看一下我写的这篇2005年考研英语作文能得多少分

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看一下我写的这篇2005年考研英语作文能得多少分
As is vividly depicted in the drawing,on the ground rolls an elder crouching like a ball miserably.His offsprings deem he is totally a burden that none of them are delighted to shoulder the obligation to take care of him.Aesthetic might the picture be,but it deserves that we take this social phenomenon seriously.
There will be no exceptions that we are all raised up by our parents.It is bound to be a sin if we perform as those do in the drawing.Such misbehavior might retard our culture development and more queries could be made at the eduction system.Parents' greatness is not simply shown in our given life,it is the hardness throughout the nurture that we cannot neglect and deny.How much you could give materially will be the last part focused on ,they just pray you are in good shape everyday and hope to enjoy the reunion in special days.
We might absorb a lot in what the drawing indicates.It will be an intense impact on our moral standard if we keep the problem going on.The form and shape of our society should be subject to the people.So I suggest that the governors work out acceptable provisions to gurantee the rights of the senior citizens to be taken care of and to inflict punishment upon those who don't abide by their necessary responsiblities.Local insititutions might huddle up volunteers to nurse the elders who do not have decendants to diminish their greif.In short,society must be brought into harmony by our endeavors.

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Wir haben von diesem und jenem gesprochen.
这句话哪个是主体,顺便翻译下这句话?还有von在这里的用法?
mh_fw2b_3dd_1ee61年前1
烈焰冰刀 共回答了28个问题 | 采纳率85.7%
我们谈论了这些和那些.
von etwas sprechen 表示谈论到什么
不过不好意思 什么主体?我不太懂你的问题
看一下这个题,写下解题的分析过程..谢谢
看一下这个题,写下解题的分析过程..谢谢
同学在研究超失重现象时,做了下面的实验.如图所示,一个盛水的容器底部有一小孔.静止时用手指堵住小孔不让它漏水.假设容器在下述几种运动过程中始终保持平动,且忽略空气阻力,则:(BD)
A 容器自由下落时,小孔向下漏水
B 容器自由下落时,小孔不向下漏水
C 容器向上抛出时,小孔向下漏水
D 容器向上抛出时,小孔不向下漏水
越狱犯1年前1
yangzy0924 共回答了11个问题 | 采纳率100%
正常情况下水会流出是因为上面的液体对下边的液体有压力,压力产生的原因则是水的重力,自由下落时水处于完全失重状态,对下面的水、器壁无压力,因此不会流出.向上抛和正常情况下原理一样,只不过因为超重压力更大,水柱射的更远.另:完全失重是一切和重力相关的物理现象都会消失,如摆球摆动等.
能帮我看一下,这篇作文有错吗The computer was among the greatest inventions
能帮我看一下,这篇作文有错吗
The computer was among the greatest inventions of the twentieth century.It is a very useful channel for study.
The computer has many advantages.You can use the computer to do online shopping.You can chat with Net'pals all over the world.You can buy all kinds of things on the Internet.For example,you can order food,books and CDs online.
In brief,computers have made our lives easier and more enjoyable.
Elflight1年前3
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among改为one of
并把was改成is
of the twentieth century介词改为in,
it is a very useful channel……这句话有点像中式英语,可以用It is absolutly helpful for our study.
三句you can 前可以加一些连词,最后一个可以改成you can also…
最后一句最好在句尾加上than before
麻烦帮我看一下这句英语有语法错误吗?
麻烦帮我看一下这句英语有语法错误吗?
he price list that you need has been sent with this letter.
中文意思是:您所需要的价格清单已经在本信件的附件中一并发出.这句话The price list that you need has been sent with this letter前面漏复制个“T”
heshang2731年前1
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the price list that you needed has been sent with this letter.你需要的价目表已经用这封信发出去了.
请帮我看一下这句英语有没有问题,还有,能不能想办法合成一句?
