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It is true that world population is growing very fast,human's birth rate is improving from year to year,some countries such as China,India and Japan are facing unsustainable population growth.this is a very serious problem ,but we also have some ways to help us,like the education and.
The most important weapon we have to fight population growth is education.It should start at the early age ,before children even go to school.TV cartoons and children’s programs can be used to educate them.At high school,students will be taught about the problem more directly.At university,scholarships should be made available to students who wish to study further in this field.It will help them to know the population ‘explosion’ is a serious problem which they should solve it together.
Another important means of controlling population growth is to disadvantage people who have more than one or two children.We should raise the awareness of men and women regarding the issues like family planning.They also should know that if the population continue to boost there would be great demand for food,water,land and resources.It will make many shortages of food,water and other resources can lead to military conflicts.At last,we can tell them that they will living in the 2000 storey building .
It should also be possible to make contraception devices free to the public and easily obtainable.
This problem is a very difficult one to solve but but we should make every effort to do so.By addressing one problem we would be addressing the others as well.