On Nov.18th,1908,three men went up in a balloon(气球)的翻译

翻译：
1908年11月18日,三个人登上了热气球.
他们很早在伦敦准备开始了,领头的男人叫Augusta Gaudron,其他两个男人叫Tannar 和Maitland.他们有一个很大的热气球,并且准备好有一个很长的旅程了.
不久他们听到下面大海的声音.他们带着普通的绳子,绳子挂在热气球下面的篮子上.在绳子末端他们绑了一个金属的箱子,箱子里装睡或者是空着.这样他们可以调节重量,他们也带了几包沙子.
太阳下山后,气球就升得更高了.它升到3000米高,空气很冷.气球里的是结成了冰.雪从他们的篮子旁飘过,他们可以看到地面上有更多的雪.还有一些雪在气球,使得气球变的更重了.它开始向地面下降.这个男人想扔掉一些沙包,但是太硬了.他们试图用刀把冻住的沙子打散,但不是一件容易的事.这项工作是缓慢的,他们仍然在下降,所以他们不得不扔掉一些整袋的沙子.他们中有个人掉在了结冰的湖面上,在冰面上砸了个黑黑的洞.
总算把箱子拽着放进筐里了,但雪依然在下,他们只得爬离那里.他们上升到5100米!一切变得冰冷.他们是如此的冷,这他们决定到达的土地.他们很累地降临在波兰,但他们安全了.他们从伦敦长途跋涉来到客场1,797公里!
原文：
On Nov.18th,1908,three men went up in a balloon（气球）.They started early in London.The headman was Augusta Gaudron,and the other two men were Tannar and Maitland.They had a big balloon and they were ready for a long way.
Soon they heard the sea.They were carrying the usual rope（绳子）,and it was hanging down from the basket of the balloon.At the end of the rope they had tied a metal box.This could hold water,or it could be empty.So they were able to change its weight（重量）.It was for use over the sea.They were also carrying some bags of sand.
After the sun rose,the balloon went higher.It went up to 3,000 metres,and the air was very cold.The water in the balloon became ice.Snow fell past the men's basket,and they could see more snow on the ground.The men tried to throw out some more sand; but it was hard.They tried to break the icy sand with their knives,but it was not easy.The work was slow and they were still falling,so they had to drop some whole bags of sand.One of them fell on an icy lake and made a black hole in the ice.
At last they pulled the box into the basket.It was still snowing; so they climbed to get away from the snow.They rose to 5,100 metres!Everything became icy.They were so cold that they decided to land.They came down in Poland heavily but safely.They had travelled 1,797 kilometers from London!