有十处错误,找出并改正,并说明原因,Thank you very much for invite me

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有十处错误,找出并改正,并说明原因,Thank you very much for invite me
Thank you very much for invite me to your birthday party in Saturday morning .I’d like to come and I have to go to my hometown to see my grandparents .They were very old and unluckily they are not in a good health recently.My mother has already made a telephone call to them and promised visit them sorry I can’t attend your party.I hope you will understand all this.Here I wish you a lot fun on your birthday and much happy returns of the day.

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我爱小洁 共回答了27个问题 | 采纳率85.2%
1) invite -- inviting2) in Saturday morning -- on Saturday morning3) and -- but4) I have to -- I will have to5) They were -- They are6) they are not -- they haven't been7) in a good health -- in good ...
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ecnugrace 共回答了9个问题 | 采纳率
invite 变为inviting
IN Saturday 改为 on Saturday
and I 改为 but I
to see 改为to visit
they were 改为 they are
in a 去掉a
promised visit 中间加to
all this 改为all these
happy改为happier
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长弓箭 共回答了2个问题 | 采纳率
Thank you very much for invite me to your birthday party ,in Saturday morning .I’d like to come and I have to go to my hometown to see my grandparents .They were very old and unluckily they are not in...
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士寒 共回答了14个问题 | 采纳率
1) invite -- inviting
2) in Saturday morning -- on Saturday morning
3) and -- but
4) I have to -- I will have to
5) They were -- They are
6) they are not -- t...
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fxyd 共回答了1397个问题 | 采纳率
1. invite----inviting
2. in Saturday morning---- on Saturday morning
3. and ------- but
4. have to ----- will have to
5. were---- are
6. in a good health ----- in good health
7...
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更正在括号处标出,总共十处错误!
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This morning my cousin ran to my house, crying. She seemed very (sad). She said that she had a big fight (with/against) her parents. "I went to a concert (去掉the) last night. They didn't like it (and) scolded me when I came back," she said. My cousin was crazy about a pop singer. She buys all of his CDs and listens (加入to) his music every day. She goes to all of his (concerts) and cares about (everything) about (him). My uncle and aunt are worried about her and I guess that's (why) they scolded her. I hope my cousin will understand it's her fault not her (parents').
英语短文改错:下文共有十处语言错误,每句中最多有一处错误.错误仅限一个单词的增加,删除或修改.
英语短文改错:下文共有十处语言错误,每句中最多有一处错误.错误仅限一个单词的增加,删除或修改.
Tom and Dick are next door neighbour who both work in same office.They often walk together to and from work.Once they were walking to home together while it suddenly stared to rain.Tom quickly opened his umbrella and said proud,"My wife really has great foresight.She said this morning it would rain and tell me to carry my umbrella."Dick smiled and walked up to her under the protection of the umbrella,said,"Mine has even great foresight.She didn't let me carry one as she knew you'd share yours to me."
Faridah1年前1
linrr359 共回答了19个问题 | 采纳率100%
改正已经在括号处标明!刚好十处!
Tom and Dick are next door (neighbours) who both work in (加入the) same office.They often walk together to and from work.Once they were walking (去掉to) home together (when) it suddenly started to rain.Tom quickly opened his umbrella and said (proudly),"My wife really has great foresight.She said this morning it would rain and (told) me to carry my umbrella." Dick smiled and walked up to (him) under the protection of the umbrella,(saying),"Mine has even (greater) foresight.She didn't let me carry one as she knew you'd share yours (with) me."
用修改符号修改下面一段话(共十处错误,其中有两个错别字,三个用错的标点符号)三年前,我的哥哥十分淘气
用修改符号修改下面一段话(共十处错误,其中有两个错别字,三个用错的标点符号)三年前,我的哥哥十分淘气
······看!哥哥书包里的直尺·钢笔·课本·圆规等文具总是乱七八糟地放在一起.后来,在老师的教育下,哥哥克服了自己的缺点.在今年的庆“六一”文娱晚会上,哥哥表演的舞蹈和音乐特别精彩,这天,哥哥还光荣地被评为《庆阳市优秀少先队员》的称号.爸爸高昂地说:“我家的春天来了?”
怡桃碧谷1年前1
wonder76 共回答了20个问题 | 采纳率95%
三年前,我的哥哥十分淘气.(省略号改为.)看!哥哥书包里的直尺、钢笔、(课本删去,不属于文具类)圆规等文具总是乱七八糟地放在一起.后来,在老师地教导下,(教育不合适,用词不当),哥哥改正(克服困难还可以,克服缺点不可以)了自己的缺点.在今年的“六一”文娱晚会上,哥哥表演的舞蹈和演奏的音乐(不能说表演音乐)特别精彩.(话说完了大句号)这天,哥哥还光荣地被评为“庆阳市优秀少先队员”(书名号不对,称呼用引号)(词语重复,删去称号).爸爸高兴(用词不当)地说:“我们家的春天来了.(标点大句号)” 望采纳
英语改错高手进【急】十处错误:Have you ever seen rabbit's tail?When a rabbi
英语改错高手进【急】
十处错误:Have you ever seen rabbit's tail?When a rabbit see something dangerous,it runs away.Its tail,which is white,moving up and down as it runs.When the others rabbits see this white tail moving up and down,it run too,They know there is danger,The rabbit has told them something not making a sound When a bee has found some foods,it goes back to its home.Though it cannot tell the other bees where the food is by speaking to them,but it does a little dancing in the air.This tells them where the food is.