请帮我看一下这句英语有没有问题,还有,能不能想办法合成一句?
He was the first one among the industry to establish the morning meeting system,training&learning system,performance assessment system and stockholding system.The company shares employees profit through the last two system.
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helixserver 共回答了16个问题 | 采纳率81.3%
He was the first one among the industry to establish the morning meeting system,training&learning system,performance assessment system and stockholding system,through the two of which the company shares employees profit.
英语翻译求英语好的人告诉一下 如果不对,应该怎么翻译 我只有5点悬赏不够支付 就看一下怎么翻译对就行
重庆黑ff1年前1
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the lower extremities' posture when controlling foot pedal
几个数学麻烦题,有点难算,路过的好人们帮我看一下哈~感激不尽
几个数学麻烦题,有点难算,路过的好人们帮我看一下哈~感激不尽
下列说法正确的是( )
A 零的平方根和立方根是零
B 1的平方根与立方根都的关于它本身
若一个数的平方根是正负八,则这个数的立方根是( )
A 四 B 正负四 C 二 D正负二
这个较为有难度听好了:
如果一个球的体积为原来的8倍,那么它的半径为原来的多少倍?如果一个球的体积变为原来的27倍,那么它的半径变为原来的多少倍?如果球的体积变为原来的1000倍呢?变为原来的N倍呢?
(球的体积公式V=四分之三 × π × 半径的立方 )
那啥……我弄错了,第二题是“等于”不是“关于”哈哈,不过回答的那位同志,我的答案是B B 刚好都相反呢……
jerry20461年前1
waco210 共回答了22个问题 | 采纳率81.8%
下列说法正确的是(A)
A 零的平方根和立方根是零
B 1的平方根与立方根都的关于它本身
若一个数的平方根是正负八,则这个数的立方根是(A)
A 四 B 正负四 C 二 D正负二
这个较为有难度听好了:
如果一个球的体积为原来的8倍,那么它的半径为原来的多少倍?如果一个球的体积变为原来的27倍,那么它的半径变为原来的多少倍?如果球的体积变为原来的1000倍呢?变为原来的N倍呢?
答:如果一个球的体积为原来的8倍,那么它的半径为原来的2倍,如果一个球的体积变为原来的27倍,那么它的半径变为原来的3倍,如果球的体积变为原来的1000倍呢,那么它的半径变为原来的10倍.
帮我看一下,是我做错了,还是题目出错了...我觉得,如果把横轴的单位厘米改成米才对...
ch12611年前2
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图错了...没见过横轴单位厘米的
看一下这段话有语法错误吗?When I was a child,I met a boy,the boy looks li
看一下这段话有语法错误吗?
When I was a child,I met a boy,the boy looks like an egg.And...The boy is you!OK,OK,just a joke.You’re a clever and sunning boy.I hope you don’t forget me,forever and forever.
无论这段话标点错,还是语法哪里有错,只要有错,就请你们帮我改过来.只需要把这段话复制,然后把错了的改过来就OK了.
这名字应该没人用1年前4
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When I was a child, I met a boy, the boy looks like an egg. And... The boy is you! OK,OK, just a joke. You’re a clever and sunning boy. I hope you don’t forget me, forever and forever
the boy (looked) like an egg.
I hope you (won’t) forget me.
就这两个错的
看一下这篇英语小短文有没有什么细节什么的错误
看一下这篇英语小短文有没有什么细节什么的错误
I have two brothers ,they were very different,and they are not too friendly.Xiao Ming studies hard,always get good grades.But Xiao Hong only to eat ,sleep ,play of the game of interest.One day Xiao Ming was reading a book ,he drank too much water,so he wants to go to the toilet.Then Xiao Hong when using the toilet while he came suddenly open the book.As a result ,and they made up
toutousai1年前3
随便说说就好 共回答了12个问题 | 采纳率100%
I have two brothers ,they were改为 are very different,and they are not 去掉too friendly.Xiao Ming studies hard,always get改为getting good grades.But Xiao Hong only 加wants to eat ,sleep ,play 去掉of the game of interest(interesting games更好).One day Xiao Ming was reading a book ,加but he drank too much water,so he wants改为wanted to go to the toilet.Then Xiao Hong when改为was using the toilet while he came suddenly open the book.As a result ,and they made up最后一句不太理解想表达什么
简单英语句子,帮我看一下!This battlefield is consecrated to the memory o
简单英语句子,帮我看一下!
