The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few.

不可以这么用.它的过去式是outweighed

The advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
利大于弊.
make contributions to the society
对社会作贡献

in this age of technology,the use of internet is phenomenal.it had developed from a thing that exists,to a way of life,an aspect of our world.it is because of it's importance and wide use,that it arouse debates.However the advantage of the internet outweighs disadvantage.this is because of the convenience it provides,the speed of it and the fact that it makes communication easy.
firstly,it makes life much more convenient.people can see the world,complete tasks from the computer of their home.everything can be done over the internet,from bank transactions to the daily grocery shopping.it makes living easier and more convenient.as many would say,internet is stopping people from exercising and going out doors because of the convince it provides and people no longer need to go out to complete tasks.however,it is not the internet that is stopping people from exercising,it is the people them selves,it merely give people more time.which in fact helps people doing exercise.it provides people ore time to complete more tasks and thus create time to go outdoors or do exercise.
Thus,in terms on convenience,the advantage over weight the negative impact it has.
secondly,it is fast.which increase the efficiency of things.information on the internet is the most up to date.tasks completed over the internet is the fastest.yet it is not only for small things like everyday use,but also for things that are of great importance,take organ donation for example.say someone who needed a kidney immediately and someone from the other side of the world suddenly decided to donate a kidney.internet will connect the two and save a life.while without the internet this life may be lost.from this it is not hard to see the internet possess more advantages.
Lastly,internet betters our communication.it brings our world closer and help us reach out.because of it wide use,it is the best way to get across a large amount of people.take new for instance,while newspaper and TV have time of release and broadcast,the internet is immediate.in which case others may say it also give opportunity for false information to be leaked,but the thing is,false information can be leaked every where,rumors didn't only start when internet was invented.internet also better communication between people,on the internet ,on can meet people form all over the world,or simply contact a close friend.which ever it is,it increase the communication between people.many would argue that internet is stopping people form communicating with each other because it is all virtual.this is not true.in fact it better communication by far.it provide a way to communication,just like cars is a transportation,internet is the transportation of communication,it makes connection more conveniently and fast.From this we can see,that the advantage of internet out weights the disadvantage.
internet,this wonderful invention has too many advantages to list one by one.it is with no doubts that it's advantage outweighs the disadvantages.
啊哈哈,这个可是100%原创哦!我很用心写的!因为这个题目,不光是需要写正面影响,还要写反面影响,然后反驳反面,从而体现出正面outweights 反面!
希望对你有用!

前面那个翻译的结构是正确的.
手机利大于弊 可翻译为
The advantages of mobile phones outweigh their disadvantages.

1.Benefits:income,create job opportunities,cultural interactions etc...
2:drawbacks:environmental impact,crime etc...
and then make a judgement,e.g.giving that there are possibilities of all these drawbacks,international tourism allows foreigner to explore the country and facilitates local economical growth.etc

overwhelm 代替 outweigh
或：the advantages are more than the disadvantages.

对,which在这里引导一个定语从句修饰merits,如果不用which,这个句子要写成：
because of the merits outweighing the demeits.
希望我能帮助你解疑释惑.

错误已经如下用——显示
From the international perspective——From the international perspective
of foreign language——of a foreign language——of at least one foreign language
a your superiority——a necessity
through a cut- throat competition——in nowadays' fierce competition (cut throat太血腥)
Therefor——therefore
From my own experience——in my opinion更好一些
make them confused——cause them some confusion
the language points are out the range of their understanding——part of the learning process,for example, grammar studying, might be beyond their depth
adapt the language earlier.——get use to a new language as early as possible
children really need a synchronous development between native language and foreign language. ——it is good for chilren to develop their abilities to use a foreign language along with their mother tongue.
more powerful memories——stronger memories
greatly impressive in their mind——deeply ompressive to them
They will not forget even if they are old.——they will remember for a life time
Moreover, learning foreign language becomes more efficient to them. ——这句话重复上文意思,不知目的何在
Normally——Generally
They(指代不明） do not have too much pressure, but secondary school students oblige to turn their attention to other subjects, for instance, physics, biology, geography and so on.——The former do not have too much pressure, while secondary school students are boliged to turn their attention to other subjects, for instance, physics, biology, geography.
disadvantage——复数
租后一句总结有问题,因为本文并没有提到缺点,只是说了优点,故不合题意.
建议楼主多读多背课文,增强语感.错误什么的不是关键,关键是英语对你来说仍然全然陌生.

优点远大于缺点!

你是在写托福作文吧……
这句话应该是问你有根据什么判定这件事的好处大于坏处
好处坏处必须都写,但不能写两边中立的
建议你去一些机经网上看看高手们的经验,我今年年初考的,印象不深了

这的确是跟角色有关.
我也喜欢哈利波特
如果对应你补充的上下文,这句话的翻译可以再具体一些.
加上上下文的意思,这句话的翻译为：
正因为角色的成功塑造（对应It’s really about the characters）,（才使得电影这么吸引人）.

可以.过去式、过去分词都是outweighed.