果子猫1年前3
镇守爱情cissy 共回答了16个问题 | 采纳率81.3%
Have you ever seen rabbit's tail?When a rabbit sees something dangerous,it runs away.Its tail,which is white,moving up and down as it runs.When the others rabbits see this white tail moving up and down,it (they)run too,They know there is a danger,The rabbit has told them something not(without) making a sound When a bee has found some foods(去掉s),it goes back to its home.Though it cannot tell the other bees where the food is by speaking to them,but it does a little dancing in the air.This tells them where the food is.
求高手做一道英语改错题一共有十处错误Last summer I went to London for a holiday
求高手做一道英语改错题
一共有十处错误
Last summer I went to London for a holiday.I spend just a week there.While I was staying there,I visited much places of interest but had lots of friendly talks with all kinds of people.I found a very interested thing there.One of my Chinese friend living in London has told me that many English families doesn't like to buy new television sets.There are many shops where can lend people TV sets.The shops are often filled with a great many people.Here they can borrow a set very easy,and it costs them only little money.Then it can be taken to home and used for long.
何方来客1年前4
xuminanne 共回答了13个问题 | 采纳率84.6%
spend--spent.much--many.but--and,interested--interesting,friend--friends,doesn't-don't ,where--which ,easy--easily,little--a little,to home--home
英语改错,达虾仁们进!前辈们最好把原文复制下来,然后在有错的后面加括号注明错误类型并改正,最多改十处)My parent
英语改错,达虾仁们进!
前辈们最好把原文复制下来,然后在有错的后面加括号注明错误类型并改正,最多改十处)
My parents decided to make a trip to Beijing .When they told me their decisions ,I was so delighted .But my mother became worried with her flower ,for nobody would take care of it .Seeing the worrying expression on her face ,suddenly I remembered that an article in a magazine I had read earlier .It's suggested in the article that people used a piece of cloth to take care of their plants when you are away .On the day we set off ,I found a piece of cloth and put one end of them into the basin ,which is full of water ,and the other end into the flower pot .Three days later ,while we came back from Beijing ,flower was still alive.前辈们请放心,鄙人和原文对了两遍(绝对用心地对),均未有发现哪抄错了,所以请前辈们大胆地改(最多改十处错误喔^_^) 越快越好,
ccbq132451年前1
jing-0315 共回答了15个问题 | 采纳率86.7%
have a trip,decision ,去掉became ,worried about,remembered of ,去掉that,use a piece,they are away ,where is full of ,when we came.按顺序来
英语改错 十处错误My family and i move to the US in 2003 from West Af
英语改错 十处错误
My family and i move to the US in 2003 from West Africa.In our first week in the US,they were walking towards a park when an American family went past to us .Their little boy said “Hi”to us when we got closely.We had no idea when to say.We did not know what "Hi" meant at that time .We decide to say "Hi" back,not know if it was the right thing to do.Anyway,few days later,we learned that it was the right thing to do .And since that time,we have formed the habit in saying "Hi"to friends,colleagues,and neighbor as well.
billycao1年前3
monibb 共回答了22个问题 | 采纳率90.9%
My family and i move(moved后面有具体的时间,要用过去时) to the US in 2003 from West Africa.In our first week in the US,they(we,后面是us,所以这里的主语应该是we) were walking towards a park when an American family went past to(去掉to,go past后面直接跟宾语,路过我们) us .Their little boy said “Hi”to us when(then这里时间有先后,要用then,表示然后) we got closely.We had no idea when(what,不知道说什么,要用what) to say.We did not know what "Hi" meant at that time .We decide(decided,要用过去时) to say "Hi" back,not know(knowing,现在分词短语作伴随状语) if it was the right thing to do.Anyway,few(a few,few是表示否定,这里要用a few 表示几天后) days later,we learned that it was the right thing to do .And since that time,we have formed the habit in(of,form the habit of doing:形成...的习惯) saying "Hi"to friends,colleagues,and neighbor(neighbors要用复数) as well.
