacting she.when he saw a dog attacking her
happened.happen1年前查看全部
- 王老师要批改48篇作文,已经批改了12篇。如果每小时批改9篇,还要几小时能批改完?
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angelapan86820 共回答了13个问题
|采纳率23.1%48-12=36篇 1小时批9篇 36÷9=4小时 望采纳┏ (^ω^)=☞1年前查看全部
- 托福作文求批改.同不同意-----Your job has more effect on your happiness
托福作文求批改.同不同意-----Your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life?
Happiness is a feeling that can comfort everyone.Some people get happiness from their job,and others get it in their social life.I think it is our jobs that has more effect on our happiness than our social life.
First and foremost,most people regard the succeed in their job as the most happiness thing in their life.Many successful people are occupied with their business,some of them even do not have social life.Do they get happiness?Of course they do.Because what makes them feel happiness is that their business can become good.My father is a salesman,everyday he attaches his attention to how can he sell more clothes.I remember last year he sold ten thousand piece of clothes,and he was so happy.Even though he was so tired last year,as he did not have social life ,he still felt happiness.Because he succeed in his career.
In addition,we spend most of the time in our job.We have to work from Monday to Friday.We do not have much time to enjoy our social life.So most of us will get the happiness when we are working.Both our co-workers and our bosses will bring us happiness.I want to take myself as an example.I am a strange girl that I really want to spend all of my time in my office,as a result that my co-workers are so fun that they always make me laugh.Everyday they sing songs and tell jokes in the office when we do not have much work to do.It makes me feel that we are in a big family.
Admittedly,social life is essential in our daily life.When we go hiking or shopping with friends,we will feel so happy.However,our job has more effect as a result that it brings us satisfaction and we spend most of our time on it,which makes us feel more happiness than our social life.ewtqwefdsa1年前2
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nibty 共回答了20个问题
|采纳率90%第一行 some...,while others...
most people regard the success...
句子和句子之间要用句号,或者连接词,注意语法
例子还要再展开具体一点
不要重复用某些词,像happiness,换词
句式要多样一点1年前查看全部
- 英语高手请批改一下这篇文章这是一篇关于“此地无银三百两”的故事 There is no money in this pl
英语高手请批改一下这篇文章
这是一篇关于“此地无银三百两”的故事
There is no money in this place
Long,long ago,there was a rich man in a town called Zhang San.
One day,he was stay in his house and looked at his money.He though,’ My house is not big enough to put my money,I must look for a place to put it.’ Soon,he saw the garden and decided to put his money in the garden.
He went to the garden and put the money in the ground.After a minute,he though,’ If a thief come to my house and take my money away,I will become poor.I must tell the thief not to take my money away.’ So he wrote ‘There is no money in this place’ on the wall.
Zhang San has a neighbour called Wang er.He looked it and took the money away.But he was worried about who took away the money.So he wrote ‘Your neighbour has never taken your money.’
How silly the two men was!zhidaowangzi1年前6
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gyk110 共回答了26个问题
|采纳率88.5%目前找到的 :...(重要的错误你没怎么改..)
there was a rich man in a town called Zhang San.
这个called的位置不太好,可能引起歧义
.请紧接被修饰词
he was stay 我..还是无言
He though,’
thought
My house is not big enough to put my money,
这里用的to put my money不太好...
he saw the garden 用his garden更好
If a thief come to my house and take my money away,I will become poor.
comes,takes
He looked it look是vi.这里应该用saw
saw this或者 saw Zhang San hide his money都可以
(补...He saw Zhang San hide his money 为了万无一失..,明确一下主语是Wang Er会更好)
But he was worried about
ABOUT后面放这个从句不太好.而且时态不对
How silly the two men was!men 用were...1年前查看全部
- 王老师批改作业,如果每小时批改8本,需要5小时批改完,如果每小时多批改两本,需要几小时批改完?
2的2次方1年前10
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惬意 共回答了1个问题
|采纳率8乘5除以(8加2)等于4感谢你的细致回答,我的问题已经解决了,多谢大家的帮助哦!问你一下纳尼?十二分之五乘五分之一乘二乘十二分之五乘五分之二,等于多少?36分之1过程字写的难看,见笑了!字写的难看,见笑了!呵呵没事我还有好多题要问你,你不会嫌我烦吧问吧你是几年级的?我是六年级的一种报纸,如果只订一个月,每份订价15元。如果连续订一年,可以优惠10%。今年小红家连续订了一年这种报纸,一共要付多少元...1年前查看全部
- 甲乙丙三位同学同时到办公室找老师当面批改作业.老师批改他们的作业的时间分别是2分钟、1分钟、3分钟
甲乙丙三位同学同时到办公室找老师当面批改作业.老师批改他们的作业的时间分别是2分钟、1分钟、3分钟
.按什么顺序批改,他们等候时间的总和最少?等候时间的总和最少是多少分钟?
godsbaby1年前1
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CarlesPuyol 共回答了16个问题
|采纳率81.3%等候时间的总和最少,即从最少时间那个同学先批改,一共用时:1*3+2*2+3*1=10分钟
等候时间的总和最多,即从用时最多那个同学先批发:一共用时:3*3+2*2+1*1=14分钟1年前查看全部
- 怎样批改四年级童话作文
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丢丢118 共回答了25个问题
|采纳率84%题目正确得两分
2.字数达到要求得一半的分数
3.标点符号,错别字,病句.有五分给你扣分
4.还剩八分,是属于中心思想是否明确,句子是否优美来评分
5批改的话,你可以写上一些评语,或画出他里面得错误,先不要帮他改,他不明白的话,你可以告诉他那里错误了要怎么改教学目标: 知识与能力目标: 1.认识童话的特点,提高欣赏童话的能力. 2.通过知童话、画童话、讲童话、写童话,训练学生想象表达能力.1年前查看全部
- 听说有家SAT作文批改机构essay intitute.sat,有人知道吗
听说有家SAT作文批改机构essay intitute.sat,有人知道吗
不知道怎么进去那个机构的网站,是美国的.
还有什么比较好的SAT作文批改机构?fengyels1年前1
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2285123 共回答了13个问题
|采纳率100%http://zhidao.baidu.com/question/132649224.html?oldq=1
难道楼主是看了我以前写的帖子才知道essday institute? 这个机构已经不复存在了,他们转行搞大学申请包装了.至于现在想找人改作文,我只知道有新东方的网批.1年前查看全部
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