This battlefield is consecrated to the memory of the soldiers who died here.
这句话从结构上说应该是完整的吧,翻译出来怎么说?
是不是应该在 to 后加个 cherish 或是 honour 更好?还是我这样画蛇添足了?
seufarmer1年前1
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这个战场留在了长眠于此的战士们的记忆中.
be consecrated to 还有:“留给(在)……”的意思啊!
你看了我的译文,再把cherish和honour放进去再译看行不行.明显是不行的啊,不合逻辑.
仿写句子( )的( )是她( )的( )多写几句先看一下例句广袤的大地是她宽广的胸怀.还有:人生就像一杯香醇的酒,给我们
仿写句子
( )的( )是她( )的( )
多写几句
先看一下例句
广袤的大地是她宽广的胸怀.
还有:
人生就像一杯香醇的酒,给我们带来美的享受.
仿写:人生就像( ),( )
多写几句.
小孩20041年前2
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浩瀚的海洋是她温柔的怀抱.
巍峨的高山是她坚挺的脊梁.
、、、
人生就像一条欢快的河流,给我们带来前进的激情.
人生就像一颗流星,给我们带来梦的憧憬.
【悬赏200】帮忙看一下我的英语作文(急)
【悬赏200】帮忙看一下我的英语作文(急)
一共3篇作文,帮我改一下语法错误,还有读起来有点别扭的也帮忙改一下,
希望能改得好点.英国外教老师批改.
明天就要交作文了,一定要在今天完成
第一篇作文结尾好像太单纯了,
1.My family
Let me introduce my family.There is my grandfather,my father,my mother,my elder sister and me in my family.
My grandfather is 81 years old.In the past,he only lived with my grandmother.But my grandmother died 5 years ago,so he lives with us together now.My father is 47 years old.My father's hobby is going mountain climbing.He goes mountain climbing with his friends once or twice a month.And he enjoys drinking Chinese tea.There is a room for drinking tea in my house.He usually drinks Chinese tea in the room.My mother is 43 years old.She is good at cooking.She wakes up in the early morning and prepares breakfast for the family.Her food is delicious.My elder sister is 19 years old.She is living in my aunt's house in Beijing.She is studying there to enter the university.She is good at English.I am 15 years old.My hobby is playing soccer and playing computer games.
I love my family.
第二篇有点短,能加点句子就好了
2.My favorite hobby.
Let me introduce my favorite hobby.
My favorite hobby is playing computer games.It is very fun and I can get rid of stress by playing computer games.But I can only play computer games at the weekend.And I can play 2 hours a day at the weekend.My favorite computer game is "popkart".It is a racing game.I usually play computer games with my friends.Playing with friends is more interesting.In these days more and more people in my class started to play "popkart".So we always play together.
This is my favorite hobby.What fun it is!
3.My plan to do next year.
Next year I will be in the third year of middle school.I have some plans for next year.
First,I am planning to study harder next year.The third year of middle school is very important,so I will study harder to get better grades to enter a good high school.Second,I am planning to go mountain climbing for my health.Usually I don't get exercise enough.So I am going to go mountain climbing to improve my fitness.There is a small mountain in front of my house,so it is very convenient to go mountain climbing.My last plan for next year is to travel Shanghai.I don't know Shanghai very well because I just came to Shanghai this year.So I woud like to travel Shanghai to know more about this city.These are all of my plans for next year.
I hope I can achieve my plans next year.