短文改错 下面短文中有十处错, 每处错皆用底线标出, 请将答案填写在答
短文改错 下面短文中有十处错, 每处错皆用底线标出, 请将答案填写在答题卡相应的位置上。( 每小题只填一词, 不得改变原句意思。)
I am a Grade 8 student. I just moved to
Beijing with me parents two months ago.    _________
  66
Now I am study at a new secondary school   _________
   67
in Sunshine Town. It is big than my old school.  _________
    68
I do not know the new school very good and   _________
       69
I have no friends there . I do not know how   _________
   70
to talk to my new classmate . Sometimes, I   _________
    71
am very nervous and I can’t answer them   _________
       72
questions. I feel really comfortable when they  _________
     73
talk to me. During lunchtime, I always sit
alone at the playground and read books.  _________
 74
I hope they will not come on because   _________
     75
I feel so shy when they try to talk to me.
chenfenggaofei1年前1
ShiCC_2008 共回答了12个问题 | 采纳率83.3%
66. my67. studying68.bigger69. well 70.here 71.classmates 72. their 73. uncomfortable74. in ( on)75. over
短文改错,共有十处错误.没有单词拼写以及字母大小写错误.
短文改错,共有十处错误.没有单词拼写以及字母大小写错误.
I'm glad to receive your letter.I'd like to discussing the problem with you.It is true that some video games good for your thinking ability and they sometimes makes you feel relaxed.Therefore,you are spending too much time on them .you are not a little boy any more .you should learn to control you .why not to try to finish your homework first every day and then spend a little time play some video games I think ,as a student,the most important thing is to study hardly .you should try your best to get good grade in your exams and try to become an useful person in the future.
雨尹1年前1
jc09 共回答了22个问题 | 采纳率86.4%
discuss
are good
makes-make
therefore-but
you-yourself
to try-try
play-playing
hardly-hard
grades
an-a
扼,不对的话…
短文改错,一共十处 急 水平高点的来回答啊,准确率要高高高
短文改错,一共十处 急 水平高点的来回答啊,准确率要高高高
Yesterday,I went to cinema with my classmate Wang Li.We both liked the movie very much.On our way to home,I asked what she thought of the movie ."well,it is an interested movie.I liked them very much.But I don't think the leading actor did a good job,"She said .She then said anything else about movies .I am surprised ."how do you know so many about movies?"I asked."I want to be a movie director when I grow up,so I often study movies at my spare time ,"She said.I real admire her.From her I have learnt that if we want to do something in the future,we should prepare for it from then on.
杨柳依依001年前2
悍马已oo 共回答了9个问题 | 采纳率88.9%
On our way to home不要to
interested movie应是interesting movie
I liked them应是it
But I don't think 应是didn't
said anything else 应是nothing
.I am surprised 应是was
know so many about movies应是so much
at 应是in
real 应是really
admire应是admired
短文改错,一共有十处错误.Dear SirI'm writing to be one of the host famil
短文改错,一共有十处错误.
Dear Sir
I'm writing to be one of the host family for Chinese students.
Building in a beautiful neighborhood our large house meer their needs.Our car can take them to some places of interesting.With good English,I'll have no difficult communicate with them,Above all ,we host two Chinese students last year,through that we've gained much experience.In addition to,they'll enjoy Chinese food as my mother has wonderfully cooking skills.I would greatly appreciatr if I could have the chance to host them
Looking forward to your reply.
yours,
li hua
冷小希1年前2
IvorWang 共回答了19个问题 | 采纳率94.7%
更正楼上答案如下,保证准确率!
总共发现了十一处错误,估计有一处是楼主打错字了.
Dear Sir,
I'm writing to be one of the host (family改成families) for Chinese students.
(Building改成Built) in a beautiful neighborhood our large house (meet改成meets) their needs.Our car can take them to some places of (interesting改成interest).With good English,I'll have no (difficult改成difficulty) (communicate改成communicating) with them,Above all,we (host改成hosted) two Chinese students last year,through (that改成which) we've gained much experience.In addition (去掉to),they'll enjoy Chinese food as my mother has (wonderfully改成wonderful) cooking skills.I would greatly appreciate (加入it) if I could have the chance to host them.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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在线等英语短文改错 共十处 My sister Sarah was born with a bone missing o
在线等英语短文改错 共十处
My sister Sarah was born with a bone missing on her left foot.She can't walk like ordinary people.One day she came home and told me she has competed in the field day.There were a lot of races.I thought of she must have failed,and my minds raced as I tried to offer encouragement.So before I couldn say anything,she said:"IJohn,i won two of the races!" I couldn't believe!Because of her illness,she appears particular weak.I thought she must have been giving a head start.Again,before I could say anything,he said:"I didn't get a head start.I just tried hard than others!"
