帮我改改作文啊!Surfing the InternetAs progress the word,we hand-on

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帮我改改作文啊!
Surfing the Internet
As progress the word,we hand-on the network times.Now we already leave it.As an academician,I usually surf the Internet in my spare time.
Internet takes more and more part in our life nowadays.Through internet,we can chat,study,get information,get help,go shopping etc.Internet introduces me to a new world.In the past years,most of my knowledge has come from my teachers,but by surfing the Internet,I have learned more about science,life,and society.
In fact,surfing the Internet has become part of my life.Every day I spend some time on the Internet to get more knowledge.

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天依然晴朗 共回答了21个问题 | 采纳率95.2%
冲浪互联网作为进展总之,我们的手-论网络时代.现在我们已经离开它.作为一个院士,我通常网上冲浪在我的空闲时间.互联网需要越来越多的一部分,在我们的生活现在.通过互联网,我们可以聊天,学习,获取信息,获得帮助,外出...
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谁能帮我改改这段英文,只有一小段,
谁能帮我改改这段英文,只有一小段,
Companies in the development process,constant pursuit of quality products and good service and strive for customer satisfaction,maximize the value.Enterprises to "honest,trustworthy,quality" for business purposes,in order to "optimize product quality,the pursuit of customer satisfaction "as quality policy,to" dedication to customer service "in a spirit of enterprise development,to create a good benefit our customers,will to better product quality and better service our customers love Thanks.Willing to work around the new and old customers to create a better tomorrow.
不是翻译,是修改,有语法错误和中国式英文
cch19001年前2
依风季节 共回答了21个问题 | 采纳率90.5%
Companies in the development process,constant pursuit of quality products and good service and strive for customer satisfaction,maximize the value.Enterprises to "honest,trustworthy,quality" for business purposes,in order to "optimize product quality,the pursuit of customer satisfaction "as quality policy,to" dedication to customer service "in a spirit of enterprise development,to create a good benefit our customers,will to better product quality and better service our customers love Thanks.Willing to work around the new and old customers to create a better tomorrow.
英译中,顺便改改语法It's 3 pm in Los Angeles.The sun shined over the g
英译中,顺便改改语法
It's 3 pm in Los Angeles.The sun shined over the giant Hollywood sign,making the cement ground hot and dry.
John,an unsuccessful carpenter,had been in LA for 3 weeks,and he had been auditioning for 3 weeks,too.Today he had only 8 dollars left in his pocket,and the friend who had been lending him his couch finally kicked him out in morning."I won't be able to afford both a burger and a bed tonight." John said to himself.He was overwhelmed with frustration and despair now.Suddenly,a shiny sports car with a sign that he couldn't recognize,rushed by him at the street corner,which almost knocked him down.The car even didn't slow down a bit.John watched the pretty girls in it drove away,laughing.He recalled the reason that he left his hometown for LA:to become a movie star and drive a car just like that.He also recalled the moment that he threw a wood pole at his boss,stormed out,and announced to everyone in town that he would become the greatest actor ever.
"Well,look at me now." John looked down upon his shoes,while standing at the intersect.They were worn out and all dusty."I can never get a part in these shoes." He took a step,but he was so occupied that he didnn't realize the signal has turned red,and a heavy truck was coming down the street in its full speed.With a disturbing sound of car breaks,John felt something was falling on him,a lot of somethings.Though he soon started losing his consciousness,John still could vaguely smell a scent of pine trees and fir that he's familiar with.
"Wood poles..."John tried to make a handsome smile with his last breath,but it was too small for anyone to notice.It's 3:08 pm in Los Angeles.The giant sign that bathed the hot sun,is reflecting an elegant silver light upon the hills.
岁华尽落1年前3
爱永不会变 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率88.2%
这是3点在洛杉矶.太阳照耀在巨大的好莱坞标志,水泥地面热又干的.
约翰,一个不成功的木匠,已经在洛杉矶为3周,他曾为3周的试镜.今天,他只有8美元在他的口袋里,这样的朋友已经借给他自己的床上,最后在早晨踢了他.“我不能负担得起两汉堡和一个今晚床.”约翰自言自语地说.他感到沮丧和绝望和了.突然,一个闪亮的跑车有迹象表明他不承认,冲他在街的拐角处,几乎把他打倒在地.这辆车甚至没开慢一点.约翰看漂亮的姑娘在它开走了,笑了.他回忆起当时的原因,他离开家乡去拉:要成为一个电影明星和驾驶一辆车,就这样.他还回忆的那一刻起,他就把木杆他的老板,如在公告中,每个城镇,他会成为最伟大的演员.
“哦,看看我吧.”约翰瞧不起他的鞋子,而站在这个相交.他们都破了,所有的尘土.“我在这双鞋.”他花了一步,但是他很忙,他didnn不能实现的信号已经变成了红色,一辆重型卡车是街口在其全速运行.汽车的声音和不安,约翰感到有东西被打破,很多落在他的某事虽然他很快开始失去意识,约翰仍然可以含糊的芳香气味是松树和枞树,他很熟悉.
“木两极…"约翰设法使一个英俊的微笑和他的最后一口气,但它太小了,有人来通知.这是3:08点在洛杉矶.巨大的迹象表明,沐浴着灼热的阳光,体现着优雅的银光在群山之中.
请问一下这段话有没有语法错误或者别的错误.如果有错误,帮我改改吧.
请问一下这段话有没有语法错误或者别的错误.如果有错误,帮我改改吧.
I am honored to come here.First,My speech is excerpt from Madonna`s speech in the MTV stage .As far as we know ,Michael Jackson was passed away two years ago.I love his songs and He is a respected person.OK,I`m ready.
biscuit19991年前1
夏日的一抹绿 共回答了27个问题 | 采纳率92.6%
I am honored to be here.First,my speech is different and far better than Madonna's on the MTV stage.As far as I am concerned,Michael Jackson was passed away two years ago.He is such a respected person and I love his songs very much.I am ready.
