电子邮件 作文

An E-mail
Dear Jenny,
How are you getting along these days?I hope everything is all right.But I am upset these days because of my parents.I think they take care too much about
me and too overvalue my grades.I have to tell them my every exam and my grades.If I do well,they are happy.If I don’t,they would be every sad and
nervous,especially my mother.My mother even makes a detailed plan for my future.In her plan,I will go the best senior school of my city and then go to a
top university of our country.She wants me to be a civil servant in the future,because this job is steady and well-paid.But I don’t like it; I want to be
a journalist.I feel so upset about her plan.I told them my feelings before,but they never listened to me and said what they doing are good for me.What
should I do?

电子邮件正文不用空格,但是每段要空一行.Yours 和 Li Ling都顶格.
如：（注意除了格式,有三处小更正：1.be some help 改为 be of some help; 2.Li ling,改为Li Ling; 3.Li Ling后面的句号去掉了.这样才是严格的准确.
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Lucy,
Glad to receive your Email.You told me in your mail that...
In my opinion...
I hope my idea would be of some help to you.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Ling

An E-mail
Dear Jenny,
How are you getting along these days? I hope everything is all right. But I am upset these days
because of my parents. I think they take care too much about me and too overvalue my grades. I
have to tell them my every exam and my grades. If I do well, they are happy. If I don’t, they
would be every sad and nervous, especially my mother. My mother even makes a detailed plan for
my future. In her plan, I will go the best senior school of my city and then go to a top
university of our country. She wants me to be a civil servant in the future, because this job is
steady and well-paid. But I don’t like it; I want to be a journalist. I feel so upset about her
plan. I told them my feelings before, but they never listened to me and said what they doing are
good for me. What should I do?

在我生命的长河中，有无数道迸溅的水花，它们构成了我生命的交响曲。水花里有我给予自已的勇气，有朋友给予我的帮助，也有父母给予我的鼓舞和爱。一个星期天的上午，我正在写作业，时不时发出一声长叹：“啊，小考哇！”爸爸正在上网听见，于是也接了一句：“啊！郭冰呀！”我也听见了便笑了起来。“唉，郭冰快来，这是我昨天给家里发的一封邮件。”爸爸兴奋似地叫我，我急忙跑过去看，可是我一看便呆住了：“儿子，快要小考了，这是人生的第一个十字路口，抓住机遇，爸爸相信你能考上一所理想中学。儿子，加油吧！”霎时间，整间屋子仿佛定了格，只有风一个劲的往屋里吹，那风是温暖的，是惬意的。爸爸，我知道现在的情况，我也知道你们的心情。毕业考试它牵动每一个学生、老师、家长的心，你们也一样，一直在为我的成绩担心。不过，你们不必太担心。从打上六年级来，我发现自已的成绩一直上升。在数学课上，我专心听讲，遇到难题也从不轻易放弃，越是难我就越有征服它的欲望。外语课上，我表现十分活跃，老师对我的态度改变了。语文课上，我很努力，尤其是在作文上我进步了很多。爸、妈，你们不用太担心，我会努力的，尽我的全力来迎接毕业考试！我又望了望爸爸，他一直盯着显视屏，眉头稍皱，头发稀疏了很多。我不想再持续这气氛，便故意问：“源哥家有没有‘信箱’？回来问问。”说着，便又“啃书”去了。而爸爸又在点击着鼠标。你们看，就是这无数迸溅的水花构成了我生命的交响曲，在我生命的长河中回响、回响……