金顶的大气压为83.6KPA,求金顶海拔高度

1.峨嵋山位于中国西南部的四川省,距成都156公里,走高速公路需1.5小时.Mountain Emei is situated in Southwest Part of Sichuan Province of China with a 156KM distance away from Chendu and 1.5 hours's drive by expressway
2.主峰金顶绝壁凌空高插云霄,巍然屹立.The main peak with goldtop cliff is high up in the sky and standing magestically
3.登临其间,可西眺皑皑雪峰,东瞅莽莽平川,气势雄而景观奇,有云海、日出、佛光、圣灯四大奇观.To climb among them can overlook pure white snowy peak from the west and catch sight of the luxuriant pingchuan from the east with magnificent in its imposing manner and marvellous in its landscape.with sea of clouds ,sunrise ,The light of Buddha and sacred light to be appreciated
4.中部群山峰峦叠峰,含烟凝翠,飞瀑流泉,鸟语花香,草木茂而风光秀,是我国著名的游览胜地,1996年被联合国教科文组织列入“世界自然与文化遗产”.The mountains in the middle are the overlapped ridges and peaks with smoky and impacted emerald green and waterfall and flowing spring and bird's twitter and fragrance of flowers and luxuriant grass and landscape view ,which is the famous tourism resort of our country and included in "World Natural and Cultural Heritage " by UNESCO in 1996
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逐步改为逐渐
“逐步”的意思是“一步一步地”,“逐渐”的意思是“渐渐”.从句意看,“形成”时是“渐渐”,而不是“一步一步地”,所以应改为“逐渐”.

列数字 很明显的
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A ①吉林雾凇多在每年12月下旬到翌年2月时集中出现，也是全年当中观赏吉林雾凇的最佳时节。所以春节期间来吉林市赏雾凇，正好在最佳观赏期内。②佛光的出现无原则要阳光、地形和云海等众多自然因素的结...