汉译英.背景是面试,说以前的一些成绩,这句话我时态掌握不好,高手帮忙改改
汉译英.背景是面试,说以前的一些成绩,这句话我时态掌握不好,高手帮忙改改
First, due to my hardwork, the salesman supported by me gets an
outstanding sales performance every month.
l35241061年前3
lcyyanzi 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率88.2%
First of all,due to my hard work,a salesman who was under my supervision used to get outstanding sales performance every month.
首先,由于我工作努力,我之前管理的一个销售员每月都能获得杰出的销售业绩.
原句是要表达这个意思么?您要给出你想表达的中文意思才好帮您修改啊.
是你自己销售业绩还是你管理下的销售员?因为我看到你用了被动的 supported by.另外如果是不止一个的话,要用 the salesmen,或 the salespersons;hard work 要分开写.口语里,first做开头不如用 first of all 效果好.
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帮我改改语法错误~Hainan is a beautiful place,it is the second larges
帮我改改语法错误~
Hainan is a beautiful place,it is the second largest island.The water is clear and the sky is blue .All the year round,there are many coconut palm trees,and you can on the long beaches do some watersports.Hainan is a populer city ,I think you should visit to there .There are many ways of traveling such as by plane,by train,by car and people can choose any of ways of traveling if they like.you can go there by plane,because it’s very fast.
I hope you will have a good time in Hainan!
香芋酥酥1年前7
到底要浪个 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率88.2%
Hainan is a beautiful place,it is the second largest island.[这句话两套主谓,少连词 改法1:将it改为which——定于从句.改法2:it前“,”改为“.”i大写]The water is clear and the sky is blue.All the year round,there are many coconut palm trees,and you can on the long beaches do some watersports.Hainan is a populer city ,[同第一句错误一样 改法1逗号改称句号 改法2:在逗号后加where 表示前一句在从句作地点状语 I think you should visit to there .(to应该去掉) There are many ways of traveling(也可写作travelling 英美用法) such as by plane,by train,by car and people can choose any of ways of traveling[前面已经提过 of travelling 省去更好] if they like.you [y大写]can go there by plane,because it’s very fast.
I hope you will have a good time in Hainan!
不知道你现在上几年级 不过要是高中作文显得水平不是很高 要是初中就比较好 从句运用不够熟练 不过有几处写的不错[if you like 这个省略句用得很好]
雅思剑5第一篇小作文,希望大牛帮助改改,顺便给个分数,
雅思剑5第一篇小作文,希望大牛帮助改改,顺便给个分数,
This tendency graph,which from 1940 to 2040,demonstrates the quota of population aged 65 and over in 3 countries,namely Japan,Sweden and USA.All three countries’ percentages stared from lower than 10% in 1940 up to approximately 25% in 2040.The proportion of Sweden and USA had the same increasing tendency from 1940 to 1990(about 7% to 15%),but the percentage of Sweden rose more rapidly than USA between 1990 and 2015 with a peak in 2010 about 20%.However the quota of Japan decreased a little bit from 1940(5%) to 1960(3%),and stayed constant from 1960 to 1980,then the quota increased to 2015 to about 10%.After 2015 the proportions of all three countries rise dramatically to 2040.From the whole graph can man summarize,that the proportion of this three countries will keep rising with an almost same tend.
gy07011年前1
asdgq2g2g3m 共回答了18个问题 | 采纳率94.4%
个别单词有拼写错误哦,第二句lower than改为(just) under更好,“but the percentage of Sweden rose more rapidly than USA”,USA前加that of,“between 1990 and 2015 with a peak in 2010 about 20%”,about前面加at.a little bit 最好改为slightly.“ After 2015 the proportions of all three countries rise dramatically to 2040.”这句话有歧义了,难道是比例上升到2040?另外注意时态,这里最好用将来,表明是推测的.雅思小作文尽量不要出现歧义.这篇作文整体来讲还是不错的,但是from to貌似用得有些太多了,可以用period,span这样的词来替代下.分数嘛,6.5左右吧.
修改下面一段话,只要改改语法和顺序是否正确
修改下面一段话,只要改改语法和顺序是否正确
Above all,we can draw aconclusion that pun is very important using in English advertisement.If we useadvertisement to spread the products,especially used with puns,the productscan become more competitive.lots of people may be absorbed in it.In today’ssociety,if you make full use of the advertisement.It can help a company a lot,and then they can win lots of consumers.There are main four kinds of punswhich are applied in advertising English; they are puns of homonymic,semantic,grammatical and idiomatic.I use six ways to translate in the paper,of course,there are other ways to translate the advertisement,I just choose six of them.Puns,as very important tools,can produce special pragmatic functions:theyare information function,humorous function,persuasive function,economicalfunction,readability function and association function.When you translate thepapers,it must be based on the concrete condition and then use other effectivemethods to express the meaning of text.It will help the future’s people toresearch Chinese advertisements if we study the English advertisementcarefully.And the successful translation of examples also helps translationagencies have a further development.
互动时空1年前1
lele4956 共回答了23个问题 | 采纳率91.3%
文章不错!值得帮 (you deserve assistance) GOOD LUCK!
Above all,we can [conclude] that puns [are] very important in English advertisement.If we use advertisement to [introduce/market] products[不必特定,删 'the'] especially with puns,the products can become more [attractive].A lot of people may be attracted to them.In our society today,if you [utilize fully] the advertisements.the [mediium媒介] can help a company to grow by bringing a lot of consumers.There are four main kinds of puns which are applied in English advertisements:puns of homonymic,semantic,grammatical and idiomatic.I use six ways to translate this paper.Of course,there are other ways to translate the advertisement but I just focus on six of them.Puns,as very important tools,can [generate] special pragmatic functions.They are information function,humorous function,persuasive function,economic function,readability function and association function.When [we] translate the papers,it must be based on the [solid] condition and then use other effective methods to express the text meanings.It will be helpful to others to do research [on] Chinese advertisements in future if we were to study the English advertisement carefully.Skilful translation of advertisement specimens also helps translation agencies to achieve further development.[ends]
"我好想______" 600字左右 不要整段复制 先改改再给我
"我好想______" 600字左右 不要整段复制 先改改再给我
"我好想______" 600字左右
cappiccino1年前3
醉爱柠檬 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率100%
我好想和你们在一起
你的身影时常在我的梦中出现,你的声音在我的耳畔萦绕,你的轮廓在我的眼前闪过,你是谁?我好想和你在一起!
