2012 anhui gaokao wenke 555fen keyi tian na xie xuexiao

The Gaokao's formal name is the national college entrance examination.It is an exam that is important for Chinese students every year.It can decide everyone's future in China.The first gaokao was started in 1955 and it was suspended until in 1977when it was regained.Now,The Gaokao is held every year on June 7 and it last 2 days.Chinese,math and English are included in the compulsory subject.It has 912 million students participate in the gaucho in 2013.
In our country ,The Gaokao is a new starting point for us as well as important for our future.It can decide whetheryou can go to a good university or not.Also it can determine whether we can find a good job in the future or not.
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