zhangyp20041年前1
83b6 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率88.2%
on her foot:in her foot

has competed:had cpmpeted
thought of:去掉of
minds:mind

offer:give
so:but
giving:given
particular:too

he:she
hard:harder
帮忙看下改错题十处错误When I was in high school,I had a great amount of
帮忙看下改错题十处错误
When I was in high school,I had a great amount of nice teachers.Instead,none of them was very influential in my life .my best teacher doesn't come along until I was in college.Not only was she intetesting,and she taught me much.She asked us to write fifteen -page about a movie.When I went to her with my paper,she encouraged her to use my cteativity and researched deeper into the movie.With her encouragement,I found more many information.She took times to dicuss my paper with me several times.In the end,I wrote a paper that I was proud on
When I was in high school,I had a great amount of nice teachers.Instead,none of them was very influential in my life .my best teacher doesn't come along until I was in college.Not only was she intetesting,and she taught me much.She asked us to write fifteen -page paper about a movie.When I went to her with my paper,she encouraged her to use my cteativity and researched deeper into the movie.With her encouragement,I found more many information.She took times to dicuss my paper with me several times.In the end,I wrote a paper that I was proud on
庭草无人随意绿1年前3
qqqqai 共回答了21个问题 | 采纳率81%
1.amount --number 2.in-- on 3.doesn't ---didn't 4.and ---but 5.fifteen--page 后加papers
6.her 改为 me  7.researched--research 8.去掉many 9times--time 10.on --of
急:一道英语改错题里面有十处错误:When I was young,I was fond jumping around.
急:一道英语改错题
里面有十处错误:
When I was young,I was fond jumping around.One day,I stood on my mom's dressing table or jumped off it.I got caught by something on a table so that neitheir of my feet couldn't reach the ground.When my mom came to help me off,I first took a picture of me hang and crying for help.Another day,I made myself to look stupid again in my dad's room.I try to jump from the bed to the sofa.I lost my balances and my head fell into the trash can.I couldn't get out because my dad had to pull me out of it.
漠然的过客A1年前4
liaolc198149 共回答了18个问题 | 采纳率88.9%
1.fond 后加of 2.or 改为 and 3.a 改为the 4.couldn't 改为 could 5. I 改为she 6. hang ---hanging 7.去掉to 8.try ---tried 9.balances---banlance 10. because ----so
找出文中十处错误,并改正 Sandy began a job as an junior school counselor
找出文中十处错误,并改正
Sandy began a job as an junior school counselor.
She was eager to help the students.one day during break,
She noticed a girl standing by himself at one end of the
playing field while the rest of the kid enjoyed a game of
football at the other end.
Sandy came up to the girl and ask if she was all right.
The girl said what she was.
But a little while late,Sandy noticed the girl was in the
Same spot,stlii on her own.
Coming close her again,Sandy said,”would you like
me to be your friend ”
The girl hesitated,then said,”ok,” loking for the woman
Suspiciously.
Feeling she was making progress,Sandy asked,”why
Are you standing here all alone ”
“Bcause,”the little girl said angry ,“ I’m the goal keeper!”
深蓝色的豆子1年前2
linwz168 共回答了12个问题 | 采纳率91.7%
Sandy began a job as an junior school counselor.
She was eager to help(to help改为helping) the students.one day during break,
She noticed a girl standing by himself(改为herself) at one end of the
playing field while the rest of the kid(改为kids) enjoyed a game of
football at the other end.
Sandy came up(去掉up) to the girl and ask(改为asked) if she was all right.
The girl said what(改为who) she was.
But a little while late(改为later),Sandy noticed the girl was in the
Same spot,stlii on her own.
Coming close (添加一个to)her again,Sandy said,”would you like
me to be your friend ”
The girl hesitated,then said,”ok,” loking for(改为at) the woman
Suspiciously.
Feeling she was making progress,Sandy asked,”why
Are you standing here all alone ”
“Bcause,”the little girl said angry(改为angrily) ,“ I’m the goal keeper!”
高考类型改错题,共十处错误,你懂的.
高考类型改错题,共十处错误,你懂的.
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school.She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons.It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that,I'll unable to control myself and forget all about my study.She also thinks it is had for my eye.But I really can't accept her ideas.In my opinin,watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day's hard wprks.Besides,it's important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad.Thus,we should't be forbidden to watch TV.
83呵呵虫1年前1
811313 共回答了19个问题 | 采纳率84.2%
About>with. A view. three去掉. full. Be unable. Had>bad. Eyes. Watching. Hardwork勤奋,不可数.At home and abroad. 典型的chenglish,自己读一遍会觉得拗口,还有别的错误.
英语短文改错,10处i就不大写了,十处,When i was in high school,most of my fri
英语短文改错,10处
i就不大写了,十处,When i was in high school,most of my friend had bicycles.i hoped i could also have it.One day i saw the second-hand bicycle,that was only one hundred yuan.i asked my father the money.But he said he could only give me half of money.He should find the other half myself.So i went to sell newspapers after school.My father was pleased if i showed him the money a month after.He gives me the other fifty.You can imagine how much happy i was when i rode to school on my own bicycle.
lvchaliu1年前5
pop5858 共回答了21个问题 | 采纳率100%
my friends
a second-hand
which was only
asked my father for the money
give me half of the money
I should find
when I showed
a month later
He gave me
how happy
英语短文改错有十处错误。I like riding my bike .Though it is not very new
英语短文改错
有十处错误。I like riding my bike .Though it is not very new,but it is my best friend.I find very convenient to go anywhere with a bike.Riding gives me not only exercises but also pleasure.I use my bike almost in summer when the weather is warm and dry.It can be very pleasant in winter when it is cold and rain is pour down.It can also be very dangerous.Of course I will be very carefully on my bike.In fact,accidents are not the only problem.Once I when to bookstore on my mother's bike to buy some books and come out to find the bike missing.Now I have two strong lock.