  我反复地和你在梦中相遇,好似有一股无形的力量推动着我靠近你,想仔细看清黑暗中你的样子,但我看不清楚什么,只有一双或是温柔的、或是慈爱的、或是严厉的眼睛在我的面前闪烁.靠近你,我冰冷的心会温暖起来,郁闷的心就会开朗起来,彷徨的心会坚定起来,那种感觉真是美妙至极!
  我不停地追寻着你,想要抓住你,和你在一起.但我不能够——
  “当,当,当”,敲门声将我拉回到现实世界中来,妈妈端着牛奶走进来,看到我趴在书桌前睡着了,不禁心疼地说:“学累了吧,那就再多休息一会吧.”我心不在焉地答应了一声,就在妈妈转身离开的那一瞬间,我突然发现,妈妈的身影多么像我梦中的你呀!就在这个时候,外婆也轻手轻脚地走进了我的房间,对我说:“不要把自己身体学坏了呀,赶紧出去玩一会儿!”说完,收拾起我的房间来,临走时顺手把我的脏衣服带了出去.这时,我忽然觉得外婆的身影也好似梦中人呢!我糊涂了,用力地甩甩头,想把乱七八糟的思绪里清楚.“小A,你的电话!”正在客厅里为我修理复读机的爸爸隔着房间的门对我喊,我急忙忙地跑去接电话,哦,原来是老师打过来的.“AA,这次调研考试虽然不理想,但不要气馁,只要仔细分析原因,对症下药,我相我若有所思地回到了房间,坐了下来,静静地想着.我终于获得了答案,梦中人,我在生活中找到了你!你是我的亲人、老师、朋友,你给了我不尽的关爱、鼓励和帮助!你的爱护、信任和期望是我前进的动力,和你们在一起,我真的很幸福.
我好想回到从前
——那些被淡忘的时光,能否再来一段
阅卷老师,看到这个题目,也许你会感到讶异,正值十六岁的花季.我怎么会想回到从前呢?那么,就请听我慢慢道来吧.
我好想回到从前,回到那些不谙世事的时候.
我好想回到从前,回到那个天真烂漫的世界.
我好想回到从前,回到过去的旧时光,找寻过往的快乐.弥补曾经的遗憾.
回首过去,我看到的最多的,是什么?是鲜花?是掌声?是珍贵的友谊?还是欢乐的游戏?都是,也都不是.诚然,他们是过去的旧时光不可缺少的部分.可我看到最多的却不是它们,而是遗憾,各种各样的遗憾.
当我第一天迈入学堂,这个世界就以全新的面貌展现在我的面前.每一天,我都会被新鲜的事物所吸引,每一天都会有新的收获,每一天也都会添加新的遗憾.
我为我没有与发生不愉快的同学说声抱歉,而我们就已各奔东西而感到遗憾.
我为我当时选择放弃画画而感到遗憾,当我看到从前画的石膏像,而现在却无能为力了,我的心里泛起了阵阵酸楚.
为我从前没有更加努力学习而感到遗憾.
我为我从前让父母生气,为我担心,为我着急感到遗憾.
…………
“那些被淡忘的时光,能否再来一段”我喜欢这句歌词,因为我好像回到从前,如果还能“再来一段”.我一定会做得更好,我会努力去弥补那些遗憾.可我知道,时空不可逆转,过去了的,就永远的过去了.再怎么怨天尤人都是无用的.
所以我现在能够做的,就是好好的把握现在,因为“现在”总有一天,也会变成“从前”为了让未来的“从前”不再充满遗憾,我要进自己最大的努力去做好每一件事.我知道,这很难,但,我仍会努力!我想,到那个时候,我仍会“好想回到从前”,但不会是为了弥补遗憾了,而是为了品味曾经的幸福时光!
请大家帮我改改这段话!Well,I would rather like to the person who prefer
请大家帮我改改这段话!
Well,I would rather like to the person who prefers to solve any challenges all by myself.First,each challenge is a cherishing opportunity for me.If someone helps me with that,it means that i'll lose this chance.That's not what i want.In addition,trying some difficulties will develop your skills and enrich your knowledge.Thus only if,i am able to advance myself.Finally,if i figure out that challenge,i will become more confident.And that is beneficial to my study and life.As you know,if someone lack confidence ,he will lose every game in the society.
exy10221年前2
骆驼泉子 共回答了16个问题 | 采纳率100%
首先,我表示一楼完全在灌水.根本就没改几个错.
我改了很多语法错误,而且帮你改了下句式和用词.你读读看吧.
Well,I would rather be the person who prefer to solve any challenge all by myself.First,each challenge is a cherishing opportunity for me.But if someone helps me to solve it,then it means that I will lose the opportunity to solve it on my own,which is not want I want.In addition,taking on challenges will develop my skills and enrich my knowledge,and therefore I will be able to improve.Last but not least,by taking on the challenges,I will be more confident,which is beneficial to my future life since being confident means willing to take on challenge,and without confidents,one will miss a lot of great opportunities in the society.
好心人帮我改改托福作文崇拜的演员或运动员,WHY?It is universally acknowledged that
好心人帮我改改托福作文
崇拜的演员或运动员,WHY?
It is universally acknowledged that famous persons have a great influence on today's life.All things about them such as "what are they doing now","what will they do in the future",ect,are concerned by people.Why?Just because of their excellent character loved and respected deeply by people.If I had a chance to meet a famous person,there is no deny that I would choose Jacky chen who is hard-working,obliging and what's more he brings China to the world.
First of all,when it comes to an excellent character of Jacky chen--hard-working,we can not emphasize the importance of that too much to his success.His success which is not by lucky like some other enterainers is owing to his consistent endeavour and that is the most important character which I admire.Once he acted as a dead man at the beginning of his career,and the director asked him to lie on the ground without moving.The ground was cold and his body was numb,but he did not give
up and sticked to the task until it was finished.Eventually,his excellent performance leads to his success.