虞美人8881年前1
eleven777 共回答了19个问题 | 采纳率89.5%
1.My family
Let me introduce my family. There are five people in my family. They are my grandfather, my father, my mother, my elder sister and me.
My grandfather is 81 years old. In the past, he only lived with my grandmother. But my grandmother died 5 years ago, so he lives with us together now. My father is 47 years old. My father's hobby is going mountain climbing. He goes mountain climbing with his friends once or twice a month. And he enjoys drinking Chinese tea. There is a room for drinking tea in my house. He usually drinks Chinese tea in the room. My mother is 43 years old. She is good at cooking. She wakes up in the early morning and prepares breakfast for the family. Her food is delicious. My elder sister is 19 years old. She is living in my aunt's house in Beijing. She is studying there to enter the university. She is good at English. I am 15 years old. My hobby is playing soccer and playing computer games.
I love my family.
2. My favorite hobby.
Let me introduce my favorite hobby.
My favorite hobby is playing computer games. It has a lot of fun and I can get rid of stress by playing computer games. But I can only play computer games at the weekend. And I can play 2 hours a day at the weekend. My favorite computer game is "popkart". It is a racing game. I usually play computer games with my friends. Playing with friends is more interesting. These days more and more people in my class have started to play "popkart". So we always play together.
The very reason I like the computer games is that it is not easy to make any progress in the game. Wheneve I made great progress in it ,I was wild with joy. And my friends also shared my happiness and I shared theirs.
This is my favorite hobby. I enjoy it very much and can relax myself by it!
3. My Plan for the Next Year.
Next year I will be in the third year of middle school. I have some plans for the next year.
First, I am planning to study harder next year. The third year of my middle school is very important, so I will study harder to get better grades to enter a good senior high school. Second, I am planning to go mountain climbing for the sake of my health. Usually I don't get enough exercise . So I am going to go mountain climbing to improve my fitness. There is a small mountain in front of my house, so it is very convenient to go mountain climbing. My last plan for the next year is to travel around Shanghai. I don't know Shanghai very well because I just came to Shanghai this year. So I woud like to travel around Shanghai to know more about this city. These are all of my plans for the next year.
I hope I can fulfill my plans next year.
(已对部分错误做了修改,并增加些内容.说实话,你的作文还是写得不错的.)
(英语牛人团一英语教师)
英语问提,大家帮忙看一下★★★★★★★★★★
英语问提,大家帮忙看一下★★★★★★★★★★
翻译中文
1It is very difficult for a person to know fast a car is traveling
世纪金花041年前4
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人们很难知道车可以跑多快
“呵呵,我不知道你的工作背景,但是下文是职位描述,你可以先看一下”怎么翻译成英文,
涩涩柳丁1年前1
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Ha-ha,I do not know your work background,but as follows is the position describes,you may look at first
谁能帮忙看一下这句话的语法?It is used to record further amounts due to th
谁能帮忙看一下这句话的语法?
It is used to record further amounts due to the company on the allotment of shares.
due to在这里是一个词组么?
LiGang198105241年前5
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不是.
意思是:其用来记录之后公司应有股份的变化.
due在这里是指company应得的.to是介词,指向company
比如:(annual leave due) to me,我(应有的年假).
高手看一下有无语法错误.Write a text about your good friend.Used these w
高手看一下有无语法错误.
Write a text about your good friend.
Used these words:hobby,like,love,enjoy.
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完善後的句子是:
Write a composition about your good friend,using these words:hobby,like,love and enjoy.
硫酸铜是无色固体吗?在看一下这个问题的回答正确吗无色固体时吸少量水变蓝,形成带五个结晶水的硫酸铜(五水硫酸铜)
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是正确的
JIP76,麻烦你帮我看一下,问:用2.5P 20K1.5(2.5MHz,Φ20mm,tgβ=1.5)斜探头,检验T=1
JIP76,麻烦你帮我看一下,
问:用2.5P 20K1.5(2.5MHz,Φ20mm,tgβ=1.5)斜探头,检验T=100mm钢板对接焊缝,扫描按深度1:1调节,探伤灵敏度为 φ3x40-14dB,探伤中发现一缺陷,深40mm,波高25dB,按GB11345-89标准B级,此缺陷如何评定?(楔中等效横波声程取为 10mm).