YYBL531年前1
jiushiw 共回答了16个问题 | 采纳率68.8%
一、改错(已在括号处标出改后的正确写法) I hope you are well. Thank所以答案为D mine = my bike.参考资料:英语牛人团团员
生物入侵者说明方法至少十处
ljyy11121年前1
888hhhfff 共回答了23个问题 | 采纳率91.3%
详细的说明生物入侵者的说明方法,在课文中出现的所有说明方法,说出它的作用和说明方法,至少十处
英语改错十处A performance in our city is making people to think mo
英语改错十处
A performance in our city is making people to think more about the overuse of plastic bags .In front of a supermarket ,five volunteers wore white plastic bags and walk around and through the crowd .The performance called on people to use less cloth bags instead of plastic ones .Some of the plastic bags wore by the performers were collected from customer in two food markets and all others were collected by 700students from asecondary school .On that day ,after leaving the food markets ,customers were asked to hand in the plastic shopping bags that we didn't need .Several hundreds plastic bags were collected for just two hours .
swjtuliang1年前3
qzlad 共回答了16个问题 | 采纳率81.3%
making-to make
walked
less-more
customers
all-the
we-they
didn't-don't
hundreds-hundreds of 或者直接去掉s
for-by
改错题(十处地方) I've come here for half a year.Life here is very i
改错题(十处地方) I've come here for half a year.Life here is very interesting.We got up early in t
ccnn311年前4
zhangxiumei 共回答了29个问题 | 采纳率89.7%
I've (been) here for half a year.Life here is very interesting.We (get) up early in
短文改错,求英语大神,共有十处错误
涛涛不绝№011年前1
SWIPA 共回答了15个问题 | 采纳率80%
out---out of
wondered that---wondered whether
realize---realizing
tooth---teeth
pulled---put
walk---walked
thickly---thick
covering---covered
but---and
we---they
跪求小石潭记赏析!小石潭记十处赏析!明天要交的 字数要够,别太少就行是小石潭记文中的句子来赏析的!.
lvbasen1年前1
mm愤亲 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率88.2%
小石潭记
从小丘西行百二十步,隔篁竹,闻水声,如鸣佩环,心乐之.伐竹取道,下见小潭,水尤清洌.全石以为底,近岸,卷石底以出,为坻,为屿,为嵁,为岩.青树翠蔓,蒙络摇缀,参差披拂.
潭中鱼可百许头,皆若空游无所依.日光下彻,影布石上,佁然不动;俶尔远逝,往来翕忽.似与游者相乐.
潭西南而望,斗折蛇行,明灭可见.其岸势犬牙差互,不可知其源.
坐潭上,四面竹树环合,寂寥无人,凄神寒骨,悄怆幽邃.以其境过清,不可久居,乃记之而去.
同游者:吴武陵,龚古,余弟宗玄.隶而从者,崔氏二小生:曰恕己,曰奉壹.
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从小丘向西行走一百二十步的样子,隔着竹林,就能听到水声,好象挂在身上的玉佩、玉环相互碰撞的声音,心里很是高兴.于是砍了竹子,开出一条小路,顺势往下走便可见一个小潭,潭水特别清澈.整个潭底是一块石头,靠近岸边,石底有的部分翻卷出水面,形成坻、屿、嵁、岩等各种不同的形状.青葱的树木,翠绿的藤蔓,遮盖缠绕,摇动低垂,参差不齐,随风飘动.
潭中游鱼约有一百来条,都好象在空中游动,没有什么依靠似的.阳光直射潭底,把鱼的影子映在水底的石面上,呆呆地不动;忽然间又向远处游去了.来来往往轻快敏捷,好象在与游人一起娱乐.
顺着水潭向西南方向望去,溪流象北斗七星那样曲折,又象蛇爬行那样弯曲,或隐或现,都看得清楚.溪岸的形势象犬牙般交错参差,无法看到水的源头.
我坐在潭边,四周有竹子和树林围绕着,静悄悄的没有人迹,使人感到心境凄凉,寒气彻骨,真是太寂静幽深了.由于这地方过于冷清,不能长时间地停留,于是就把当时的情景记下来便离去了.
同我一起游远的人,有吴武陵、龚古,我的弟弟宗玄.作为随从跟着我们来的,有两个姓崔的年轻人,一个叫恕己,一个叫奉壹.
《小石潭记》赏析
柳宗元的山水游记,是他散文创作中具有高度艺术技巧和最富于艺术独创性的一个部分.而在他篇数不多的山水游记中,《小石潭记》可以说是一篇很有代表性的作品.
