Guided writing（25分）

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Guided writing（25分）
Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
人们常说“战胜自己，超越自我”。请你以“I only compete with myself”为题写一篇短文。叙述你生活或学习中的一件事，说明只有战胜了自己，超越了自己才有意义，才是真正意义上的成功。

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爱比樱花kk 共回答了21个问题 | 采纳率95.2%: In the real world, everyone wants to be splendid. Someone looks for a man of straw to catch up with, while others just compete with themselves. To me own, I certainly stand for the latter.
As a high school student, my main purpose is to get high marks and enter the dreaming university. I once locked on the number one student in our grade as my target object. But the result turned out to be far from satisfactory. Under greater and greater pressure, I just couldn’t bend my energy on studies and often made stupid mistakes. Hence, I stopped forcing myself and struggled to the very end just to be the best of me. What I required myself to achieve was not to be better than anyone else but to defeat the old one. And since then, I have performed better and made progress day by day.
So it is really useless setting unrealistic goals, since there is always someone who is either prettier or smarter than us. We might have kept chasing after others for a lifetime but finally found that we didn’t achieve anything. As the saying goes, “God only saves the man who saves himself.” and analogously, we only need to compete with ourselves. The sun will illuminate every corner of the land as long as we try to be the best of us.; 1年前

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亲,你的文章写得很好很用心!
祝诸事如意,鹏程万里!

With the arrival of modern era, love in many youngs' eyes become more and more unnecessary. In my opinion, It can't be denied that parents give us life . However（这里没有转反转的逻辑关系,因此不能用however.建议把however 改成 The pity is） , as we grown up ,the burden on our parents

became more and more heavily (这里要用形容词,不能用heavily,要用heavy) .

My family is a very ordinary family, and my parents have general jobs.Frequently, when I go to school , they go out at the same time early（ at the same time 与early在逻辑上是矛盾的.建议将此句改为,they have already gone for working）.

When they go back home ,they will prepare for supper without any rest. After supper, they was (注意单复数,这里要用were)

busy with housework（缺少冠词,要么用the housework,要么用houseworks）.

Until 11 o'clock, they have time to have a rest but too late.（逻辑上不对.翻译成中文就是“直到11点,他们有时间休息,但是太晚了”.建议改为,They have no time to relax until 11 p.m.,but this time is really too late）

I wants（我是第一人称,直接说want,不能说wants）

to do something for them.（上一句和下一句之间要有过渡的逻辑词,建议加一个however在这里）I'm afraid I can't do complex things.

Nevertheless,simple things can be competent.I learnt how to tidy the rooms, （缺少必句内链接词,建议加上 and to）buy food to cook and especially take care of myself.

Plan is perfect but It's difficult to move（move不能用来表示执行计划,建议此处用deliver.to deliver the plan是固定搭配） .

But with a period of time to adjust myself,I found the skills to deal with（缺少a.a variety of 是固定搭配） variety of problems.

I gain（时态要一致.亲前面用一般过去式,这里就要一致.用gained） a lot and I 'm proud of myself.

The happy expression on their face（单复数要一致.这里有两张脸,用faces） encourage（encouraged） me .

Parents taught us grow and love（句子成分不完整.shi taught us how to grow up and to love）,

what we should do most is feel grateful( 1. most在这里的适用错误, 建议删除. 2.缺少动词.这里要用 what we should do is to feel grateful ).

We should do what we can do now not （把not换成instead of）plan what to do in the future.

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