设x1,x2分别为孔深d1=100mm,d2=40mm时的声程:已知K=1.5,L=10mm
x1=d1(K2+1)1/2+L=100x1.8+10=190(mm),x2=d2(K2+1)1/2+L=40x1.8+10=82(mm)
两孔反射波高dB差△=30lg(x1/x2)=30lg(190/82)=11dB,∴ d2=40mm,
φ3x40孔的波高为:[H2]=[H1]+△=14+11=25dB,判废线灵敏度为φ3-2dB,即23dB,缺陷波高25dB,表明缺陷波高已位于距离波幅曲线的III区,按GB11345-89标准的规定,应评定为IV级.
1.两孔反射波高dB差△=30lg(x1/x2)=30lg(190/82)=11dB 我认为公式应该是△=40lg(x1/x2)
2.d2=40mm时,φ3x40孔的波高为:[H2]=[H1]+△=14+11=25dB,这是用的什么公式导来的呢,
谢谢你JIP76,盼复.
我看到JIP76你的回复了,还是有点不明白,
1.两孔波高又差 11dB,那这两孔是哪两孔啊?(我理解是钢板100时的孔,和发现缺陷时40的孔,),
2.φ3x40 比 φ3x40-14dB要高 14dB;两孔波高又差 11dB.这两个14DB和11DB,单个我都明白了,但与求曲线基准线φ3x40的DB,有什么关系呢,为什么就得14+11=25dB
另外,那个论坛,我怎么总上不去呢,换了几个机器在也不好使.
QIAO11MEI1年前1
指月录 共回答了16个问题 | 采纳率93.8%
1.“探伤灵敏度为 φ3x40-14dB”——说明是长横孔,既然是长横孔就是30倍的lg关系;当然为30lg(x1/x2)
2.“φ3x40孔的波高为:[H2]=[H1]+△=14+11=25dB”——用不着公式啊,其实就是告诉你这25dB是怎么来的.首先 φ3x40 比 φ3x40-14dB要高 14dB;两孔波高又差 11dB.所以就有14+11=25dB
————————————————————————————————
我今天发现他给的条件是不对的GB11345-89标准B级的话判废线灵敏度为φ3-4dB 才对!
如果是我我会这样
1.算出两孔差(11dB)
2.那么次缺陷应为φ3-3dB
3.又因B级时判废线灵敏度为φ3-4dB
4.得出缺陷波比判废线灵敏度高出1dB ,应评定为IV
请帮忙看一下我的这篇2011南京中考语文作文
请帮忙看一下我的这篇2011南京中考语文作文
题目(全命题):也是一堂语文课
内容:(200字)考南外没考上,心情低落,回家抱着幅风景画睡着了.
(250字)重点描写梦中见到的风景,是对天空、阳光和树林的描写,主题是新的黎明.
(150字)醒来后燃起斗志,知道了人生中总会有希望、有全新的明天.
(50字) 结尾,点题:这份人生感悟不仅在语文课上能获得,只要我们有一颗善于感悟的心,生活,本身也是一堂语文课.(大概是这样)
我对自己的文笔还是有一定自信的,全篇尤其是风景那块写得很美= =
只想知道这篇文章跑题吗?大概能得多少分(满分50分,40分基础分,
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42左右.描写梦中的景色不是很明显能够表现“生活也是一堂语文课”的观点.需要在生活中感悟,而你在梦中感悟有点不恰当.但是如若你醒来后激起斗志那一段,详细地能够描写出内心的变化和坚定,从害怕变成充满斗志的,并且再融入一点与“生活”有关的事情,那也是一篇很好的文章.你这样具体也不好打分.