Additional,successful as Jacky chen is,he never forgets to help others.We could find his shadow from lots of charities,as an example of his kindness one must only look at his recent efforts in China to help raise money for SARS research,and he was almost the first entertainer who standed out to do some charities for SARS.Also,After the earthquake in Si chuan province in China,he sent his donation of large amount money to the area and did lots of performance for free in order to let more people pay attention to the area.
What's more,Jacky chen is not only known by Chinese but also known by world,nothing is more important than to bring China to the world in his career.He began to go into Hollywood and did a good job like what he had done in China.Many of his movies are popular worldwide,such as RUSH TIME,WHO AM I,ect.His movies let more people know him as well as China.
YI1311年前1
冰雪难融天 共回答了14个问题 | 采纳率92.9%
我看了看,说实在的,咱俩英语水平差不多,要是让我写也应该和你差不多,
从你的文章里可以看出来,你应该是上过补习班的吧.
我这里谈不上什么帮你改,只是和你探讨一下.
结构上,我觉得你最好加一个结尾,做一个综述,也就是all in all ,in conclusion什么的,用来再次强化主旨
还有,我建议你在可行的时间内尽量多打些字,虽然字数多分不一定高,但是,好像老外喜欢字数多的文章.
还有一点,就是最好能过多样化,灵活化你的词汇,好像你用的都是高中词汇,
试着用同义词替换一下出现过多的词汇.
希望对你有帮助
翻译:我从网站上得知了你关于XXX的研究工作.帮我改改这句话!
翻译:我从网站上得知了你关于XXX的研究工作.帮我改改这句话!
I learned from the website about your research works on XXX.
235235deng1年前1
揄扬19861125 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率94.1%
I learned your research on XXX from the website.
I learned from the website 就变成从网页中学习到了
本人仿写《爱莲说》写一篇文言文,望广大网友帮忙改改.
本人仿写《爱莲说》写一篇文言文,望广大网友帮忙改改.
水陆草木之花,可爱者甚蕃,北宋周敦颐独爱莲,唐杨贵妃爱牡丹,自李唐来,世人盛爱牡丹,予独爱海棠之即使当红一瞥,也要红艳娇世.其犹如秋菊,迎风怒放.不禁浮想联翩.
予谓莲,花之君子者也.海棠,花之奋斗者也.牡丹,花之富贵者也.噫!莲之爱,周后鲜有闻,海棠之爱,同予者何人?牡丹之爱,宜乎众矣.
lillian_cat331年前4
yyclone 共回答了12个问题 | 采纳率91.7%
1楼的 你个LJ 你会写么 你别这样打击人行不 你写的出来吗 那天 你发布作文 全部人都说LJ 你会怎么想 我觉的 你应该 学学那个打油诗 开个玩笑 你把几句写后面那个字 写成同音字 就ok了 你多大了 如果10到19岁 能写出这样的文言文 就 不错了 哈哈哈 我顶你
帮我改改这篇文章 英语!The Spinng Festival is coming,all of us are exci
帮我改改这篇文章 英语!
The Spinng Festival is coming,all of us are excited.We prepare delicious food,drings and buy fireworks.We wear new clothes because we need to visit some relations and they also visit us.
In the evening,we watch Spring Festival Gala Evening and set off workfires ,though it is very noisy but we thing it makes Spring Festival more interesting .Children always get a lots of money,butparents always order them to save money in thebank.This is the most sad things in the Festival!
这种文章所用的主要时态应该是什么,我是在春节前写的。
精灵蓝宝宝1年前2
bc8t 共回答了25个问题 | 采纳率88%
初中生吗?这种水平不错了.
语法和拼写错误的话,第一行drings改成drinks,Spring的拼写注意.倒数第三行thing改成think,去掉but.因为thought和but不能出现在同一个句子中.最后一行most sad 改成sadest.倒数第二行的order最好改成ask,order表示命令比较严肃一些.
内容能再充实的话就再充实一些,你能写得更好,对吧!有问题给我发信息.
时态的话,用一般现在时可以.但最好在The Spinng Festival is coming后面再加上一句During this time,和后面的内容时态连贯起来
能帮我改改这篇英语作文吗,极其的感谢~~~
能帮我改改这篇英语作文吗,极其的感谢~~~
Dear dad: As the Thanksgiving Days is coming, through all my life, I supposed you must be the first man I ought to express my gratitude.
Not only did you so much for me in material but also in psychology. Due to my silent character, in spite of I wanted to express some genuine statement of heartfelt appreciation to you, I have never bothered you just with a "thank you".
Dad, do you still remember? Once you wanted to teach me something in volunteer work, whereas I just taken your idea for rather firm and useless. Although I did not straightforward evaluate you concept, you still felt my aversion and draw a conclusion that I'm flashy. I was sad and angry at that moment, deciding not communicate with you any more. As time flying, I can slowly arrive at the highly state that you wish. Only you can tell me something about that, regardless of my reluctant. I love you.
Your lovely daughter
fiona8841年前3
欧罗巴痢疾 共回答了12个问题 | 采纳率83.3%
Dear dad: As the Thanksgiving Days is coming, I think you must be the first man through all my life I ought to express my gratitude.
You did so much for me not only in material but also in psychology. Due to my silent character, I have never bothered you even with a "thank you" in spite of my willingness to express my heartily appreciation to you.
Dad, do you still remember that? Once you wanted to teach me something in volunteer work, whereas I just took your idea for rather firm and useless. Although I did not straightforwardly evaluate you concept, you still felt my aversion and draw a conclusion that I was flashy. I was sad and angry at that moment, deciding not to talk to you any more. As time flying, I am slowly approaching to the high state that you expected. Only you can teach me something about that regardless of my reluctance. I love you.