《小石潭记》是《永州八记》中的一篇.这篇散文生动地描写出了小石潭环境景物的幽美和静穆,抒发了作者贬官失意后的孤凄之情.语言简练,生动,景物刻画细腻、逼真,全篇充满了诗情画意,表现了作者杰出的写作技巧.因之,成为被历代所传诵的散文名篇.
这篇游记一共可以分为五段.
第一段,作者采用的是“移步换景”的手法,在移动变换中引导我们去领略各种不同的景致,具有极强的动态的画面感.
“从小丘西行百二十步,隔篁竹,闻水声,如鸣佩环,心乐之.”文章一开头,便引导我们向小丘的西面步行一百二十步.来到一处竹林,隔着竹林,能听到水流动的声音.“篁竹”就是成林的竹子;“如鸣佩环”是形容流水的声音的清脆悦耳,犹如玉佩玉环相互撞击时发出的声响.文章由景及情,写来极为自然.“伐竹取道,下见小潭.”在浓密的竹林之中,砍伐出一条小道来,终于见到一个小小的池潭.至此,小石潭的全部面目才呈现在我们面前.这一番由小丘到篁竹,由篁竹到闻水声,再由水声寻到小潭,既是讲述了发现小潭的经过,同时也充满了勾人的悬念和探奇的情趣,逐渐地在人们眼前展开一幅美妙的图画.从此往下,作者便把笔力放在了对池潭的精心描写上.“水尤清冽,全石以为底,近岸,卷石底以出,为坻,为屿,为,为岩.”小石潭的水格外清凉,而且整个小潭全部是由石头构成的.整个潭底便是一块大石头,在靠近池岸的地方,水底的石头翻卷地露出水面.这些石头千姿百态,形状各异.“坻”即为水中的高地;“屿”是小岛;“嵁”不平的岩石; “岩”都是岩石的各种形态.总之,这完全是一个由各种形态的石头围出的池潭,所以,作者为它起名曰小石潭.“青树翠蔓,蒙络摇缀,参差披拂.”就是作者对于池潭上景物的描绘了.有青青的树和翠绿的藤蔓,它们缠绕在一起,组成一个绿色的网,点缀在小潭的四周,参差不齐的枝条,随风摆动.这潭上的描绘仅12个字,便将小石潭周围的极幽极佳的景致展现在我们面前,令我们愈加觉出小潭的美妙所在.
第二段,作者描写的是潭水和游鱼.这一段,作者采用了与第一段不同的手法,变“移步换形”为“定点特写”.这是全篇中极为精彩的一段.特别是对水中游鱼的描写,更是栩栩如生.“潭中鱼可百许头,皆若空游无所依.日光下彻,影布石上,然不动;尔远逝,往来翕忽.似与游者相乐.”这是一幅极美的画面.在水中游动的鱼儿,不像是在水里,而是像在空中游动.太阳光照下来,鱼儿的影子落在了潭底的石头上.从字面上看,作者是在写鱼,但透过字面,却令我们不能不对那清澈的潭水留下极深的印象.这种游鱼和潭水相互映衬的写法,收到了很好的艺术效果.下面,作者进一步对鱼儿进行描述.先是鱼儿呆呆地一动不动,忽然,有的鱼飞快地窜向远处,一会儿游到这儿,一会儿又游到那儿,好像是在与游人一同享受着快乐.读到这里,我们又不能不从游鱼联想到作者的欢悦心情.这种由情入景,由景及情的写法正是这篇散文的一个突出特色.
第三段是探究到小石潭的水源及潭上景物.“潭西南而望,斗折蛇行,明灭可见.其岸势犬牙差互,不可知其源.”向西南望过去,一条小溪逶迤而来,形状像是北斗七星那样曲折,又像是一条蛇在游动,有的地方亮,有的地方暗.小溪两岸高高低低,凸凹不平,犬牙相错.这里,作者非常成功地使用了比喻的手法,用北斗七星的曲折和蛇的爬行来形容小溪的形状,用狗的牙齿来形容小溪的两岸,使我们倍感形象逼真.
第四段写出了作者对小石潭总的印象和感受.“坐潭上,四面竹树环合,寂寥无人,凄神寒骨,悄怆幽邃.以其境过清,不可久居,乃记之而去.”坐在小石潭上,四周环抱着密密的竹子和树木,非常寂静,见不到人,令人神色凄凉,骨彻心寒,精神上也不免悲怆幽凉.因为它的境况太幽清了,不适宜让人长久地呆下去,便题了字后离去.在这一段中,作者突出地写了一个“静”字,并把环境中的静深入到心神中去,情景相融,写出了一种凄苦孤寂的心境.这无疑是作者被贬后心情的曲折反映.
最后一段,《小石潭记》是一篇语言精美,含义丰富,形象逼真的优秀山水游记.它表现了作者那种对于事物的深刻观察力和独特体验,同时也表现了作者深厚的艺术功力.文章中所使用的那些描绘景物细致入微的手法和巧妙、形象的比喻,都值得我们很好地借鉴.