谁帮我看一下这个作文题目?2009年最后一天文体不限
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总结2009 展望2010
英语改错 麻烦大家看一下anyhow.the enemy should have known t
英语改错 麻烦大家看一下anyhow.the enemy should have known t
英语改错 麻烦大家看一下anyhow.the enemy should have known the whole plan
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should have pp.表示应该或本应或竟然做的事儿但是实际上没做成 看你这意思应该是敌人已经知道这个计划了 所以建议去掉should
请你们用人工不要翻译器来帮我看一下有没有语法错误或是句子不通顺的,这是我的演讲稿谢谢你们.
请你们用人工不要翻译器来帮我看一下有没有语法错误或是句子不通顺的,这是我的演讲稿谢谢你们.
My family
i have a warm family.
my mother is a white collar,isverybeautiful.
my father is a boss,he not only very handsome but bery stable.
they are very hard to take care of me.
sometimes we go swimming,after swimming,we go to zhe park.
last sunday,my parents and i went to shang hai……
because,we like travelling!谢谢指教.在线等谢谢.
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卢雨娜 共回答了18个问题 | 采纳率83.3%
第三行 my mother is a white collar,and she is very beautiful.
第四行:he is not only very handsome ,but very stable
第五行改为 It is very hard for them to take care of me
第七行改为sometimes we go swimming together,after swimming,we go to the park to have fun.
倒数第二行末尾加个together
这样会比较通顺且没有语法错误
有问题欢迎追问.
会外语的进来看一下.vista怎么念?最好用拼音或字写出来.
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linuxch 共回答了14个问题 | 采纳率100%
/vist倒e/
最后这个音要发好啊,卷舌音
A distant view or prospect ,especially one seen through an opening, as between rows of buildings or trees.
深景
关于英语,有人进来看一下?关于even have的用法一I am even less lucky. I never ca
关于英语,有人进来看一下?
关于even have的用法
一I am even less lucky.
I never catch anything--not even old boots.
想知道even在此两处的的作用(强调?).但是在什么情况下要用even,什么情况下不用呢?
二Twenty people had already left.
I had sat down
上面的had是什么意思,为什么用,不用不可以吗? 我知道这是过去式,但动词已经用了过去式了,为什么还要加had?
三They will be meeting them at the station
一般将来和将来进行时分别在什么情况下用呢,上句中的be meeting改为meet意思上有什么不同呢?什么情况下用一般将来,什么情况下用将来进行时呢?
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鞠仁锡 共回答了21个问题 | 采纳率81%
一I am even less lucky.
I never catch anything--not even old boots.
even在作强调,就要用,不作强调就不用
二Twenty people had already left.
I had sat down
上面的had是没有意思,是构成过去完成时的助动词,(过去完成时的构成 :had +动词的过去分词)必须要用
三They will be meeting them at the station
一般将来 表将来要发生/打算做什么.
将来进行时 表将来在进行的动作.
我是从事英语的,乐意
一道科学题麻烦大家看一下一定给好评的
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文化苦旅 共回答了12个问题 | 采纳率91.7%
  15、(1)94.5 N (2)64张 (3)0.3
  解析:
  (1)从表中可看出,将书分成 2、4、8、16、…、2n份时,拉力F将分别增加6 N、12 N、24 N、…、3×2n N,故将书分成32份时,增加的拉力应为 48 N,故力 F=46.5 N+48 N=94.5 N.
  (2)逐页交叉时,需拉力F=190.5 N,恰好是把书分成 64份时,增加的拉力为2×48 N=96 N,需拉力 F=94.5 N+96 N=190.5 N.可见,逐页交叉刚好分为64份,即该书有64张.
  (3)两张纸之间的动摩擦因数为μ,利用第1次实验的数据,μ×G/2+μ×G+μ×3G/2=F1,解得μ=0.3.