New start,new challenge Being confronted

"New School New Start"的初中英语作文怎么写?
初一水平的,请不要告诉我怎么写,直接写一篇出来给我,

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New start!
During these days,i have some lessons given by Mr.Kirk,an enthusiastic "older boy" from Britain.He is about 50 years old or maybe older.From the lectures given,I can feel how much he is willing to help young people here and what a kind man he is.
In his class,I learn a lot more about attitudes to life,discipline to control myself,and many positive things than English itself.I should say thank you,Mr Kirk.I really appreciate your helpful lectures.
Today,he gave some suggestions to make our lives and study well-regulated.First,you should have a goal,not just a dream,because a dream comes from sleep,so it’s unrealistic.The goal ought to be clear and have a deadline,or you will have no pressure to make it.
Secondly,you need a plan of every 30 minutes in your life in order not to waste any time.He said he don’t waste time in his life,because he has no more time to waste,time to him is precious.A little profound but I like it.Finally,break the task into pieces so your plan will become more feasible,and then take them into action.
There are also some stories and words educational said by him,such as “the price to do something” .It seems like the opportunity cost in accounting field.When you do something,you have to pay the price named “price to display” ,or you can choose not to do that and spend your money on others called ”price to regret”.You have to keep balance and make a decision.
Another tip is to bring a little time notebook with you for a week long.Write down what you have done every 30 minutes everyday.One week later,analyze the notebook and you will find how much time you have waste everyday.Only once,only one week,you will know how to assign your lifetime.
Let’s call it a day.Good night,to you,to me.
自己写的,有不地道的地方 ,希望指点一二