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英语改错十处
Today is Sunday.The sky is full of sunshine ,so does my life .At about 9:00a.m.,I go to the bookstore with my friends.There was a lot of new books.I didn’t know which one to buy ,because there books were all use to me .At last ,I chose two.
At 10:00,we went to the cinema .The film calling Titanic was very popular .It took us about 3 hours to see.Having seen the film,and everyone was deeply moved.Some friends even burst out tears.From the story,I understand that love is noble and valuable.That’s a really wongderful film .It is very worth seeing again.
What a happy day!I hope tom orrow I will be even happy!
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第二排was改为are ,didn't改为don't,there改为those,were改为are,two后面加上of them,went改为go,calling改为called,was改为is,took改为takes,see改为watch,was改为is,out改为into,漂亮的wanderful,even改为more
顺便说一句,一篇文章中,如果用过去式就一直用过去式,不能想用什么就用什么,
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The World Trade Center in New York city burned in the morning of September 11st,2001 after the twin 110-storey towers were hit by two hijacked planes crashing into them.Both towers felt an hour after the attack.Pedestrians nearby ran for their life as one of the twin tower collapsed directly behind them.The third hijacked plane crash at the Pentagon in Washington.The building of US Defence Department seriously damaged.Smoke was seen in the US Capital at the back.Latestreport says what 276 people are proved daed and 6 453 missing.
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1.in the morning 改为on the morning 2.after the winter改为删去the 3.在110-storey前面加the 4.felt改为fell 5life 改为lives 6.one of the twin tower 改为复数one of the twin towers 7.crash改为crashed 8.seriously前面加was 9.what改为that 10.are proved 改为删掉proved,11.daed应该改为dead ,是你打印错误吧.希望我能帮得了你.
英文改错急!共十处错误.不区分大小写.with the development of the internet,shop
英文改错急!
共十处错误.不区分大小写.
with the development of the internet,shopping on the internet have become common in our life.consumers can buy almost everything we need there.shopping on the internet has a lot of advantages,of them the most important is perhaps its convenience.people didn't have to waste a lot of energy and time to go from one shop to other to choose what they like.all they need to do is to sit in front their computers and click the mouse.therefore,it also has disadvantages,the first is that some shops on the internet may not deliver something to you after they get money from you.once be cheated,you will find you have nowhere to complain.
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1.第一行have改成has
2.第二行we改为they
3.第三行,逗号后面应为:the most important of them
4.第三行didn't 改为don't
5.第四行,time后面to go改为going
6.第四行other改为another
7.第五行front和their之间加of
8.第五行click后面加on
9.第五行therefore改为However
10.第六行something改为things
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英语短文改错 一共有十处错误
The most exciting event in this week was the sports meet on Tuesday.I took part in the boy's 400-Meter relay race,in it there were four teams competing.I was a third to run in my team.At the very beginning,our team's first runner fel behind the others three teams.Then our team's second runner catches up with one of them.When I started to run,I ran as faster as I could hope to change the situation,but it was no use.We got the third place when the race ended,we still thought we were the winners because we have tried our best.
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The most exciting event (去掉in) this week was the sports meet on Tuesday. I took part in the (boy's改成boys') 400-Meter relay race,in (it改成which) there were four teams competing. I was (a改成the) third to run in my team. At the very beginning,our team's first runner fell behind the (others改成other) three teams.Then our team's second runner (catches改成caught) up with one of them. When I started to run,I ran as (faster改成fast) as I could (hope改成hoping) to change the situation,but it was no use. We got the third place when the race ended,(加入but) we still thought we were the winners because we (have改成had) tried our best.



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短文改错 十处 改的不全 Lu Jun,a teenager from Hebei ,has a ture friend
短文改错 十处 改的不全
Lu Jun,a teenager from Hebei ,has a ture friend named Wang Ming.Lu Jun has a serious disease that makes it walking difficult for him .As a young child ,Lu Jun would wait for his mother pick him up from school,but one day,she was able to make it.Seen this ,Wang Ming offers him a ride home-on his own back.Ever since,he had carried his best friend to and from school,and though helped him get around the school hallways .Nowadays,Lu Jun is a lot heavy than he was ,but Wang Ming says that carry him is no problem.Lu Jun feels very luckily to have a friend like him.
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Lu Jun,a teenager from Hebei ,has a ture friend named Wang Ming.Lu Jun has a serious disease that makes it (it 去掉)walking difficult for him .As a young child ,Lu Jun would wait for his mother pick (pick 改为picking)him up from school.But one day,she was able(able改为unable) to make it.Seen(改为Having seen) this ,Wang Ming offers(改为offered) him a ride home-on his own back.Ever since,he had(改为has) carried his best friend to and from school,and though(去掉though) helped him get around the school hallways .Nowadays,Lu Jun is a lot heavy(改为heavier) than he was ,but Wang Ming says that carry(改为carring) him is no problem.Lu Jun feels very luckily(改为lucky) to have a friend like him.