英文:改语法!和改句子结构求高人帮我改改语法吧.我这文章写得幼稚,顺便帮我改改有些句子的结构.最好写的和美国人一样,加点
英文:改语法!和改句子结构
求高人帮我改改语法吧.我这文章写得幼稚,顺便帮我改改有些句子的结构.最好写的和美国人一样,加点修饰词之类的~
All three of these pieces are a portrait and there are deep meaning behind them.Andy Warhol helps Pop Art paintings and screen printings movement in the 20th century.Warhol’s Blonde makes me remember the characters in Avatar because of the blue skin.I think Avatar shows the changing from 20th century till now.In this picture,the woman looks plastic,and Warhol really likes plastic because he thinks plastic people are more beautiful than real people.According to the research he said he thinks people forgot what emotions were supposed to be during the 1960s.That is the reason he likes to focus on famous people’s faces and catch the emotion.My first thought on The Blonde is she looks happy.And then I focus on her face for 5 seconds,I think she looks a little bit upset.At the beginning I think she looks happy because the color is bright.Thus,the color of the picture can change the emotion.The Self-portrait is also from 20th century.Compared to Warhol’s Blond,the Self-portrait looks sad.From her picture we can see she really wants to stop wars because of her experience.She just can use his drawing to show her thinking and sadness.She doesn’t want to speak to others that she hates war,but she just hope his drawing can tell and resonate.The picture of Gudea statue is really different from other two pictures.Gudea was the ruler of the Sumerian city state of Lagash.This statue includes ruler ship and religion.And it reminds me the Chinese Buddha.The same idea is they have their own beliefs.The color of the Gudea statues are always dark because the dark color looks serious.Thus,people would respect it.
用什么名字才行1年前3
加三 共回答了15个问题 | 采纳率100%
你的文章大体意思表达的挺明确的,但是有的地方废话多,有的地方表达不简练 不清晰,记住读起来朗朗上口的文章就是好文章,你的对艺术作品的评价总的来说不错了,我就给改了几个小地方,希望你以后继续努力,再艺术鉴赏方面有所成就
All three of these pieces form a main portrait with a deep meaning behind .Andy Warhol helps Pop Art paintings and screen printings movement in 20th century.Warhol’s Blonde makes me remember the blue- skined characters in Avatar which shows the changes from 20th century to now.In this picture,the woman looks plastic,and Warhol really likes plastic because he thinks plastic people are more beautiful than the real.According to the research,he said,people forgot what emotions were supposed to be during the 1960s,which catalyses him focus on faces of famous people and catch their emotions.the first impression of mine on The Blonde is the happiness and then ,in around 5 seconds,upset.The first happy impression of mine ,I think,is due to the bright color.Thus ,in conclusion,the color of pictures can change the emotion.
Compared to Warhol’s Blond ,The Self-portrait is also from 20th century but focus on the sadness.In her picture we can see she really wants to stop the war.but what she can do is just drawing out the sadness.She doesn’t want to tell others that she hates the war,but she just hope her drawings can tell and resonate.The picture ,Gudea statue,is really different from the other two.Gudea was the ruler of the Sumerian city state of Lagash with ruler ship and religion inside.And it reminds me the Chinese Buddha for they all have their own beliefs.The color of the Gudea statues are always dark because the darkness confuses seriousness ,sadness and the respects of people inside.
你能帮我改改这个题吗?Problem A:CountingTime Limit:1000MS Memory Limit:
你能帮我改改这个题吗?
Problem A:Counting
Time Limit:1000MS Memory Limit:65536K
Total Submit:14 Accepted:12
Description
一本书的页码从自然数1 开始顺序编码直到自然数n.书的页码按照通常的习惯编排,每个页码都不含多余的前导数字0.例如,第6 页用数字6 表示,而不是06 或006 等.数字计数问题要求对给定书的总页码n,计算出书的全部页码中分别用到多少次数字0,1,2,…,9.
编程任务:
给定表示书的总页码的10 进制整数n (1≤n≤10000) .计算书的全部页码中分别用到多少次数字0,1,2,…,9.
Input
输入由多组测试数据组成.
每组测试数据输入只有1 行,给出表示书的总页码的整数n.
Output
对应每组输入,输出共有10行,在第k行输出页码中用到数字k-1 的次数,k=1,2,…,10.
Sample Input
11
Sample Output
1
4
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
代码是
#include
main()
{ char str[5];
x05int n,i,j,m,a,b,c,d,e,f,g,h,k,l;
x05while(scanf("%d",&n)!=EOF){
x05x05a=b=c=d=e=f=g=h=k=l=0;
x05x05for(i=1;i
1214175131年前1
semon55 共回答了9个问题 | 采纳率88.9%
求oj链接.
另外你为啥不用数组?定义那么多变量.
直接一个c[10]数组就搞定了.
另外别一道题发多次哈.
“错错错错错错不,不中改改算知知 "可以如何排列成一则格言?
永志zzy1年前1
huliuzhichun 共回答了13个问题 | 采纳率84.6%
.
首先:1.“错”字6个,“不”字2个,“改”字2个,“知”字
2个,“中”字1个;
2.确认对应关系,如“知错”“改错”等.
答案:“知错改错不算错,知错不改错中错”
以上
求大神帮我改改这段英语,从另一方面来说,石油本身就是一种宝贵的化工原料,可以用来制造塑料、合成橡胶和合成纤维等.把石油作
求大神帮我改改这段英语,
从另一方面来说,石油本身就是一种宝贵的化工原料,可以用来制造塑料、合成橡胶和合成纤维等.把石油作为燃料烧掉了,不但十分可惜,而且还污染了人类赖以生存的环境.解决这个难题的唯一可行办法,就是加紧开发新能源.根据调查显示,汽车所造成的空气污染占整个城市空气污染的60%甚至到90%.不可再生能源的日趋枯竭,城市污染的加重,世界范围内的温室效应,海平面升高等一系列环境问题都给我们人类的持续发展敲响了警钟,促使我们必须寻求一条绿色发展之路,寻找可以代替不可再生能源的新能源(清洁能源).毫无疑问具有清洁、高效并且取之不尽用之不竭等优点的太阳能被人们列入了第一考虑对象.
On the other hand,the oil itself is a kind of valuable chemicalraw materials,can be used to make plastics,synthetic rubber and syntheticfiber,etc.The oil as fuel is burned,not only great pity,but also pollutesthe environment to the survival of humans.The only feasible way to solve thisdifficult problem,is to intensify the development of new energy.According tothe survey,car air pollution caused by the 60% of air pollution in the cityand even to 90%.Non-renewable energy depleted,city pollution is aggravating,the world within the scope of the greenhouse effect,rising sea levels and aseries of environmental problems is the sustainable development of human beingsis a wake-up call to us,we must seek a path of green development,seek newenergy can replace non-renewable energy (clean).There is no doubt that isclean,efficient and inexhaustible advantages of solar energy has been listedas the first consideration.
嬲妮1年前1
everds 共回答了23个问题 | 采纳率91.3%
On the other hand,the oil itself is a valuable chemical raw material,can be used to make plastics,synthetic rubber and synthetic fiber etc..The oil as fuel is burned,not only a great pity,but also pollutes the environment for human survival.The only feasible way to solve this problem,is to step up the development of new energy.According to the survey,the air pollution caused by cars accounted for the entire city air pollution 60% or even to 90%.Increasing depletion of non renewable energy sources,aggravate the city pollution,the greenhouse effect in the world,the sea level rise higher a series of environmental problems are to our sustainable development of mankind has sounded the alarm,to which we must seek a green development path,look for new energy to replace non renewable energy (clean).There is no doubt has a clean,efficient and inexhaustible be inexhaustible solar energy has been included in the advantages of first consideration.
帮改改作文间如流水一般匆匆而逝,很多的记忆已随日子的消失而褪色.但有一件事,让我历历在目,感动不已——那一份深沉的母爱我
帮改改作文
间如流水一般匆匆而逝,很多的记忆已随日子的消失而褪色.但有一件事,让我历历在目,感动不已——那一份深沉的母爱
我觉得这段话感动不已后接那一份深沉的母爱,似乎有点不通顺
华府之主1年前3
第八秒 共回答了26个问题 | 采纳率88.5%
时间如流水一般匆匆而逝,很多的记忆已随日子的消失而褪色.然而,最令我历历在目,感动不已的,是母亲给予我的那一份深沉的爱.
一天,
请帮我改改句子,句意不变.第一小题:韩英郁是女生.1改成否定句,句意不变.( )2改成双重否定句,句意不变.( )3改成
请帮我改改句子,句意不变.
第一小题:韩英郁是女生.
1改成否定句,句意不变.( )
2改成双重否定句,句意不变.( )
3改成反问句,句意不变.( )
第二小题:童年的夏夜是美妙的.
1疑问句( )
2感叹句( )
3否定句( )
双重否定句( )
注意:回答问题时,把上面的复制下来,在括号里答题.
阳子晨1年前1
dayzheng 共回答了14个问题 | 采纳率92.9%
韩英郁不是男生
韩英郁不可能不是女生
韩英郁不是女生吗?
童年的夏夜是美妙的吗?
童年的夏夜是多么美妙啊!
童年的夏夜并不美妙
童年的夏夜不可能不是美妙的
谁帮我改一个英文句子给25分!这是一个英文改错题,我不会做你们谁帮我改改.请写清楚错在哪里,然后帮正确的写下来谢谢!th
谁帮我改一个英文句子给25分!这是一个英文改错题,我不会做你们谁帮我改改.请写清楚错在哪里,然后帮正确的写下来谢谢!this rose colored sweater was gave to my mother and i by my Grandmother who lives in atlanta
0000wpwp1年前4
安装 共回答了20个问题 | 采纳率85%
第一点,将gave 改成given .be given to s.b 表示被动语态,这件毛衣是给我妈妈和我的.
第二点,将I 改成 me .因为此处 谓语后要加宾语,所以 “我”要用宾格形式.所以用me.
一个小英语作文求高手帮忙改改错误的地方.
一个小英语作文求高手帮忙改改错误的地方.
I can't see you next week because i'm going on holiday witch my parents.
we always stay near a town very small on the coast.There is lovely and sandy beach and the sea is clear and warm.
The town has lots of old beautiful buildings.my parents like going to the galleries art but I get boring so I go to the shops.
you can buy cheaps clothes there.
I hope we go to my restaurant favourite.
Write back and tell me all your excited news.
看看形容词.有8个错误这里面..
sorrful梦1年前2
Carygao 共回答了30个问题 | 采纳率86.7%
I (won't) see you next week because (I'm) going on holiday (with) my parents.
we always stay near a (very small town) on the coast.There is (a) lovely and sandy beach and the sea is clear and warm.
The town has lots of (beautiful old) buildings.(My) parents like going to the (gallery) art but I get (bored) so I go to the shops.
you can buy (cheap) clothes there.
I hope we go to my (favourite restaurant).
Write back and tell me all your (exciting) news.
请大家帮我改改英文介绍大家帮我看看呀 这个是我的英文介绍 也许不是很好 帮我看下,可以修改的地方请告诉我It’s my
请大家帮我改改英文介绍
大家帮我看看呀 这个是我的英文介绍
也许不是很好
帮我看下,可以修改的地方请告诉我
It’s my pleasure to introduce myself to you here.
My name is Di wen yi.My English name is Yami.
I hope to come to apply for the reception of your company.
I'm very happy that I am qualified for this interview.
I am 23 ­years old, born in Shanghai..I am a faithful girl .
I have had two years' working experience
I have learned a lot about business and mastered basic office skills.
In addition, I learned how to cooperate with my colleagues from my previous job.
With strong determination, I believe I can succeed in the future.
I have lots of interest, such as drawing .reading and so on.
I hope to be your student.
I hope I can enter your department.
Thank you for your time.
Wish to see you again
du_star0071年前1
w_q1129 共回答了21个问题 | 采纳率100%
Hello!
My name is Di wen yi.My English name is Yami.I am 23 ­years old.I am here to apply for the reception of your company.
I have two years' working experience,and i learned a lot about business affairs and mastered basic office skills.
In addition,I learned how to cooperate with my colleagues from my previous job.
I have lots of interest,such as drawing .reading and so on.
With strong determination,I believe I can succeed in the future.
I hope I could be one of you.
thank you.
应该是应聘工作的自我介绍,所以我认为尽量口语化一点.长词和生僻词少用一些,既可以避免读音发错,又避免死记硬背临场紧张忘词.