找出这里的十处错误My favorite sport was footballl.I am a member of ou
找出这里的十处错误
My favorite sport was footballl.I am a member of our school football team.We practise three time every week and often see football matches on TV together.Playing football not only make us grow up tall and strong but also gives a sense of fair play and team spirit.We will always remeber when we play for the team instead of ourselves.Also,a sport teaches us the important of obedience.Each player must obey the captain,that is the leader of the team.You must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.
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My favorite sport was football.——was改成is.
We practise three time every week and often see football matches on TV together.——time改成times.
4.5.Playing football not only make us grow up tall and strong but also gives a sense of fair play and team spirit.——make改成makes;去掉up;fair改成fairly.
6.We will always remeber when we play for the team instead of ourselves.——去掉will.

7.8.Also,a sport teaches us the important of obedience.——Also改成Moreover,a改成the.
9.Each player must obey the captain,that is the leader of the team.——that改成who.
10.You must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.——you改成we.
找出下文的错误并改正 共有十处Dear Ann,Thank you of your e-mail.I'm glad to
找出下文的错误并改正 共有十处
Dear Ann,
Thank you of your e-mail.I'm glad to get it.Five others students in our class have pen-friends in other countrys,too.They also get e-mails from their friends.One of the e-mail is from America,three of them are from Australian,and the other one is from English.
Now let me tell you something for my holiday.I go to Beijing with Dad and Mom last week.We visited Beihai Park,the Forbidden City,Ruins of Yuanmingyuan and so on.In Beijin Zoo I looked some lovely pandas.
What about your holidays?
Yours,
Han Mei
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改错只需改十处 最好十分钟之内就有答案 感激不进呀~
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One morning a man crossing a bridge when he saw a man fishingunder him,so he stopped to watch him quiet.After a while,the man pulled her line in.There is a big fish at the end of it.The man took it off the hook and throw it back into the water.A few mintue later,he caught other big fish.Again he threw it back to.Then ,he caugh the small fish.He put it into his basket was suprising and asked why.The man answered,"samll fryingpan"
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One morning a man (加was) crossing a bridge when he saw a man fishing (加空格)under him,so he stopped to watch him quiet (改为 quietly).After a while,the man pulled her ( 改为 his) line in.There is (改为 was) a big fish at the end of it.The man took it off the hook and throw (改为threw) it back into the water.A few mintue (改为munites) later,he caught other big fish.Again he threw it back to(去掉这个to).Then ,he caugh the (改为 a) small fish.He put it into his basket ( 加标点.和He) was suprising (改为surprised) and asked why.The man answered,"samll (改为small) frying (加空格)pan"
名句默写。(填对十处即可)⑴海内存知己, _________             _______ 。(王勃《送杜少府
名句默写。(填对十处即可)
⑴海内存知己, _________ _______ 。(王勃《送杜少府之任蜀州》)
⑵俱怀逸兴壮思飞, 。(李白《宣州谢朓楼饯别校书叔云》)
⑶行到水穷处, 。(王维《终南别业》
⑷不畏浮云遮望眼, ______ _________ _。(王安石《登飞来峰》)
⑸明月楼高休独倚,酒入愁肠,_______________。(范仲淹《苏幕遮》)
⑹人有悲欢离合, 。(苏轼《水调歌头》)
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英语短文改错 共十处
The other day I visited to a nursing home with some flower.I wanted to see an elderly lady who had been put there and forgot.I walked into the room of the elderly lady call Jane.I had never seen her ago.All that I knew about her was whether her daughter would not come to see her.When she saw her,she looked up and cried.She said,"I love you."She said it again and again,but then she felt a lot better.I notice she was cold.I decided I would call on her again this Sunday with a pair trousers for her.
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The other day I 【①visited to】 a nursing home with some 【②flower】.I wanted to see an elderly lady who had been put there and 【③forgot】.I walked into the room of the elderly lady 【④call】 Jane.I had never seen her 【⑤ago】.All 【⑥that】 I knew about her was 【⑦whether】 her daughter 【⑧would】 not come to see her.When she saw her,she looked up and cried.She said,"I love you."She said it again and again,but then she felt a lot better.I 【⑨notice】 she was cold.I decided I would call on her again this Sunday with a pair 【⑩】 trousers for her.
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总共十处错误第一段是图片上的,第二段是Therefore,the students who bring mobile p
总共十处错误
第一段是图片上的,第二段是
Therefore,the students who bring mobile phones should turn it off i n class because we are supposing to concentrate on our lessons.What's more,talking on the phone and sending short messages in class have a bad influence on teachers and other students
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个人认为更正如下:
1. the senior改成a senior
2. is hear改成is heard
3. which disturb改成which disturbs
4. play games改成playing games
5. the short messages改成short messages
6. we students改成us students
7. turn it off改成turn them off
8. are supposing改成are supposed
9. phone and sending改成phone or sending
10. have a bad改成has a bad