另外就是干脆一些,其实对方都已经拿到你的简历,有些东西不必要说得那么详细.我觉得工作经验方面应该再加一些,就是曾经在哪个地方做过什么工作,如果有取得的成绩最好说一下.给人的感觉就是干净利落,这个工作可以做得了.
结尾不用那么烦琐,该说的说完了,一个THANK YOU就可以了.许多I HOPE会给人感觉你这个人比较罗嗦,而且也不自信.
一家之见,当然还可以改得更好.
请高手帮忙改改我英语作文中的错误,
请高手帮忙改改我英语作文中的错误,
If I were a boy
I wish I were a boy!
I still remembered that when I was a child,my parents ofter said to me “How I wish you were a boy.” Because if I were a boy,my father would not have lost his job,my family would be a good family.
Were I a boy,I would try my best to learn knowledge as much as possible.Because in order to support the family,parents try their best to work hard.I want to let them live a happy life.
1
If only I were a boy!
If I were a boy,I would help the girls who need help.
If I were a boy,I would take good care of my love and protect she.
If I were a boy,I would take good care of my parents and my little sister/ brother.
If I were a boy,I would…
2
Today,I would rather I had a job.
If I had a job now,I would make much money.However,I am studying in the college.To be frank,I would rather I had a job.Because I think if were at work,I also can get much experience and knowledge.I think it will be make me more wonderful.To be the truth,I am very regret to study here.If I had not choose to study here,I think I would be happy now.In addition,If I were rich,I would buy a house for my parents.I want to live a life of ease and make people around me have a good life.In all,I will try my best exertions to study and I can find a good job.
糊涂虫19851年前2
blxfkm 共回答了23个问题 | 采纳率95.7%
If I were a boy
I wish I were a boy!
I still remembered that when I was a child,my parents ofter(一般后面加现在时,used to) said to me “How I wish you were a boy.” Because if I were a boy,my father would not have lost his job,my family would be a good family.
(If I was,将were I删去)Were I a boy,I would(缩写成I’d会更好) try my best(也可用I’ll spare no effort) to learn knowledge as much as possible.Because in order to(删去in order to,I want/hope)to support the family,parents try(不是过去时吗,tried) their best to work hard.(好像不符语意吧,parents worked so hard that they were too exhausted to enjoy their life and)I want to let them live a happy life.
1
If only I were a boy!
If I were a boy,I would help the girls who need help.
If I were a boy,I would take good care of my love(lover) and protect she(her).
If I were a boy,I would take good care of my parents and my little sister/ brother.
If I were a boy,I would…
2
Today,I would rather I had a job.
If I had a job now,I would make much(a lot of) money.However,I am studying in the college.To be frank,I would rather I had a job.Because I think if(I) were at work,I also can get much experience and knowledge.I think it will be make me more wonderful.To be the truth,I am very regret to study here.If I had not choose(if I didn’t make a choice)to study here,I think I would be happy now.In addition,If I were rich,I would buy a house for(to,此为固定搭配!) my parents.I want to live a life of ease(want to后面改为live a easy life) and make(let) people around me have a good life.In all,I will try my best exertions(好累赘~删去吧) to study and I can(will比较符合语法规则) find a good job.
谁能帮我改改这篇作文?要给外国学校看的.收不收我就看这片作文了~尽量改得自然些,
谁能帮我改改这篇作文?要给外国学校看的.收不收我就看这片作文了~尽量改得自然些,
everyone has an admire historical figure?i also have,she is the person i admire most,helen keller.i believe you have seen (if gave me three days light).this is the famous book which moved the wold,be from the blind and deaf mutilated girl keller
helen keller was born in america,south.nineteen months old,because a bad illness,making her since then lost eyesight and hearing.eight,helen's mother for her to find a tutor -- anne miss sullivan,and enter the perkins copyright learning.at age 16,helen into harvard university affiliated cambridge college for women learn english history,german,latin,mathematics and many literary classics.four years after that,she goes into harvard university,began to try writing.after graduation from the university,helen heart concentrated in pushing the blind care the social movement,such as publishing blind journals,established security blind cell committee,making the blind by society heart finally value.in 1959,the united nations general assembly,the delegates consistent praise her contribution to human.in 1968,helen keller calm go through her hard and full of glory.
a deaf and blind can have made so great achievement,how amazing and admiration.if helen succumb to unfortunate fate,so,she will become a poor and foolish dodger.but she didn't head to fate,she with amazing perseverance,indomitable spirit,walked the way of life,and for the human make a great contribution,become a knowledgeable and respectable.helen's life,is no ordinary.she gave people a great encouragement,so that those who idling people very regret.she is the kind of indomitable perseverance,make me forever,that it is i admire her reason
尽量写得和***高中水平差不多.
我也有,她就是我最敬佩的人,海伦凯勒.相信大家都看过(假如给我三天光明).这个惊动世界的文学巨作,就是出自那个双目失明,双耳失聪的残废女孩海伦凯勒
海伦?凯勒出生在美国南部.十九个月大时,因为一场大病,使得她从此失去了视力及听力.八岁时,海伦的母亲为她找到了一位家庭教师——安妮苏利文小姐,并进入帕金斯盲校学习.十六岁时,海伦进入哈佛大学附属剑桥女子学院学习英文史,德文,拉丁文,数学及许多文学名著.四年后,她如愿进入哈佛大学,开始尝试写作.大学毕业后,海伦把心力集中在推行盲人关怀的***运动上,诸如出版盲人刊物,成立保障盲胞的委员会,使得盲人的心声终于受到***的重视.一九五九年,在联合国大会中,各国代表一致称赞她对人类的贡献.一九六八年,海伦凯勒平静的走完她艰辛又充满荣耀 .
一个盲聋人能取得这么大的成就,是何等的令人惊讶和钦佩.如果海伦屈服于不幸的命运,那么,她将成为一个可怜而又愚昧的寄生者.然而她并没有向命运低头,她以惊人的毅力,顽强的精神,走完了人生的道路,并为人类作出了伟大的贡献,成为一个知识广博、令人尊敬的人.海伦的一生,是不平凡的.她给予人们极大的鼓舞,使那些虚度光阴的人万分悔恨.她的那种坚忍不拔的毅力,使我为之感动,这就是我敬佩她的原因.额.这是中文原文.如果需要分的话,我可以去开几十个新号去给分你~
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Everyone has historical figure admired. I also have one, who is the person I admire most, Helen Keller. I believe you have seen the article if gave me three days light. This is the famous book which moved the wold, writen by the blind and deaf girl Keller.
Helen Keller was born in Southern America. 19 months after she was born, because of a serious illness, she lost her eyesight and hearing. At the age of 8, Helen's mother found a tutor -- Anne miss Sullivan for her, and enter the Perkins to study. At age 16, Helen entered into Harvard University affiliated Cambridge college for women learn English history, German, Latin, mathematics and many literary classics. Four years after that, she goes into Harvard University, began to write. After graduation from the university, Helen concentrated on pushing the blind care movement, such as publishing blind journals, establishing security blind cell committee. And she finally made the bind peoples voice be heard. In 1959,at the United Nations general assembly, the delegates consistently praised her contribution to human. In 1968, Helen Keller calmly went through her life hard and full of glory .
A deaf and blind women could have made so great achievements, It's amazing and worth admiring. If Helen submitted to unfortunate fate, she might become a poor and foolish lodger. But she didn't bend to fate, she with amazing perseverance and indomitable spirit, walked on the way of life, and made a great contribution to the human.She become a knowledgeable and respectable woman. Helen's life was not ordinary. She inspired the failed people and made people idoling feel regret. She perseverance moved me, that it is the reason why I admire her.
帮我看下这文章有没有错?错在哪?帮我改改!
帮我看下这文章有没有错?错在哪?帮我改改!
Could you help me go to the shop ,buy some drinks and chocolate .could you help me prepare six chairs Because have six my friend .They is Ann and Dan and Apple on so …..
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Could you help me buy some drinks and chocolate .could you help me prepare six chairs Because I have six friend .They are Ann Dan Apple and so on ……
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求专业英语翻译大侠,请进 .下面汉翻英是我翻译的,好像有些错误,请帮我改改,谢谢啊,
求专业英语翻译大侠,请进 .下面汉翻英是我翻译的,好像有些错误,请帮我改改,谢谢啊,
西方艺术史就是这样一个用光书写的历史,解读西方的艺术则可以从“光”在其文化和精神领域中的意味作为切入点,基督教教堂建筑艺术更是如此.文章通过对基督教教堂“光”的设计为线索,解析了安藤忠雄的“光之教堂”及其设计理念.认为该作品是“上帝之光”的中世纪教堂和“理性之光”的朗香教堂的逻辑发展,与后现代主义艺术注重“交流”与“对话”的大潮相契合.安藤忠雄的“光之教堂”的设计是“人性”的回归,所体现的就是“人性之光”.The history of western art is such the history be writing in light, interpretationof western art can be used as the starting point from the "light"’smeaning in its field of culture and spirit, Christian church architecture artis so. This paper analyzes Ando Tadao's "Cathedral of light" and it’sdesign concept through a clue--Christ Church's "light". Articlethinks that the "Cathedral of light" is the logical development of “godlight”-the medieval church and “reason light”- Ronchampand it corresponds to post modernism art tide what payattention to "exchanges" and "dialogue". Ando Tadao's"Cathedral of light" is back to the “human”and it embodies the “humanitylight”.
renliup1年前1
工艺121 共回答了16个问题 | 采纳率93.8%
楼主贴的翻译恐怕是机译的,特此翻译如下,请放心采纳.

The history of western art is such a history written with light,
so interpreting western art can start from the meaning of "light" in cultural and spiritual field, especially the art of Christian church architecture. The article takes the “light” design of Christian churches as a clue, analyzes the “ChurchofLight” designed by Tadao Ando and his design philosophy. It is considered that the work is a logical development of the medieval church such as “The Light of God," and the Ronchamp church such as "The Light of Reason", and agrees with the tide that the post-modernist art
emphasizes on "communication" and "dialogue". The design of Tadao Ando's "Church ofLight" is the reversion of "humanity", what it reflects is "the light of humanity."
求6级大神帮我改改语法错误!“When I feel lonely, onlyyou by my accompany,
求6级大神帮我改改语法错误!
“When I feel lonely, onlyyou by my accompany, when I the sad and helpless, only you by my side to silentcompanionship and guardian”, Shala, my best friend,it's a dog. It's very cleverand kind. It has white and soft furs with two small ears and a long tail. It isgiven by my aunt as my birthday. It is so friendly and lovely that we all loveit very much. It likes playing balls outside so I often take it our for a walk.It also likes to be clean so I wash it and make it clean twice every week. Itlikes one of my best friend. I often play with it after work.
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“When I feel lonely, only you ARE my accompany, when I FEEL sad and helpless, only you ,by my side to BE THE silent companion and guardian”, Shala, my best friend,it's a dog. It's very clever and kind...
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Go shopping
Today,my mother asked me,"do you want to go shopping with me."I thought a lot of time and said,"yeah,I'd love too."So,mother took me
to surpermarket."oh,how many things in the surpermarket."I bought a lot of things,soccer,a beatiful dress,books and a little fruit.The soccer was for me.I like it very much.The dress was for my sister,I thought,"she can be very happy."The books were for my dad,he never don't like books!Then mom took me home.
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海风花妞妞 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率94.1%
Go shopping
Today morning,my mother asked me,"Do you want to go shopping with me?"I thought for a lot of time and said,"yeah,I'd love to."So,mother took me to the surpermarket."Oh,how many things in the surpermarket!"I bought a lot of things,a soccer,a beatiful dress,books and a few fruits.The soccer was for me.I liked it very much.The dress was for my sister,I thought,"she can be happy very much."The books were for my dad,he like books all the time!Then,mom took me home.
帮我改改这句英语~It is one of the most traditional Chinese festival
帮我改改这句英语~
It is one of the most traditional Chinese festival which as important as Mid-Autumn Festival and Chinese New Year in China.
嫌我比你大七岁1年前1
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In China,It is one of the most traditional Chinese festival which "IS" as important as Mid-Autumn Festival and Chinese New Year .

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